Milf coaxed into sleeping with son's friend.

[Gamina]

So I am writing a story about a freshly divorced woman who gets in over her head hosting a party for some of her son's friends. 3 of them. I am now at the point that after a steamy round of 7min in heaven, the alpha of the group, came into her panties. And I am wondering if this is a good place to stop. Keep going but only with that one guy. Or completely shut her out? What do you guys prefere to read?

 

[silversword]

Sometimes less is more

I think a lot of lit stories go to far, trying to include all manner of things in one story.

It's perfectly plausible that after she lets her sons friend cum in her panties that reality might hit home. She panics a bit and backs down. It doesn't necessarily have to shut the story down, a sequel or further chapters could follow on. She hosts another party and builds herself up to going further or maybe seducing one of the other friends.

 

[UtilityCurve]

So I am writing a story about a freshly divorced woman who gets in over her head hosting a party for some of her son's friends. 3 of them. I am now at the point that after a steamy round of 7min in heaven, the alpha of the group, came into her panties. And I am wondering if this is a good place to stop. Keep going but only with that one guy. Or completely shut her out? What do you guys prefere to read?

I'm going to second @silversword's answer.

There is no wrong place to cut off an encounter. (Okay, if you stop when he has reached the point of no return and his release, maybe then.

I would happily read a mom's story about her son's friend(s) doing nothing more than ejaculating in her panties. I know from experience that there's a specially erotic dimension to that for girls/women. Not every story has to be as mind-blowing for the male reader as the female. I will admit though, that from the male side, it's infinitely hotter if the girl/woman/mom is wearing them when she receives his compliment (and keeps them on).

 

[Gamina]

Yes she has them on when he cums and has her get out of the closet with them.

But glad to hear I was not unwarranted to think about waiting a while for full blown action. Might just have to make it a several part story

 

[ScrappyPaperDoodler]

Something I learnt from experience is that it's better to take your time. Readers will stick with you if you slow things down, and that doesn't necessarily mean you need to keep it to just the one guy. But, it's always good to first establish the one-on-one before introducing new partners/pairing or even having a full-on orgy with her and the three guys. By the way, I'd love to read the latter... Surprisingly, there aren't lots of stories like that on Lit (that I've found).

If you need more than around 18k words (about 5 Lit pages) to get there, I'd say split it into parts. (But you'd know best!)

 

[Gamina]

Great will wrap up the first part and polish it a little this weekend and hopefully someone on the editing forum picks it up so I can submit it.

 

[PattieD]

Great will wrap up the first part and polish it a little this weekend and hopefully someone on the editing forum picks it up so I can submit it.

You just hit upon the key phrase
"first part"
Attach those words to the title and you have enabled yourself to revisit this within another vignette while creating both a cliffhanger and anticipation for your readers

 

[jaF0]

How many words so far?

End chapter? Cliff hanger?

 

[jaF0]

Possible inspiration?

https://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=94145299&postcount=2589

 

[ultramannc]

So I am writing a story about a freshly divorced woman who gets in over her head hosting a party for some of her son's friends. 3 of them. I am now at the point that after a steamy round of 7min in heaven, the alpha of the group, came into her panties. And I am wondering if this is a good place to stop. Keep going but only with that one guy. Or completely shut her out? What do you guys prefere to read?

Continue on. Allow her to clean up his excitement

 

[DCO_65]

Not a guy, but...

I like stories (or chapters of a long story) to have a distinctive beginning, middle, and end. So my thought would be...

*Mom and Alpha Dawg (your original story).

*Either Mom and Alpha Dawg did it front of Two and Three or he tells them. Two and Three start showing up at mom's taking care of all her non-erotic needs. Mom ends up playing with them just like she did Alpha.

*Alpha being the alpha takes the next logical step.

*Two and Three follow alpha.

*Son has a conversation with mom about the fact that she is boinking his three best friends. "You're my mom, I should cum first!" Being Literotica this conversation leads to sex.

*The four guys all know, and continue, but as a fivesome. Mom's smile-o-meter is pegged at 11.

*They start a business together "College Hunks moving your furniture about town." Mom books orders (mostly from other MILFs her hot MILF attorney gives her the names of) and drives the moving van while the four guys bubble wrap, pack, and provide services of a slightly more personal nature to clients.

 

[centrum1000]

So I am writing a story about a freshly divorced woman who gets in over her head hosting a party for some of her son's friends. 3 of them. I am now at the point that after a steamy round of 7min in heaven, the alpha of the group, came into her panties. And I am wondering if this is a good place to stop. Keep going but only with that one guy. Or completely shut her out? What do you guys prefere to read?

This is a great story idea, and I look forward to reading it ;-)

A few thoughts:

1) agree with the others that you don’t want to move too fast. Going right from loving mom to a teen gangbang isn’t great story telling
2) you can certainly make this a very long, multi-part story. But hard to advise without knowing how long it took you to get to him cumming in her panties
3) after she comes out of the closet she is back at the party feeling his cum pressed against her pussy under her dress. It’s a constant reminder of how naughty she’s been and though she worries about having gone too far she does need some relief
4) does Alpha whisper to another one of the guys about what he did? The friend doesn’t believe him but decides to find out for himself if it’s true. This beginning his mission to seduce his friends mom at the party.
5) is she drinking? Is she drinking too much? Are the guys mixing her drinks, or encouraging her to have a top off?
6) maybe she excuses herself to regroup, Alphas friend follows her and sneaks into her room. He tries to kiss her but she backs off. He’s dejected and asks her why she likes Alpha but not him. She realizes that Alpha told his friend that happened. She is angry at first but can still feel Alphas cum against her body, slowly dripping down her leg and she realizes that she has another young cock right in front of her. Not ready to go too far she steps forward and pulls him pants down before pushing him down into the edge of her bed. She gets on her knees and jerks him off. He shoots his load, most of it landing on her arm and hand. He watch’s as his friends mom licks his cum up before telling him to get back to the party.
7) it’s a long night and there are still several more guys to go. The big question is whether the son gets to spend time with mom…

 

[Abbafan]

So I am writing a story about a freshly divorced woman who gets in over her head hosting a party for some of her son's friends. 3 of them. I am now at the point that after a steamy round of 7min in heaven, the alpha of the group, came into her panties. And I am wondering if this is a good place to stop. Keep going but only with that one guy. Or completely shut her out? What do you guys prefere to read?

I think the one guy is good. I'm not really into the stories with big group situations and everything you can imagine happening.

You won't please everyone, though. It's just not possible. So don't worry if you get comments telling you you should have done this or that. It's inevitable.

 

[shewantsmore]

It sounds like a good idea to plan for a 2nd chapter, if the story goes well and theres alot of interest to continue then could always leave another chapter open,no rush to finish things, so many things to consider, what the mother would do

 

[Marcie48]

Not enough stories on lit are slow burn... I love stories where people slowly escalate into territory they are "not supposed to"

I totally agree. I’m certainly not an expert on writing erotic stories but I do know what keeps me interested and aroused.
The “slow burn” is so much more titilating than just wam, bam, well you know the rest.

I’m working on a few ideas for my own mom/son/ friends tale and I think the flirtatious, uncertain moments are some of the most electrifying.

Just my humble opinion.

 

[BoundaryWaters]

Mom and 18 y/o son (just the two of them) at breakfast...

Mom: You know my friend Linda?

Son: Yeah...

Mom: As a man, do you think she is attractive?

Son: Sure...

Mom: Women peak sexually after men do.

Son: Yeah, Juanita, the new chemistry teacher at school, is hot. But...

Mom: But off limits since she'd get fired.

Son: Since she has older guys interested in her and wouldn't look twice at senior.

Mom: You are far more than the average eighteen year old...

Son: Yeah, you are somewhat biased.

Mom: Linda said so.

Son: Really?

Mom: Do you think she is hot?

Son: Uh... Sure...

Mom: Is she fuckable?

Son: What?

Mom: "Cause she's looking at you that way.

Son: Really?

Mom: Yeah, I can tell. Does that make you feel uncomfortable?

Son: No, it's flattering.

Mom: It's okay with me.

Son: What?

Mom: If you two explored what you might have in common. That would be okay with me. I know her and she is a good person who has just had some crappy things come up...

Son: Really?

Mom: I'm not saying you should. Just that you could...