Mistaken Identity

[Guest]

I've a new story I'm working on that is loosely based upon a RW (real world) female friend's vacation spent in Hawaii. With much embellishment, I shall tell the tale of an endless pursuit of pleasure in paradise, something my RW aquaintance would never openly seek or admit to even thinking about.
A large grin formed on my face as I was scripting this out wondering as just how the character might find herself in all these erotic misadventures when it suddenly became crystal clear what the answer was. My dear friend Susie, well at least her literary counterpart, bears an amazing resemblance to a popular adult video actress and at just about every point of her vacation, someone mistakenly assumes that is who she is.
Just envision the doors (and legs) opened to her under this unintentional guise as the popular porn star, Ms. Siouxsie X, the undisputed queen of small screen comesluts.
What I am uncertain of is should our heroine, Susie, after her many carnal adventures with the adult actress' fans and enjoying all the perks given in her stead, meet up with the actual Ms.Siouxsie somewhere in the storyline.
I can only imagine the possibilities of what that 'reunion' may present to explore, let alone delving into possible mystery of are the two actualy twins and where do they go from this point on.....
Suggestions on secondary characters, situations and just about anything else that may enhance this work in progress are encouraged and very welcome.

 

[Puppi]

Let me get this straight...

Are you writing your story on this thread as you go along? Or did you just give us a very descriptive "idea" of what you're wanting in your story? Also, how could that pic be of the same "prudish" woman you are friends with?


~Puppi

 

[Akito01]

I take it the pic is of the adult star he's referring to, not the girlfriend (who more or less looks like her).

The only conceptual problem I have with the story is simply the fact that adult stars are not celebrities -outside of a select audience, not many in the general community would have any idea who these people are.

I actually would be more intruiged if the woman she looked like was the SINGER Susie Sioux.

 

[Guest]

Chyoo before Literotica

Chances are I'll be posting the story under development at Chyoo (www.chyoo.com) initialy so I can present it a few threads at a time and get more realtime feedback-suggestions from those who choose to submit such. When the final draft of the first installment has been pooled from what accumulates at Chyoo, my plans are to re-introduce it here in Lit as a more polished, complete story, hopefully becoming a serial adventure should that be warranted.
In regards to the photo posted, that does represent the adult film star mentioned but clothes (or lack thereof) sometimes make the woman and can easily reveal-concel their attributes from casual observers. For the record, my friend Susie is built like the proverbial masonary outhouse, her RW 38DDs are quite distracting and on occasion she does place them on display in summer clothes or evening wear.
I'm in the Midwest and adult fim stars have been spotted locally at the Indianapolis 500, the Brickyard 400, even the Kentucky Derby and let's not to overlook more than a few sightings at NBA games. Actualy, many are even recognized outside their medium more widely as they are seen in the company of rock musicians (and cameoing in their videos), sports figures and of course, the almost obligatory appearances at 'gentleman's clubs' and adult entertainment conventions.
Lastly, which may amuse most of you reading this, my RW friend is aware of the stories I write based upon her and actualy contributes, critiques and comments on what adventures her literary counterpart experiences.

P.S., the attached pic is a hint of her adventures to come.....

 

[lexium]

just my opinion

If you plan to post the stories for readers on lit, you may find a lot of help, else...think about it. This is a Lit. forum.

As far as your story goes. Maybe the guy who spots her conviences others that she is the adult film star, showing them a video tape cover, etc.

As the real star shows up, she overhear men talking about the imposter. The real star go to investigate.

That's my two cents worth.

I hope it help you focus your idea.

 

[Guest]

Plot thickens

Thanks for the idea, lexium, it's something quite close to a thought rattling about in my own head. As with any other famous person, adult film stars have their devoted fans as well and subsequent rumor mills are driven by them much like any other celebrity's.
In this case the buzz in an internet chatroom is that Siouxsie X is taking a 'time-out' from her career and personal appearances and may be vacationing incognito in Hawaii.
When our heroine, Susie turns up at O'Hare to check-in for her flight to the islands, the man at the ticket counter, a longtime fan of Ms.X, mistakes our girl for his idol, then after upgrading Susie's coach class fare to the 'VIP' section of the flight, he e-mails her web based fan group stating that Siouxsie X is indeed bound for Hawaii and sets into motion the chain of events that are the basis for our story.
A funny thing I should mention is that the RW (real world) Susie whom the charter is loosely based upon, has made several suggestions on this story as well as previous stories written about the adventures of her literary counterpart and she honestly seems to gather quite a bit of amusement from them......