Message from Michaelwiseman.

[Guest]

Michaelwiseman is the author of

Universe Inside Your Heart, The Woman That I lLove and The Watcher Chronicles.

He is just wandering what u think of his work.

They were posted on August 16, 2003.

 

[Guest]

If you could post links it would get better response, I think. I'm going to look for your work now.

 

[Guest]

Well, Michaelwiseman, you have a style of your own. It's just a matter of taste - but it's not to mine I'm afraid.

It has a kind of "hip-hop" feel to it - not a bad thing - I just don't like it.

Your narrative style is interesting but it felt disjointed - particularly in "The Watcher Chronicles". Of the three I liked "The Woman that I Love" best - tender and personal.

Perhaps I feel your poems lack emotion. To tell you the truth - I'm not sure what I'm missing.

I'm sure others will be much more positive than I - as I said, it's a matter of taste.

Looking at your work coldly, it's well presented and has a feel of originality.

Well done.

 

[WickedEve]

I read The Watcher Chronicles because the title intrigued me. I like your observations, but a little after the half way point it got a bit monotonous. Still, an interesting read and I'd like to see more of your writings along those lines.

 

[Guest]

I read The Watcher Chronicles because the title intrigued me. I like your observations, but a little after the half way point it got a bit monotonous. Still, an interesting read and I'd like to see more of your writings along those lines.

I liked the originality and the content. I sit and watch people all the time and make up my own stories in how their lives are. I always wonder how close I am.



neonurotic

 

[Maria2394]

I liked the originality and the content. I sit and watch people all the time and make up my own stories in how their lives are. I always wonder how close I am.



neonurotic

yeah, thats what I do too, neo...and I like that he let us in to see how he thinks..only thing i might reconsider is the spacing, it sort of distracted me..but I really enjoyed the part, especially about the " pretty boy"..i know several men like that...hehe,..really good friends too..its sad that people can be so prejudiced that others feel the need to adjust their behavior to just be accepted..

keep it up Michaelwiseman, I enjoyed your watcher chronicles maria