MFM+BDSM+twist

[kitcarson2121]

Hello,
I'm new to this forum but I have a idea for a story I would like to read or see written.. here are the main points:

A good looking, nice, regular type guy, (Tom) is kidnapped by a beautiful, twisted female Dom. let's call her Dom M.

Dom M also kidnapped a soccer mom type milf, Jill.

Jill and Tom don't know each other, but suffer from the Dom M in many, many, Many ways.

What I think what would be interesting is that over time Dom M turns Tom from an Avg. nice guy into Dom. The story would be from Tom's POV and could focus on the psychologically change in him; going from one end of the spectrum to another.

For example: At first Tom might endure horrible torture and shame rather then force himself on Jill. but after some time all of his will would be broken and he would become something that he despises.

Please let me know what you all think.

Thanks!

 

[emap]

Interesting idea except for one problem. A person's will is broken to be a soldier or to be a submissive. In this case Tom would be the one to dole out the punishment and sex on Jill, at first he would not be happy but would come to like it. Of course he would have to be coerced into punishing Jill at first, but guys being guys, it wouldn't take long for him to at least do it simply because he can get sex out of it. After that it's not to big a stretch to be a dom.

Guys are so simple.