A while back I requested feedback for a story called Mirror of Love. It had mixed reviews from the group here - too sentimental, too unrealistic. Hopefully I have improved with part 2.
Please send me your suggestions and comments.
Also, while I do not live and die for votes, they are indeed a form of feedback and are much appreciated.
Mirror of Love Part 2
Please send me your suggestions and comments.
Also, while I do not live and die for votes, they are indeed a form of feedback and are much appreciated.
Mirror of Love Part 2
