Modern Day Goldilocks

allonblack

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OOC: I had this idea for a thread a long time ago and I'm posting it again to see if I can get any interest. I've got an idea for a story that can be described as a modern day Goldilocks with a twist. It's about a woman who one night has a few too many and drunk dials many of her ex-boyfriends. Only one comes over and gives her pleasure that she has never even imagined. In the morning he's gone and all she has in the memory of the amazing orgasms she had last night. The men were drunk too so their recollection of the night is hazy as well. But she can't shake the feeling of bewilderment and has to know it was. So she calls them all offers them all one last booty call so she can see who was too fast, too slow, and who was just right. The story can involve the backstory of how she met each man, how long they dated, and why they broke up. It's not quite a gangbang since she will only be with one man at a time. If any female is interested in starting this thread I'd like to play one of the males. She can decide how many men would be enough.
 
Goldlilocks, just for the whole "too hot, too cold, just right"/too big, too small, just right reference.
 
cool, do you have anyone to play Goldilocks? Id do it :)
 
Sure! I will take it, how old should I make her?
 
Name: Goldilocks
Age: 20

Personality: She has a very good and kind heart, she does good where ever she can, everyone loves her giving ways because she never asked anything for herself, she always did things for others, no matter who they were. Growing up with love she spreads the joy.

Description: Of course she has blond hair, that goes to about her shoulders, she has straight hair but she loves to make it curly she can do anything with her hair and she has beautiful green eyes, they are very deep. She has a very nice body, she is about 130 pounds, 5'6 in height. She has a perfect body, every inch of her beautiful.

History: No one knows much about her but she lives alone in the woods, she loves spending all the time alone so she can do "Other" things so no one has to see her do them. She has a sweet personality but she is different in bed. She lived off money that she got from her family since she doesn't spend very much time with her family.
 
OOC: I like what you posted so far. I'll go ahead and post my character and kind of a backstory about how they met. But if you think the story should go in a different direction, let me know, I'm open to suggestions.

Name and Info: Jim Thompson 5 foot 10, 180 pounds. Dark brown hair and eyes.

IC:
Jim got out of his car shaking his head and swearing softly. "What a crappy birthday present," he said crumbling the coupon in his hand.

For his twenty fifth birthday his friends had pooled together and gotten him a hunting weekend at the Happy Hunting Lodge. Jim had never hunted a day in his life and doubted he would leave the lodge. He hoped that when he got home all his friends would jump out and yell surprise, arms full of gifts.

The lodge was nothing more than a bar and his room was nothing more than a tiny three room cabin stuck behind the lodge. He was too restless to sit in the bar and drink so he decided to go for a walk. That was when his life changed forever.

After only about ten minutes he couldn't believe his eyes when he saw a beautiful young woman swimming naked in the pond. Jim did his best not to be seen but wearing bright orange hunting clothes didn't make it easy to hide. He noticed what appeared to be her clothing hanging on a line tied between two trees. Through a grove of trees, Jim was able to squint enough to see what appeared to be a cabin, which he assumed to be hers. He searched the trees for any no trespassing signs, afraid that perhaps he had stumbled onto private property.

Something was off, there was no way a beautiful young woman like that would voluntarily live alone in the woods. Jim never did know when to leave. The scar on his cheek from a barfight was proof of that. So he decided to find out more about this mystery woman. If nothing else she would provide him with entertainment for the weekend.
 
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(OOC: I will make sure to let you know)

IC: She hummed to herself as Goldie put a robe on her, she never did have trespassing signs so anyone was free as long as she didn't hurt her in any way. She went back into her home for a moment, then about 5 minutes later she came out full dressed since it was chilly out, she sat down on the porch and took a book out. Her blond hair was drying as she sighed a bit, she had a feeling she was being watched, she looked up scanning the area with her eyes, waiting for something to happen.
 
Jim watched the woman exit the pond and get dressed. He followed her back to her cabin, tiptoeing on the sticks and branches on the forest floor. She was sitting on the porch when he approached her.

He made a point to clear his throat as he walked. He showed her his hands were empty, despite the fact he was dressed as a hunter. "Excuse me, I seem to be lost. I'm staying at the Happy Hunting Lodge. I went out for a walk and got twisted around. I saw a cabin and thought I was back at mine, until I saw you." He smiled nervously.
 
She looked up hearing him clear his throat and smiled "No need to be nervous sir I don't bite" She giggled and stood up. "You are far from that place, ive been around there myself before. I live out here in the middle because really I hate town life, I feel one with nature out here" She walked up to him. "Whats your name? My name is Goldilocks but everyone calls me Goldie"
 
"Goldilocks?" Jim asked with a snorting chuckle. "Sorry, it's just a little funny to find someone named Goldilocks that lives in a cabin in the woods. But then again I'm sure you've heard those jokes before. My name is Jim. I'm here for the weekend, thanks to my friends and their gift of a hunting weekend. Not my first choice, but I figure I should make the most of it. So if you'll kindly tell me how to get back, I'll be on my way and let you get back to your book."

The woman was gorgeous so Jim was in no hurry to leave. She didn't seem threatened by him, but nevertheless it seemed polite to offer to leave without being told.
 
She laughed "Yeah im used to the jokes on my name but its alright, I think my mother was drunk when she named me so its ok" She giggled and she smelt rain. "Hmm its going to rain, would you like to come inside for a little bit so you don't get caught in the rain" She said kindly.
 
"Well that's nice of you, but I'd hate impose." Jim mentally retraced the words in his head.

He was tempted to tell himself to shut up, after all a gorgeous woman was inviting him in to her home and he was refusing. A few droplets of rain began splashing on his shoulders as he said, "On second thought, I'll take you up on that offer."

Inside her cabin was more modern than Jim expected. After all she was a young woman in the twentyfirst century so she had her immenities such as television and a computer.

Jim took a seat at the dining room table and did his best not to stare at Goldie.
 
She smiled shutting the door "What suspected to see me in the 19th century?" She giggled some "Your really sweet you know, your more then welcome to stay because I have no friends, no family and well im alone here, I go out every single day but with no friends its hard to really keep going out" She said kindly. "I even have cable internet if you can believe it all the way out here"
 
"Well I've got to admit I'm a little jealous. I'm an apartment dweller from the city so tonight will be the first night I sleep without hearing my upstairs neighbor playing rap music or arguing with his girlfriend."

Jim glanced around at the pictures on the wall and didn't see any of young men so he assumed she was single. Still, suspicions arose within him. She could be in the witness protection program or something along those lines. Yet, Jim was going to enjoy himself. Even if he just sipped coffee with her until the rain stopped, he'd at least have some companionship for the weekend.

Gunshots crackled in the distance. "You know what? I don't even know animal is in season now, that's how much I know about hunting. I think my friends put down a lot on this weekend, but I would've preferred they took me to a strip club instead," he said with a laugh.
 
She smiled some "Yeah I only got money and live here because my parents moved away, im alone and very single, so when someone comes up here im happy to have the company since I never get visitors" She looked at him kindly. "I am just very happy your here" She grinned "What would you like to drink? I have it all" She grinned.
 
The way she emphasized very single got Jim's attention. He'd been single for a few months and wasn't really looking to date, but if the girl was rich and didn't want his money he wouldn't mind spending time with her.

"I'd be happy with a beer, but you look a little young to drink. I mean that as a compliment of course," he said nervously.

"Thanks for being so welcoming. I probably should confess I saw you in the pond earlier. I wasn't spying. I was just surprised to see someone like you out there. Don't worry I didn't see anything." He tried to hide his blush, his telltale sign of lying.

He cleared his throat and continued, "So if you're alone up here, what do you do for fun?"
 
She smiled "Yeah I know, im old enough to drink tho" She went over and grabbed two beers, she gave him one and sat down she opened it up and took a sip. "I love my computer, I play games or even log on the internet to chats I love doing that"
 
Jim slowly sipped his beer. "Internet chats, eh? Well you've got a real life person to chat to now. This whole weekend feels like a camping trip I had in high school. All that's missing are the sleeping bags and giggling girls playing truth or dare."
 
She smiled "Yeah I remember high school and all the crap that we did, except we went to a city over night and I loved it, nothing like a camping trip since I hate camping, unless someone I love is with me"
 
Jim spied a webcam perched atop of her monitor. He wondered if maybe she did more than chat with the people she talked to online. He shook those thoughts of his head, realizing he'd watched way too many late night shows on Cinemax.

"I can relate. I wouldn't bring a date hunting, but it'd be nice if someone would've came with me. But they all said they couldn't because it cost too much. I don't know why the lodge is so expensive, it's a dump."
 
She nodded "Yeah, when im online I talk to a lot of pigs, always asking me to strip for them, im like hell no, I use it to take pictures with since im to cheap to buy a camrea" She laughed some and relaxed. "Ive never stripped for any living man, only one that seems me nude is mother nature"
 
"Mother nature and me," Jim said chuckling. "But seriously I didn't see anything. If you don't mind, how about you take a picture with me so I can email it to my buddies. It'll be great to see the looks on their faces when they try to figure out who you are."
 
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