MEN by Huck Pilgrim

HuckPilgrim

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This one is a lusty meditation on men (the bastards). I'd love your feedback!

http://www.literotica.com/s/men-1

This one is doing a little bit better in the votes. I know I shouldn't worry about the votes, but it's hard. Last night I found one of the craziest stories I've ever read--about father's swapping their daughters. It was very hot, but it was only in the 3 range. It was creative, self aware, and funny. Hugely taboo. I wish I could write stories just like it.
 
This one is a lusty meditation on men (the bastards). I'd love your feedback!

http://www.literotica.com/s/men-1

This one is doing a little bit better in the votes. I know I shouldn't worry about the votes, but it's hard. Last night I found one of the craziest stories I've ever read--about father's swapping their daughters. It was very hot, but it was only in the 3 range. It was creative, self aware, and funny. Hugely taboo. I wish I could write stories just like it.

My guess-all it is- is that father story was only in the three range because the father's were swapping daughters not screwing their own:rolleyes:

On the other hand the opposite "mother daughter exchange" is hugely popular. Then a again mom/son blows away dad/daughter

Even on this site it seems dad/daughter has a more uncomfortable connotation. I don;t think rape, but maybe abuse of position or molestation where mother son is always hot. Aunt Nephew same thing, its hot, but uncle is always creepy. Strange as in reality incest is incest
 
On the other hand the opposite "mother daughter exchange" is hugely popular. Then a again mom/son blows away dad/daughter

Ahahahha. lovecraft I am just a piker. I had no idea people wrote stories like those. :)

Even on this site it seems dad/daughter has a more uncomfortable connotation. I don;t think rape, but maybe abuse of position or molestation where mother son is always hot. Aunt Nephew same thing, its hot, but uncle is always creepy. Strange as in reality incest is incest

Yes! I planned a story where I wanted a girl to get busted shoplifting, but the more I thought about it, the more I could envision the complaints I would get from the people in my writing group.

I changed it to a young man and it came off really well. Sometimes you can do things with gender that don't make sense. In my story, it especially works because the young man is questioning his sexual orientation and he has been busted by a male guard, who then sort of encourages the young man and it came off hot. I still get the occasional complaint about consent, but nothing like what I get with some stories, and I think it's all because it's a questioning young man and not a young woman.
 
Ahahahha. lovecraft I am just a piker. I had no idea people wrote stories like those. :)



Yes! I planned a story where I wanted a girl to get busted shoplifting, but the more I thought about it, the more I could envision the complaints I would get from the people in my writing group.

I changed it to a young man and it came off really well. Sometimes you can do things with gender that don't make sense. In my story, it especially works because the young man is questioning his sexual orientation and he has been busted by a male guard, who then sort of encourages the young man and it came off hot. I still get the occasional complaint about consent, but nothing like what I get with some stories, and I think it's all because it's a questioning young man and not a young woman.

Yes, huge double standard. Even on a site like this lot of homophobes and its fine for the girl to be in that position, but not a guy let alone with another guy:eek: Honestly its not my thing, but I won't ever down vote story for going against my tastes.
 
I write what I want, and hope that the story is strong enough to resonate even if it's a bit off the beaten path.

I like to push, myself and others. I make not apologizes for the shove. Fiction is supposed to rile you up.
 
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