I got a random idea the other day. It's probably quite silly but I thought I'd run with it. It revolves around this really hot Mexican milf and her 18 year old son. The woman is a gorgeous illegal who works at a taco stand and all the guys in her son's high school want to fuck her. But she is a devout Catholic widow who refuses their advances. However, one of her son's school rivals, this white huge American quarterback finds out that she is an illegal and uses this info to blackmail both her and her son into becoming his slaves. As this state of affairs continues, she gradually becomes a slut with no restrictions whatsoever while her son realises that he gets off on being humiliated. Do you think that this would make for good erotica?
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I'd also like a romantic relationship to develop gradually between the mom and her oppressor if that's her feasible.
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Very hot concept. Make it happen!
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Yeah, this is straight out of some telenovela.
Or she could work at her son's school. All sorts of possibilities there!
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I'll take crack at it, if you'll let me.
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I can see this working. There is a taco stand in my neighborhood. The counter chick is not all that attractive; sort of chubby, and generally kind of sweaty. But she has that, how do you say, sort of THING about her! A sexual, sensual, FUCKABLE thing! Whenever I pick up my taco order, I can't help but imagining how she'd look bent over the table, her big round arse in the air, and my throbbing tool embedded in her quivering flesh!
In the hands of a great writer, this exquisite carnality, even in the person of a sweaty, chubby, greasy counter chick, could really get one's engine revving. I say, go for it!
In the hands of a great writer, this exquisite carnality, even in the person of a sweaty, chubby, greasy counter chick, could really get one's engine revving. I say, go for it!
Sure, by all means go ahead. I'd like to see what you can do with this.
What type of suitable vocation would an American high school be able to provide for a Mexcian female immigrant? Just curious.
Really? Do give me some examples.
I like that suggestion. Yeah, having her as a maid would probably be a lot sexier.
There's janitorial positions and cafeteria work, the offices tend to have a lot of secretarial stuff available. Many public schools that don't have an active police presence have a sort of rent-a-cop thing going. Security guard doesn't seem as submissive a career choice for the woman (unless it was spun that way).
The setup of the original concept makes more sense to me, but my school had a lot of little vendors outside who sold hot dogs, pizza and other things (not by the school, though I'm sure they had to get the school's permission). I went to a big school and I could see something of the sort happening, as a lot of kids would hang out around the school grounds where the little stands were (particularly if they ordered from them). A milf out there would certainly guarantee a large crowd, and profits could result from that.
The setup of the original concept makes more sense to me, but my school had a lot of little vendors outside who sold hot dogs, pizza and other things (not by the school, though I'm sure they had to get the school's permission). I went to a big school and I could see something of the sort happening, as a lot of kids would hang out around the school grounds where the little stands were (particularly if they ordered from them). A milf out there would certainly guarantee a large crowd, and profits could result from that.
I see what you mean. It would definitely be easier for the purpose of the storyline if the milf in question was a vendor who sold tacos to the kids. On the subject of profits, she might come to the realisation that the more skin she bares, the more customers she gets; doing this bothers her moral sensibilities but she wants her son to go on to college and so reluctantly starts to wear really tiny jean shorts or mini skirts.
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What about her niece, another illegal, coming to help run the stand? She could also become involved with the quarterback, whose dad is someone important in the town. He could employ her as a maid, and then we could have two strands to the abuse. There could also be a 'whitebread' girlfriend who is jealous of the niece and mistreats her and humiliates her. You could also have some coerced lesbian action between aunt and niece. I like the idea of the mother being forced to degrade herself to the customers to attract more sales. I think, though, that the story should end happily with the son getting a college scholarship and the mother getting a proper shop and a decent husband. Maybe the quarterback falls for the niece. I am could write something like that, but it would take a while.
What about her niece, another illegal, coming to help run the stand? She could also become involved with the quarterback, whose dad is someone important in the town. He could employ her as a maid, and then we could have two strands to the abuse. There could also be a 'whitebread' girlfriend who is jealous of the niece and mistreats her and humiliates her. You could also have some coerced lesbian action between aunt and niece. I like the idea of the mother being forced to degrade herself to the customers to attract more sales. I think, though, that the story should end happily with the son getting a college scholarship and the mother getting a proper shop and a decent husband. Maybe the quarterback falls for the niece. I am could write something like that, but it would take a while.
WOW!!! i made my account just to tell someone please make this story
im a submissive hispanic male and for a long time my ultimate fantasy has been for a white man (or several white men) to have sex with my mother and sister while im forced to watch, with lots of racial overtones and superiority/inferiority of the males involved
im not gay at all but the humiliation sends me over the edge, id just want to be in the corner saying "mommy, mommy, mommy" while his cum bursts from the corners of her mouth and streams down her body
i would love for such a story to start out extreme and forced like the blackmail you mentioned then eventually end up with everyone involved settling into the lifestyle, maybe including a "flash forward" to show what their lives ended up being like day to day
for example the mexican son, mexican mother and white lover shopping in the mall then mom/lover start publically humiliating the son in front of people his age, or the son driving the car while his mother makes love to 2-3 white men in the back seat and her sweaty feet are dangling next to his head rest while they pump her and she moans and screams really nasty stuff, etc
i wish i could write it but im quite shy about my writing skills
i wrote one on a similar premise about early european settlers and how they were mistaken for gods etc and native men watching them in orgies with their daughters/sisters/mothers but i have trouble finishing it! the fact that its "based on a true story" makes it quite hot to me though lol
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im a submissive hispanic male and for a long time my ultimate fantasy has been for a white man (or several white men) to have sex with my mother and sister while im forced to watch, with lots of racial overtones and superiority/inferiority of the males involved
im not gay at all but the humiliation sends me over the edge, id just want to be in the corner saying "mommy, mommy, mommy" while his cum bursts from the corners of her mouth and streams down her body
i would love for such a story to start out extreme and forced like the blackmail you mentioned then eventually end up with everyone involved settling into the lifestyle, maybe including a "flash forward" to show what their lives ended up being like day to day
for example the mexican son, mexican mother and white lover shopping in the mall then mom/lover start publically humiliating the son in front of people his age, or the son driving the car while his mother makes love to 2-3 white men in the back seat and her sweaty feet are dangling next to his head rest while they pump her and she moans and screams really nasty stuff, etc
i wish i could write it but im quite shy about my writing skills
i wrote one on a similar premise about early european settlers and how they were mistaken for gods etc and native men watching them in orgies with their daughters/sisters/mothers but i have trouble finishing it! the fact that its "based on a true story" makes it quite hot to me though lolsub
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I am interested in writing your story, 24_7_sub.
Also, send me a PM with that story you said you were writing. It sounds hot.
Also, send me a PM with that story you said you were writing. It sounds hot.
That's a brilliant addition to the story. The incorporation of a submissive niece and a jealous girlfriend would add greatly to the erotic appeal of the story especially since it would involve the sexual humiliation of both aunt and niece at the hands of the girllfriend. Also, I like your suggested ending as well. By all means, adopt this story as your own. I'd like to see where you go with it.
Yop, the above mentioned elements must certainly be in the story.
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when we lived in CA we had a hottie living next door to us. they were great but her husband was very jealous. she loved to dress sexy when he wasn't around and she also loved to flirt! I wished we got to know her a little better and understand more about her and her culture.
if you make her illegal, the story will take a dark turn. is this an erotic story you want, or drama erotica?
if you make her illegal, the story will take a dark turn. is this an erotic story you want, or drama erotica?
I'd say it's an erotic story with a heavy element of blackmail and submission.
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