mind control

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would anyone be interested in a mind control type story??
i know it'd be kinda boring if only one person has 'the power' so it should be ok for more than one person to be in control, but someone needs to be controlled as well, so just play along k
 
all these years i have had a charmed life - as in i get everything i want, and i mean everything.

now that i've matured, i begin to have interest in the opposite sex. in class, i will always check out the girls with the nice asses, big breasts, or sexy legs.

but one day, an incident proved that there was more than meets the eye.

i was walking home one day when i passed by a park. there seated on the bench was a lady in her early twenties, and she was hot! She had on a halter top which was stretched very tightly across her chest because of her large breasts. because of the thin material, i could make out her white cotton bra underneath. she also had on a skirt which was revealing more flesh than what was needed to keep her safe from perverts (like me). in her seated position and her legs crossed, he skirt roder up to high up her thighs. wow! i thought, if only i could get a good look at her breasts. what happened next was totally shocking.

the lady looked up from the book she was reading, as if someone had called out to her. then she put the book down, stood up and walked towards me. then, she slipped both her thumbs to the bottom of her halter and pulled it over her head! her large 38D's jiggled when released and almost popped out of her undersized cotton bra. then she bent forward, bringing her breasts right up to my face and said ' want a better look?' i stood there dumbfounded as i stared at the gorgeous breasts the lady was presenting to me. not waiting for an answer, she reached behind for the bra strap and was proceeding to remove her bra when i recollected my senses. realising that this was way too weird, i screamed no and started running home, not turning around to see the lady's reactions.

when i reached home, there wasn't anybody home - my mom was out shopping, my elder sister still at cheerleading practise and my dad still at work.

after settling down, i discovered that the lady back at the park was doing exactly what i had wanted her to do, secretly of course. but the image of her glorious breasts soon took over and i chucked that thought into the back of my mind as i proceeded to my room to jack my boner off to the image of her breasts.


[Edited by mfucker on 06-25-2000 at 07:13 AM]
 
OOC: Anyone interested in playing the male lead? I'll be glad to play any other female characters.
 
Jeremy

The next morning felt as if years had gone by, as if I was a new personality. I woke early on, even before sunrise. Did my powers still work? I decided to give it a try. So I just took a shower, dressed and went out to test.
It took me just a few minutes to discover what I forgot: breakfast. I sighed to myself, then entered a local fast food forgery. It was empty at this hour just before dawn. Or nearly empty. There was one waitress behind her desk, bored and maybe tired, but very good looking.
I hesitated for a moment, then decided to give it a try. What had I to loose? Okay, breakfast. So what? If my plan worked out, breakfast would be my least problem. So I vigorously went to the desk.
 
sierrahughes said:
I merely glanced up. It was a young kid, probably barely eighteen. I wondered what he was doing so early in the restaurant, then I wondered the same thing myself.

I yawned, and went back to reading the magazine I had under the counter.
She was very nice! Coming closer I could see her blond hair clearly, her nice tits... but not clear enough for my taste. But suddenly I felt a bit unsure... Too late, I scolded myself. Do it!
"Miss, I'd like to have some milk..." Hm. That wouldn't do it.
"Very fresh milk, please. Could you provide it? Please open your blouse and let me see." He held his breath. What would she do? Did his ability work? Had he dreamed yesterday???

OOC: hmmm... nice picture...
 
Cindy

OOC: Just to make this a bit more interesting, we will explore the limitations (and also the lack of) of his mind control.

I walked over, wanting to throw him the regular menu, but he spoke first, placing his orders.

"Very fresh milk, please. Could you provide it? Please open your blouse and let me see."

Hmmm.

"I don't have any fresh milk under my blouse, but I do have some in the fridge round the back. Shall I get that for you?" I replied, totally void of any anger in response to the obvious harrassment.

And the best part was, I did not even notice anything peculiar about his request.
 
sierrahughes said:
OOC: Just to make this a bit more interesting, we will explore the limitations (and also the lack of) of his mind control.

I walked over, wanting to throw him the regular menu, but he spoke first, placing his orders.



Hmmm.

"I don't have any fresh milk under my blouse, but I do have some in the fridge round the back. Shall I get that for you?" I replied, totally void of any anger in response to the obvious harrassment.

And the best part was, I did not even notice anything peculiar about his request.
What was that? Ready to sink into the ground for shame, I finally did notice she was not angry or something, she reacted as if used to such requests!
"Ehhm, eh, yes, I mean, no. Let me just check this out myself, will you? Please open your blouse." Please? "I mean, open your blouse."
 
Cindy

"Ehhm, eh, yes, I mean, no. Let me just check this out myself, will you? Please open your blouse. Please? I mean, open your blouse."

"Well if you say so," I scowled slightly. He was doubting my judgement on such a simple matter, but he seemed persistent enough.

I undid the buttons on the front of my pink uniform, as if I was merely undressing to change.

"As you have requested," I announced, holding open the front of my blouse.
 
sierrahughes said:
"Well if you say so," I scowled slightly. He was doubting my judgement on such a simple matter, but he seemed persistent enough.

I undid the buttons on the front of my pink uniform, as if I was merely undressing to change.

"As you have requested," I announced, holding open the front of my blouse.
I can't believe it! It works! Oh, what a view! Immediatly I got a hard on. Would she notice? Ah, be damned, who cares. She's gorgeous!
But how did it work in details? She didn't react immediatly. Commanding works, asking not? I guess I'll have to try it...
"May I ask how many bo... men have checked out your breasts?"
 
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Cindy

OOC: I'm writing such that I do - but I can always edit it ;)

"May I ask how many bo... men have checked out your breasts?"

I laughed at his question, covering my mouth in a feminine fashion as I did so. All this while, my blouse still hanging open, leaving a view of my breasts encased in a white cotton bra.

"Well, I'm not sure to be honest," I replied, blushing somewhat. "You are so direct, stud." I found myself flirting with him, as I do with most of my male customers.

"Why do you ask?" I added.
 
sierrahughes said:
OOC: I'm writing such that I do - but I can always edit it ;)



I laughed at his question, covering my mouth in a feminine fashion as I did so. All this while, my blouse still hanging open, leaving a view of my breasts encased in a white cotton bra.

"Well, I'm not sure to be honest," I replied, blushing somewhat. "You are so direct, stud." I found myself flirting with him, as I do with most of my male customers.

"Why do you ask?" I added.
Hmm, similar reaction to the last one. Not slapping me, but also not finding anything out of the normal. Interesting...
"Just curious. They are nice" And they are! To look at them, to fondle them...
Even as my cock suggested other things, my curiosity about the limits of my powers got the better of me. I simple had to try asking with a reason:
"Please open the bra, will you? I want to see your beautiful tits."
 
Cindy

"Please open the bra, will you? I want to see your beautiful tits."

"Why of course," I reached behind my back, unclasping my bra in a single motion. Just as I was about to slide the straps of my bra off my shoulders though, I leaned forward into his ear.

"Try not to use the word tits in public," I blushed. "My boyfriend only calls them that when we are fucking."
 
sierrahughes said:
"Why of course," I reached behind my back, unclasping my bra in a single motion. Just as I was about to slide the straps of my bra off my shoulders though, I leaned forward into his ear.

"Try not to use the word tits in public," I blushed. "My boyfriend only calls them that when we are fucking."
It works! There she is, the most gorgeous waitress I've ever seen, merely seconds away from removing her bra and presenting her tits... that is, breasts.
"Yes, yes" I said urgently, then added, as an afterthought: "Until I'm fucking you myself, I won't call your tits tits" I smiled. How would she react to this one?
"Now continue, please, show your ti... your breasts."
I smiled again. Her boyfriend? And blushing? She's so cute! Stripping in front of a stranger and thinking of her boyfriend!
"Do it slowly, please" I said, wanting to enjoy every second of it. "Let me enjoy".
 
Cindy

OOC: That's a lot of commands in a spree! :D

I found myself hesitating, if only for a moment. When I shook it out of my head, I looked at the young man in a new light. He looked hot, almost delicious to eat. And there was that unmistakable erection at the front of his pants. I knew then that he wanted to fuck me.

And my pussy start to grow wet just thinking about that.

Putting one hand on his shoulder, I swung myself round so that I ended up straddling his waist, as I sat on his lap, facing him.

"Of course I will let you enjoy this. And what will you call them, when you are fucking me?" I said, as I let one of my nipples peek out from under the cotton fabric. His erection was growing under me, as I felt it throbbing against the cheeks of my ass.
 
sierrahughes said:
OOC: That's a lot of commands in a spree! :D

I found myself hesitating, if only for a moment. When I shook it out of my head, I looked at the young man in a new light. He looked hot, almost delicious to eat. And there was that unmistakable erection at the front of his pants. I knew then that he wanted to fuck me.

And my pussy start to grow wet just thinking about that.

Putting one hand on his shoulder, I swung myself round so that I ended up straddling his waist, as I sat on his lap, facing him.

"Of course I will let you enjoy this. And what will you call them, when you are fucking me?" I said, as I let one of my nipples peek out from under the cotton fabric. His erection was growing under me, as I felt it throbbing against the cheeks of my ass.
OOC: Actually only one, but a little more detailed!

When she came to me, I feared I had gone to far. That was it... but then... she climbed on my lap! On top of my erection! Will that break the spell? Is it all over now?
"Of course I will let you enjoy this. And what will you call them, when you are fucking me?" she said. What? Call what? Then she showed one of her nipples, and I immediatly knew what she was talking about again. She was gorgeous!
"Fucking you, I'll call them ..." What indeed?
"You tell me. Tell me how I should call your ti... breasts! What name do you like? What name for them makes you hot? Tell me!"
The thought alone led my cock grow even more, encouraged him to find his way in her panties on his own. Fucking! He had planned this for later on, but his command must have been misunderstood... So what? She was so hot... He wondered briefly if she would continue stripping her bra, or if his last order would counter or postpone it. In anticipation of more, he licked his lips.
 
Cindy

"Well I haven't really given it much thought." I said, pausing in my little striptease. Then my brows furrowed.

"Hmmm..." My mind started to wander, leaving the previous task at hand, undone.
 
Jeremy

sierrahughes said:
"Well I haven't really given it much thought." I said, pausing in my little striptease. Then my brows furrowed.

"Hmmm..." My mind started to wander, leaving the previous task at hand, undone.
Drat, letting her think wasn't a good idea at all. And that just seconds before the big moment! Okay, compose yourself... Order and reason. Order and reason. One after a time. If she wasn't so very hot! But what am I thinking? It's good she's hot of course, even if it makes thinking difficult! I got to circumvent the word tits...
"Okay, take off your bra, it's restricting. Do it slowly, so I can enjoy it." Sweat was building on my forehead in anticipation...
 
Cindy

"Okay, take off your bra, it's restricting. Do it slowly, so I can enjoy it."

"Of course," I said in a husky voice. My boyfriend loved it when I teased him as I took my bra off slowly.

Putting my left arm across my chest, I slip one strap off my shoulder, then the other. Sliding my arm away, I now cup my breasts, holding the fabric of the bra.

I pulled it down slowly, but not quite ready to reveal my full breast. I push my breasts together, squeezing them as the tip of my right nipple peeked out once more.

And then finally, I pull my bra away, my breasts falling free with a light jiggle, my nipples inviting.
 
sierrahughes said:
"Of course," I said in a husky voice. My boyfriend loved it when I teased him as I took my bra off slowly.

Putting my left arm across my chest, I slip one strap off my shoulder, then the other. Sliding my arm away, I now cup my breasts, holding the fabric of the bra.

I pulled it down slowly, but not quite ready to reveal my full breast. I push my breasts together, squeezing them as the tip of my right nipple peeked out once more.

And then finally, I pull my bra away, my breasts falling free with a light jiggle, my nipples inviting.
As her bra felt, my chin did also. With gaping mouth I saw the most goergeaous pair of tits I've ever seen in my whole life. Yes, the pair from yesterday was bigger, but this in front of my eyes was presented so sensually I could barely control myself and started to precum in my trouser. Oh, I had loved to touch them, feel them, caress them, but I feared that may have broken the spell. She was so gorgeous.
I started to fumble with my zip to free my restrained cock, but didn't get it open, my hands shaking.
"Damn! I can't get it open!" I sweared, "Can't you help me?" Catching myself again, I nearly apologized for my rude remark. Excuses were out of question, of course, but would his question bring results? I reluctantly removed my shaking fingers from my crotch, so she would have room to assist me...
 
Jeremy

sierrahughes said:
"Sure! What would you like me to help you with?" I asked.

"And did you enjoy it?"
What? Not the result I liked to get. This thing proves to be difficult... I felt anger rising in me, loosing my patience.
"Young man! What are you doing?" someone yelled through the "restaurant". "That's not... that's not..."
I turned around and saw an older couple had entered the McDonalds. They were dressed as if they'd join the opera, in spite of the early hour. Just what I needed now.
"Get lost!" I yelled at them. Immediatly they looked confused at each other and at their surroundings, thereby babbling and working themselves into a panic. Sighing, I corrected myself.
"Be still, both of you. You, man, sit down. You, woman, give him a blowjob."
Not watching if his orders were being followed, Jeremy turned back to Cindy, calmer now.
"Okay, step by step. Yes, I enjoyed your show. You are very talented. Now, please open my zipper and take my shaft in your hands. Do that things with my cock that you do with your boyfriend's cock. Have some fun."
He proud with his exact commands he had given this time, speaking a bit louder at the end to drown out the slurping sounds and stiffled moans from behind him.
But then he hesitated. What exactly did she do with her boyfriends cock? Nothing? Something weird? He was bound to find out soon...
 
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