Mistress of the Water

[Stillwater22]

Hello all,

My first story was published and I just wanted to post the link here in case anyone was interested in reading it. If you have a chance check it out. I would appreciate any feedback.

Thank you so much..

https://literotica.com/s/mistress-of-the-water-ch-01

 

[Handley_Page]

Hello all,

My first story was published and I just wanted to post the link here in case anyone was interested in reading it. If you have a chance check it out. I would appreciate any feedback.

Thank you so much..

https://literotica.com/s/mistress-of-the-water-ch-01

Well Done; and Welcome to the chaos that is the AH.
Not bad, for a first attempt.

 

[Stillwater22]

Feedback

Well Done; and Welcome to the chaos that is the AH.
Not bad, for a first attempt.

Thank you for the welcome.

Thanks for taking the time to read my story. I really appreciate it. I value everyone's opinion whether it's good or bad. I know I still have alot to improve upon in my writing.

As the story continues each chapter reveals a little more about the person telling the story and about the journey that's in store for him on the island.

So far it's been a lot of fun to write.

Thanks again for the feedback.