This is an idea I had while watching videos of shows with sexy women in mermaid costumes with fish tails. I was thinking of a sci-fi story in which these girls performing during hours underwater get a new kind of invisible skin layering as "dry suits", and even some sort of implanted breathing apparatus that gives them a few minutes of autonomy underwater without any visible equipment. The girls then start wearing their skin layering out of the water too, because it makes them feel sexy. They also use special underwater colored contact lenses and wigs, and like to change their whole appearance. Their gear is improved even more so that they have special valves implanted in every body orifice, and they also get custom vaginal vibrators that they wear and control invisibly. They become special enhanced women that are very sought after, like a special caste. The story could be an interview with one of these women, or maybe a dialogue between a couple of them, sharing and comparing their experiences.
Mermaid girls with fully covering invisible second skin
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Very simple, it's essentially a pantyhose/latex encasement fetish, but the layer is so tight and invisible that it practically fuses with the woman's skin. Also, layering with more transparent materials on top adds to the sexy look and the mystery.
Those girls are great, but imo the ones at the tank in the Dubai Mall have better outfits and swim more sensually... It actually has to be a very exhausting job and I admire them. There was an old circus act where a girl swam inside a spherical tank drawn on a cart around the ring, I saw it on TV long ago and thought it was insanely sexy but now I can't find any info about it.
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And what does 'second skin' do?
I beg your pardon but I didn't expect to have to explain myself, especially on this site
https://en.wikimannia.org/Second_skin
Also, I'm contemplating different narrative options for making the description of the special equipment of these girls as exciting as possible.
- An "interview" with a girl wearing it, where she tells how she got into it and describing different situations in public and how people have reacted.
- A first-person narrative of a girl dressing up in her gear, describing how she enjoys it and also some interaction with people she meets that day.
- A third-person omniscient narrative where "she" is described in detail as she dresses up and how people react to seeing her.
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Ohhh nooo WikiMANNia is a hilarious incel rabbit hole I did not plan on falling down todayI beg your pardon but I didn't expect to have to explain myself, especially on this site
https://en.wikimannia.org/Second_skin
I'm so sorry, but Wikipedia doesn't seem to have a good definition so I went for the first search result that described this fetish somewhat coherentlyOhhh nooo WikiMANNia is a hilarious incel rabbit hole I did not plan on falling down today
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It was an interesting and educational post, they hate women but they sure seem to like women's butts in lycraI'm so sorry, but Wikipedia doesn't seem to have a good definition so I went for the first search result that described this fetish somewhat coherently
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Be that as it may, I couldn't find any misogyny in that particular article and was unaware of having committed a faux pas. I hope it always will be OK to love seeing women in pantyhose and lycra, although I'm aware it's a bit objectifying. That's what a fetish is all about, after all.they hate women but they sure seem to like women's butts in lycra
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Lots of fetishes are about the sexual arousal caused by objects (body parts, physical human characteristics, items of clothing, etc.) and I don't think there's anything wrong with that! As long as, y'know, you respect the person as a person and not just as a body part
I would just be cautious about that website, you're never more than a couple of nested links away from some of the dumbest nonsense I've ever seen... Just clicking on their entry for "Woman" is kookoo bananas
Wow that entry is some bitter shitJust clicking on their entry for "Woman" is kookoo bananas
Returning to my topic...which narrative option 1, 2 or 3 would you think is best? Would you be at all interested to read my fantasies? Maybe you could give me some feedback later on, from the female perspective?
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So, it sounds to me like the physical mechanics of the special mermaid suits are part of the fetish, is that accurate? The type of fabric, the way it works, the description of the "plugs," that sort of thing? I'm afraid "logistical erotica" doesn't do much for me personally, though I do think it has an audience, especially for people that share the fetish being described.!
I would be more interested in what it feels like to swim like a mermaid, the sensuality of it, the freedom, maybe the opportunity for sexy underwater activities
I would be more interested in what it feels like to swim like a mermaid, the sensuality of it, the freedom, maybe the opportunity for sexy underwater activities
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Obviously I meant how it works in your story. What's so special about it etc. I couldn't understand from your first post.I beg your pardon but I didn't expect to have to explain myself, especially on this site
https://en.wikimannia.org/Second_skin
You've described exactly the problem I'm having with writing this story. The more I get into describing the mechanics of it all, the less sensual and mysterious it reads. It probably doesn't survive the test of reality either, since maybe it would only be clunky and messy for a woman to use all this equipment, in the way that lingerie can look exciting but will often just get in the way while having sex.
For example, I can get aroused by watching videos with women trying out "natural" colored contact lenses, but when spotting someone wearing them IRL I usually think it looks contrived and weird. It both excites and repels me.
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I think it's possible to make it work... Try to limit the exposition to what's needed for the story, and intersperse it with feelings and sensations.
When Mindy Mermaid puts on the suit for the first time and it molds perfectly to her body, how does that feel? When someone else touches her when she wears it, how does that feel?
Excellent advice, she feels in a third-person narrative. Or even first-person, I feel. That's much more intimate than the sort of "interview transcript" I've been playing with so far. But imagining myself in Mindy's body makes me slightly uncomfortable, here's why:
Between maybe six and ten years old, I would sometimes imagine myself as a girl because I got along better with them at school and often played their games with them. I would even put on leotards and skirts secretly. That phase went away, but it later came back to me while exploring sex with my first girlfriend: she laid on her back on top of me and I'd cup her vulva with my hand, and imagine it was my own sex. She'd guide my fingers with her own and tell me how to caress her, one hand on her sex and the other stroking her breasts. I felt her heavy breathing and contractions as she came, and it was insanely hot because it almost felt like having her body. But now with more experiences behind me, I don't think I can write credibly about what a woman feels inside while having sex, and imagining myself as a female doesn't really turn me on anymore. The "interview" format puts a sort of screen between myself and Mindy telling her experience...
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I've already written a bit in third person since it's raining outside and I can't get any work done. I realised the narrative could be made somewhat ironic and funny instead of just a dry description of the mermaid gear. Is this the right place to show a rough draft or should I post in another category?
Btw, here are a couple of samples of the colored contacts that excite me:
Btw, here are a couple of samples of the colored contacts that excite me:
So now I'm modifying the initial concept a bit. I think it would be more "credible" if this mermaid girl had several physical disabilities that motivated her to get implanted with all these gadgets. For example, she could have a robotic arm and a damaged eye etc and then the step to the other gear would seem less weird (though still very sci-fi.)
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It sounds like the body modification fetish aspect of this is very specific and personal. It's highly arousing to you, and it might be to some other people who share the same fetish! But unless a reader is super closely aligned with the fetish, I think you would need a strong character and story hook to connect with readers, and not just physical details of the body mods.
So like, reading your description of the skin and the orifice plugs and the robotic arm and prosthetic eye does nothing for me, personally, because I don't share the fetish. For it to interest me I would want to know who the character is as a person, how she feels, what she wants, what her relationships with other people are like. I'd want to know how her mods affect her sexuality and sensuality, both positively and negatively.
A prosthetic eye that lets her see her partner's body temperature and arousal in a way that makes her a better lover! A robotic arm that makes it more difficult for her to be intimate without hurting her partner, she has to be extra careful and it takes on a teasing or denial aspect! Or she has to remove it during sex, and it becomes a loss of power or vulnerability thing!
I still sometimes enjoy stories about fetishes I don't share, if the writer does a good job of conveying why the fetish is sexy. Touch, taste, smell, power dynamic, naughtiness, taboo, help the reader understand what makes it hot!
So like, reading your description of the skin and the orifice plugs and the robotic arm and prosthetic eye does nothing for me, personally, because I don't share the fetish. For it to interest me I would want to know who the character is as a person, how she feels, what she wants, what her relationships with other people are like. I'd want to know how her mods affect her sexuality and sensuality, both positively and negatively.
A prosthetic eye that lets her see her partner's body temperature and arousal in a way that makes her a better lover! A robotic arm that makes it more difficult for her to be intimate without hurting her partner, she has to be extra careful and it takes on a teasing or denial aspect! Or she has to remove it during sex, and it becomes a loss of power or vulnerability thing!
I still sometimes enjoy stories about fetishes I don't share, if the writer does a good job of conveying why the fetish is sexy. Touch, taste, smell, power dynamic, naughtiness, taboo, help the reader understand what makes it hot!
Those are all very good points and ideas, thanks so much for your input and with your permission I'll use some of them. I'll try to add more about her feelings and thoughts and less tech. I feel the bar to making my story enjoyable seems to get higher and higher, though!(...) I would want to know who the character is as a person, how she feels, what she wants, what her relationships with other people are like. I'd want to know how her mods affect her sexuality and sensuality, both positively and negatively.
A prosthetic eye that lets her see her partner's body temperature and arousal in a way that makes her a better lover! A robotic arm that makes it more difficult for her to be intimate without hurting her partner, she has to be extra careful and it takes on a teasing or denial aspect! Or she has to remove it during sex, and it becomes a loss of power or vulnerability thing!
I still sometimes enjoy stories about fetishes I don't share, if the writer does a good job of conveying why the fetish is sexy. Touch, taste, smell, power dynamic, naughtiness, taboo, help the reader understand what makes it hot!
Since all her gear requires internal battery power, I begin the story by describing a disaster: her charging cord comes loose at night. Also, I introduce an argument with her boyfriend, who thinks the layering looks sexy but misses touching her real skin (or indeed any part of her) since she has to wear it constantly for practical reasons. He isn't at all convinced at first by her waterproof inserted femidon. He feels frustrated and inadequate making love to her now, since she can basically orgasm at will with her stimulator implants and can wring his cock dominantly any way she likes with her superpowered vagina. He does like one of her extra-naughty surprise features, though...
I'll give it another go and maybe I'll submit a sample soon.
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Now you're cookingSince all her gear requires internal battery power, I begin the story by describing a disaster: her charging cord comes loose at night. Also, I introduce an argument with her boyfriend, who thinks the layering looks sexy but misses touching her real skin (or indeed any part of her) since she has to wear it constantly for practical reasons. He isn't at all convinced at first by her waterproof inserted femidon. He feels frustrated and inadequate making love to her now, since she can basically orgasm at will with her stimulator implants and can wring his cock dominantly any way she likes with her superpowered vagina. He does like one of her extra-naughty surprise features, though...
But also, you should write for you! If the tech and the logistics and the details and the materials are what get you going, don't be ashamed of that! I would be willing to bet that you'd find an appreciative audience for that style, even if it's niche
