Memory Lane - reliving 2003

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Holy cow, this was hard work.

In the Award-thread I promised to dig deep into my memory banks and pull out my absolute favourite poems of the last year.

Sad to say, I haven't been keeping a record, so some of the really good poems of last year have fallen out of the notebook that is my head. The ones I could remind myself of were all written by more-or-less regulars of this board. In addition to those, I know, I just KNOW the shape and general structure of five or six more (meaning that I have even more completely lost), and I know that the authors are not names that I recognise from here. Until a sudden flash of recollection, I'm aftaid they are lost to me. :(

But hey, those I remebered are not too shabby either. :)

First of all, I was going to nominate Angeline's high climber the best poem of 2003, but then I saw that it was indeed from 2004. So instead I just take this opportunity to mention it anyway. It kicks all the ass in the world.

On to poems of '03. In no particular order...

You Don't Know Jack by jthserra
Smells of Kerouac (duh), asphalt, smoke and city. Reads like a slap bass solo.

Disco Inferno by perks
The pinnacle of the poems that came out of that challenge batch. Perks at her best and a testament of time that is both personal and universal.

Bibliobliss and Lucerne Inn December by Angeline
While I did love her nominated poem Giving Thanks, I found Bibliobliss to be a more direct document on the same theme. Sweet luvin' is often best said in the simplest of ways. And few poems have managed to transport me in time and place as Lucerne Inn December.

Singing The Blues In A Glass House by destinie21
A talented poet with a style of her own. This is one of her less wordy poems, a simple but remarkable document of sparks of warmth in a broken windows world.

So by Linbido
I don't know. It's a good poem, sharp, dark, insightful. But I think it's the title, I just love the title. I can almost picture her standing there, arms crossed, staring at me... Also, I'll come and kick your bottom if you don't read Three Different Ways.

One-Four-Five by denis hale
One of the first poems I read by denis, and still the best one to this day. And you all know that that says a damn lot. The poetic equivalence of a machine gun. (Sadly, I can't seem to find my other favorite denis hale poem Somewhere A Fat Lady anymore.)

Dear Christine by Icingsugar
I have always had a strong sense that children knows all those profane truths about life and what's important, and that we all forget it when we grow up. Dear Christine strongly reinforce that belief. Also, I have a thing for the sea and it's white winged guardians.

Some things never change, but... by echoes_s
Echoes' language sucks me in almost every time. This poem is slightly less melodic than some of her other efforts from this winter, but the imagery and the event, descrived with a brilliant balance between poignance and contemplation, made me forget that I was reading a text.

Between the Covers by Tristesse
Just so cozy that i want to bury myself in bed with a book, and never come out.

Flippy by BooMerengue
The best opening lines ever. Few poets write with as much heart as Boo, and it rubs off on this reader at least.

To Water a Garden, Lewdly by Maria2394
Starts off with frisky humour and morphs into bark-and-root magic. Memorable in many different ways.


...and finally, I just have to mention Another Pickup Line by Icingsugar, the smooth talking son of a gun. There may be better poems, but damn it made my day. :D


Sooo, come on people, fill me in, what other gems should we not forget?


#L
 
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Nice idea!

A great idea, let's point backwards. I'm sure there are toms of great poems that I have missed.

Here are my recommendations. I could never pick a bunch of favourites, but these have stayed with me since I read them. There are many more, but those six came to my mind directly.


*Catbabe* - Falling Up the Stairs
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=118180

RazzRajen - Private hells
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=113428

OT - bell curve secrets
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=102956

annaswirls - Raising the Blade
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=122513

Eumenides - Juxtaposition
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=119603

:rose:
-Lin
 
Liar, if you were not such a nice person...

I'd be irritated for this because there are too many darn poems from 2003 that I really like, lol. (Not really. It was lovely rereading them.) :)

I keep remembering more though. Anyway here is

Part 1--in no particular order
(I’ll be back with more later.)

Inchoate by Mojo_Cat
One of the best poems I’ve ever read here. Blew me away. End of story.

Syntax by Lauren Hynde
There are so many from Lauren that I like. This one is short and sort of enigmatic, but so evocative.

American Autobiography and On the Stereo, Typical by Risia Skye
It’s hard to pick one or even just two from Risia. She is one of the best--here or anywhere. If I were you, I’d just read everything she posts, lol.

Café au lait Cassenova by neonurotic
This bastard just keeps improving. He’s gonna be in anthologies someday--mark my words. I predict it here. (even if he is a wiener :D )

Best by Tristesse
This one puts tears in my eyes it’s so lovely. Honest. Tess writes some of the most beautifully moving poetry I’ve read anywhere.

Stains by Xtaabay
Have you read Xtaabay? She posted a lot here in 2002, less so last year. She has quite a gift for poetry (and she’s a very cool lady, btw.)

Shh! whisper beat by jthserra
What stroke of luck brought this guy to our midst? I don’t know, but lordy he can write up a storm. And Ms. Ange likes her some boys who write jazz poems, lol.

Jazz by jazm49
Speaking of jazz, this one had me fanning myself for days after I read it. This guy totally gets the sensuous nature of le jazz, imo.
 
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Thank you Liar

for an excellent idea. I just read through all your suggestions and enjoyed every read. I look forward to reading through Linbido's and Angeline's selections.

And thank you for the nod on my tribute to Jack... cause if you don't know Jack, what do you know.


thanks,

jim : )
 
Patience... patience...

lol... I am still recovering from my Monday reviews... and scratching my head trying to remember what I would choose.


jim :)
 
Liar! I am stunned! That you mentioned my little poem amongst such truly great ones just astounds me! And this is not feigning nor fawning- I am really blown away!

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!


:rose: :rose: :rose:
 
Thank you Liar, for including my lewd lil poem in your list :)

sooo, now I will try to post a few links and hope my computer doesnt freeze up...

among the previous posters, several of my favorites were already listed...I have to agree with the choice of Boo's Flippy,
that is just one of the absolute most touching poems I have ever read in my entire life....I printed it out and showed lots of people, some of them were moved to tears :)

Tristesse's Best was the first poem I ever read on Literotica, I'm almost certain and even now, it evokes the most pleasurable sensation when I read it , just an awesome poem, Tess, thank you

Dark Feel in Yellow Skin and State Street Bridge by Cordelia..I have yet to read anything by Cordelia that I didn't just love..she weaves her words into images that just flow in and out of your heart, its wonderful, if you havent done it already, read her stuff, you'll be glad you did!!

Dark Feel in Wormwood, by darkmaas this poem just does something to me...

Sista Fista, by angeline
( werent we talking about this one the other day? <wink>)

the link for Sista Fista is gone as dear sis o'mine removed a bunch of her poems last year when she announced about her book thing :devil: and I am not sure which year it was actually posted, but I read it last year, so it counts :D

Lucerne Inn December ( IMO) did not get the recognition it deserved when it was posted. This poem should be read and reread and savored. It took me there, definitely an escape into another place Lucerne Inn December

Xtaabay has been mentioned and one of her poems stuck in my head and my heart and I have to mention it here.
Can you bring me a cookie
if this poem doesnt make you feel, you are hopeless!! It shoulda been on the top list the day it was posted :)

Neonurotic is probably one of the most overlooked poets here, in my opinion. He possesses a sensitivity that few men can match without being a puss, and he has a strong, clear writing style that doesnt clutter up his work..he is cerebral, his voise is able to draw you into his world without having to hit you over the head with a sledge hammer-- he is hot and I just adore this man's work...here is my favorite of neo's poems and believe me, choosing was nearly impossible!golden girl

OT is another of my favorites here at Lit. He has the wondrous ability to slip in wisdom where you least expect to find it-- in a closet, or rollerblading in a park. OT has created images in my mind that give me a smile everytime I think of them... his post for my ghost challenge is one of his best examples of his insight and the wonders of childhood...how simple things shape us into who we are now..I love your work OT, you are an absolute treasure:kiss:
Understanding Christmas Ghosts

Wicked Eve showed me that I could write about anything and be honest about it and not be ridiculed. I admire greatly her gift and insight and Eve's ( and Tammy's) poems have inspired me to put into words feelings I could barely admit to myself. I am eternally grateful for your presence, Oh Wicked One :)

Raising the Blade by Annaswirls..I have to agree with Lin's choice on this one. It's profound. Anna, are you by chance a distant relative of Robert Frost? Maybe Roberta Frost with a kink..you are someone I expect to see published in hardback someday soon..you are an inspiration and a joy and a pleasure to read :rose:
 
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This was very, very hard. There are so many poems that grabbed me for one reason or another. Many already mentioned aboove. Here are my picks.

denim desire by OT

This has such a nice imagery and sensuality to it.

Hoofin' Beat Fo' Dah Masses by JUDO

Teriffic energy and word power.


The Ghosts of North Beachby jthserra

Lovely descriptive poem.

Dandelion Whine by Eumenides

A funny, telling poem with a great title.

Agonies by Champagne1982

A short, agonised poem. Great choice of words

Wish to the Setting Sun by Hitchhiker

This poet only has one submission. Pity, because his lone poem is lovely

Letting go by foxinsox

A poet who doesn't appear often but produces some lovely works - here's one.

Acerbic Acid by Rybka which - sadly - is no more.

Assorted poets letting rip in the "Suddenly with passion" thread.

Check that whole thread out - it's worth the effort.


There are lots more to mention. Many of Angeline's babies flew the nest leaving just a sweet memory, as did Rybka's.


The most noticable thing about strolling back through 2003 is the increase in activity and participants in the forum. Has to be good.

Cheers to all. :rose:
 
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Tristesse said:
This was very, very hard. There are so many poems that grabbed me for one reason or another. Many already mentioned aboove. Here are my picks.

denim desire by OT

This has such a nice imagery and sensuality to it.

Hoofin' Beat Fo' Dah Masses by JUDO

Teriffic energy and word power.


Assorted poets letting rip in the "Suddenly with passion" thread.

Check that whole thread out - it's worth the effort.


There are lots more to mention. Many of Angeline's babies flew the nest leaving just a sweet memory, as did Rybka's.


The most noticable thing about strolling back through 2003 is the increase in activity and participants in the forum. Has to be good.

Cheers to all. :rose:

I just started working on my Part 2 of stuff I liked. The first two on my list were Denim Desire and Hoofin. LOL! Honestly! They're great poems both.

OT is a Lit poet whom everyone should read and appreciate. He's a modest sweetheart of a guy who writes wonderful poetry that doesn't get half the praise it deserves. :rose:

JUDO is simply divine. I don't think any poet here has inspired me more to get off my butt and write than she. (And Fool, she taught me to write sonnets and vilanelles, so you're not the only one who got beat up by the form poeters!) No one writes wonderful form poetry faster either. Nobody. I've seen that babe produce a flawless sonnet in less than ten minutes. Actually she's rather scary, lol. Btw, JUDO wrote Hoofin after coming home from seeing Savion Glover, the great young American tap dancer, perform.

And here are some poems by Lit poets that are not posted here. One was. You know these folks though.

Into the Mountains by Wicked Eve. If you have any question ever about my buddy's monumental poetic talents, read this poem and reread it. :)

old white by smithpeter. Nobody else writes like him--he writes paintings, photographs. He'll hate that I said this because he is a low-key unassuming type, but I think he's a poetic genius. Sorry sp. Also I adore him as a person--he has very quietly done much for this forum to encourage thoughtful honest poetry. Read him.

Other poems I love from 03 have been mentioned, but I want to second the votes for Maria's To Water a Garden Lewdly, Cordelia's Dark Feel in Yellow Skin, and darkmaas's Dark Feel in Wormwood. All wonderful poems by talented poets.

And hey, she posted it 1/05/04 but Linbido's Branches and Twigs was, for me, revelatory--an amazing integration of text and image, so what the hell I'm mentioning it. :)

And ditto on Tess' recommendation for the Passion thread as well as Ice's 10 Word Thread and smithpeter's pic-a-thon thread.

And one more.

Tree Line by eagleyez. You know when a guy starts writing you stuff like this, you're toast. You know that, right? :heart:

If I don’t remember to say it for a while, let me say it now: what an honor to be in such company, you wonderfully talented group of minds. :rose:
 
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Angeline said:
I just started working on my Part 2 of stuff I liked. The first two on my list were Denim Desire and Hoofin. LOL! Honestly! They're great poems both.

OT is a Lit poet whom everyone should read and appreciate. He's a modest sweetheart of of a guy who writes wonderful poetry that doesn't get half the praise it deserves. :rose:


I so agree with you about OT, Ange.

I uncluded links to each poet making it easy to check out their other works. One can only hope. :)

:rose:
 
Tristesse said:
I so agree with you about OT, Ange.

I uncluded links to each poet making it easy to check out their other works. One can only hope. :)

:rose:

I'm adding em too--I keep getting interrupted by kids though--and having to find index cards and such. Why am I the only person in my house who can ever find anything? (never mind...it was rhetorical, lol)

:kiss:
 
Tristesse said:
I so agree with you about OT, Ange.

I uncluded links to each poet making it easy to check out their other works. One can only hope. :)

:rose:
Tristesse, Thank you so much for your support and good opinion of my poems. (You've really touched me by including my poem in your selection.) Wow... me in there with smithpeter and OT and d'maas, ohmagod the list goes on.

P.s. the link to Agonies takes me to Eumenides's member page.. not that I mind be linked to such a great poet.

P.s.s. Off to try to make a list too. But you guys have really found some of my favourites already. I can mention them again though!
 
I am remiss in not mentioning Champagne, whose form poetry is flawless--speaking of folks who write fast, didn't she write a beautiful sestina in a half hour? :eek:

And just for Maria--

It left Lit but I have it still of course--it was written for a woman in an ad who insisted on um enjoying herself over my very serious poems, lol.

Sista Fista

Hey Sista Fista?

take out that fist
we readin poems here
we gettin pissed

Go wash that hand
try to understand
who we are

Poets dammit!
we try to make art
talk truth
show beauty

Now who wants that
marred by you

in the
background

writhing

rammajammin
your booty?
 
champagne1982 said:
Tristesse, Thank you so much for your support and good opinion of my poems. (You've really touched me by including my poem in your selection.) Wow... me in there with smithpeter and OT and d'maas, ohmagod the list goes on.

P.s. the link to Agonies takes me to Eumenides's member page.. not that I mind be linked to such a great poet.

P.s.s. Off to try to make a list too. But you guys have really found some of my favourites already. I can mention them again though!

Sorry Champ, hopefuly fixed now. BTW you're far too humble.


:)
 
My humble list includes:

don't even bother by Angeline Take a trip through a gauntlet of emotions as this woman's visions invade your emotions.

The Stylizations of Self by Lauren Hynde A euro-electronic dance fuck, if I've ever read one.

A Brief Moment of Brilliance by [color=dark red]Judo[/color] It made me cry.

The Batchelor's Hand Revisited by DurtGurl/MathGirl can only be described as a parody at its peak. DurtGurl revels in pullin' yer pisser.

Cafe au Lait Casanova by neonurotic I'm gonna hit Starbucks and try to appeal to this pre-dawn poetic Lothario.

Expectations, of change? by RazzRajen asks us to treat him to sensuality only thought of in the mind of one.

just another midtown addict by Perks A free verse poem that will sweep you to the other side of the street in Perks's New York.

The_Fool was absolutely wonderful in 2003. My favourite of his, Malevolent, wasn't posted, but can be found on Page 1 of the Who's Afraid of the Dark? Halloween Poetry Contest thread. Screw it. It's MY FAVOURITE OF THE YEAR so I'll just stick it up here in its entirety:

Malevolent

Malevolent thoughts on a dismal night.
Dark deeds
color my desire.

Disillusion --- defecates on cherished dreams.
Innocence --- Alternates with cynical schemes.

Domination…of any I de-sire.
Subjugation…is all I re-quire

Of me.
Can’t you see?

Hair itches
To a litany of spider legs,
Walking on my head.

Eye twitches
With a syncopated beat
To a Coltrane dissonance.
“Are you experienced?”

Stress subjugates
Pain radiates
Passions require,
Suitable fixation.

Cruel thoughts from a disillusioned mind

Yielding to my pain
Of a pounding head
Life so simple
To overcome
With a little pill
Takes on a chill
Gives me a thrill
Till I want to kill.

Water stands in a porcelain sink
Crystal
Clear.
A scarlet drop
Clouds of red swirl
Contrast white.

Bright light
Flashes
From the shiny knife.
Fixated,
By my reflection
Translucent
Through a red haze.

The mirror reflects
A strangers face
Eyes wide
Pupils dilated.
A knife flashes
Above his head
I feel pain
My head explodes.

Awakening from my dream,
Water stands in a porcelain sink
Crystal
Clear.
I look up
The mirror reflects
A strangers face
Eyes wide
Pupils dilated.

I hear a drop
Hit the water.
Looking down,
A scarlet drop,
Clouds of red swirl
Contrast white.

I hear a howl
And insane laughter.
I wonder what he’s after.

I feel a tear
Trickle down my face.
I wipe it
With a knife in my hand.
I look up.
The mirror reflects
A strangers face
Eyes wide
Pupils dilated.
Face streaked with blood.

Bright light
Flashes
from the shiny knife.
Fixated,
By my reflection.
Translucent
through a red haze.
As I watch
A red drop forms
And falls.
I hear a drop
Hit the water.
Looking down
A scarlet drop
Clouds of red swirl
Contrast white.

There is blood on the knife
Blood on the knife
Blood on my
My hands
There is blood on my hands
I hear a howl
And insane laughter
I wonder what he’s after

My body shudders.
I drop the knife.
Shiny metal
Shiny red metal
Red fingerprints
On the handle.

I plunge my hands into the water
Into the blood red water.
Get if off.
My hands are sticky.
My bloodred hands are sticky.
Get if off
Make it go away.

I hear a howl
And insane laughter
I wonder what he’s after.
I plunge my face into the water.
The laughter goes away.
I taste salt.
My sink is filled with tears.

I look up.
The mirror reflects
A strangers face
Eyes wide
Pupils dilated.
Blood red water
Dripping down my face.
I must be crying
I must be crying red.

Spine shivers,
I feel the pain
I see a flash
And feel my self
Pounded
To the ground.

I reach for my sanity
To help me up.
The mirror reflects
me
Eyes wide
Pupils dilated,
Blood red
Tear trails.

I see my eyes.
I see her eyes,
Begging,
Pleading,
Screaming,
Hurting,
Dead.
I see her dead.

A knife flashes
Above his head
I feel pain
My head explodes
Fire burns
Demons torture
Anger spikes
And hate bubbles out
Volcano explosion
Hot
Burning
Sanity runs away.

Lifeless body.
Beautiful breasts
Surround a gaping hole.
A heart beats
My heart beats
I hold her heart
A Tell-Tale Heart
In my blood read hands.

Bright light
Flashes
From the shiny knife.
Fixated
By my reflection
Translucent
Through a red haze.

The mirror reflects
me
Eyes wide
Pupils dilated.
Blood red
Tear trails
Sanity runs away.

I hear a howl
And insane laughter
I wonder what he’s after.
Many of my other favourites have been mentioned already and I know I've missed some. You are an awesome group of poets and writers and lyricists and teachers and mentors, many of you are all that and more. It's fun and a pleasure to have you as associates. Thankyou for the great poetry in 2003. By the way.. did you know that the poetry reviews for January 1st 2003 are waaaaaaay back on page 9 of the New Poems thread? wow.
 
Woo woo

Too much poems in this thread, I can't keep up. :) I'm having 12 to 15 hours workdays right now, so my head is drained off poems of my own at the moment, let alone yapping with you lot. You know how it goes, peaks and valleys. But I'm glad I spotted this thread. I'v got it bookmarked for a marathon read later.

I so agree with Liar about the poem recommended at the top of his post. high climber is the king of poem that makes me lean forward so that I won't miss anything.

I'll just add little less than a handful of my favs then:

_Land's Making love to 1:00 am is what love is all about.
(I'd also like to nominate his only other submitted poem of '03, for everything else there's Mastercard as the best title of the year :D )

steve porter's full moon over fort davis is quite a gem too.

Well, got to get back to work. G'day poets!
 
Thanks... Ha, Ange, Maria, Champ—ya'll made me blush with your comments in this thread. ;)


These are only a few of my faves of 2003, I'll post more once my peepers are open all the way—night shift is such a drag.


Angeline - I am the Poem and She sings
Love all of Ang's words, especially her illustrated... fully visual, I'm a guy who'd a thunk it eh?

Lauren -The Stylization of Self
Wow, simply the best of 2003 on the board in my eyes


Maria - buzz cut, baby
Always loved a woman running her hands through my hair... ;) run your hands through my hair Maria.

Linbido - Branches And Twigs

Amazing intricate work on this illustrated piece.

Anna - Doggy
Okay, a cheat here, this is 2004—ah well it's a funny write, humor and sex scores points with me.

champagne1982 - Agonies
I agree with Tess on this one, I think it's fab due to the metaphor/word choices.

OT - bourbon without ice
Been there, done that, and enjoyed it (it, being bourbon). This is simply a very smooth and clean write.

I know I missed a few other favorite poems, but that is all that comes to mind at the moment. Besides, it's late and I'm too lazy to look up the links... ;)


- neo
 
yep Carrie, you are so right about steves poems...one of his, There are Bears in Ruidoso is just delightful ( as most of his are) but everytime I have reason to think about Vincent van Gogh, I hear steve whispering in my ear...


"pensive pipe smoking Vincent van G'oso" :)
and of course, I could never ever forget Julies Sonnet :kiss:

steve you are such a darlin', thank you for that poem ( and the other one too ;)
 
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At the risk of repeating others picks, here's my second go-round.

Leftovers by neonurotic

I love the sexual hurly-burly of neo's poems, this one has beautiful form and gentle - well may be not so gentle - humour.

Winter trees by eagleyez

A lovely delicate poem from a poet with too few poems posted in 2003 to pick so I cheated. Bite me.

empty rooms by The Fool

Just a sample of this poets work. I love his ascerbic, simple style that reveals so much with so little. I'd toss more in if I could.

I also include

just another midtown addict by perks

Because - as Champagne says it picks you up and carries you, kicking and screaming to a place you'd never go to otherwise. It's just gripping.

That's it - I'm going to bed. :kiss:
 
okay... it's taken a while but

Linbido said:
So, where's your list, jim? ;)

Here is admittedly only a partial list. I only got here in September and didn't begin reviewing until after the new year, but I thought I'd go back and see what I had missed over the year. I wanted to list the ones that grabbed me that may have been missed by a number of readers, so I have spent some time reading and commenting over the last few days, looking for some gems.


I start with Maria2394's elements of being: progressions a stunning progression through the seasons of a relationship.


Tristesse knocked me down with her A House Divided which left me feeling so helpless, so sad.


Annaswirls presented a delightful sequence of a tanka and three haiku in december .


A sestina was next, Angeline's Ocean Sesto is simply stunning.


Dear Christine by Icingsugar brought us the "Seagull Queen" in a poem I'll long remember.


Wicked Eve... what can I say, I admit it, I am crazy about her. Months ago I stumbled onto her website and read her poetry. I never cease to be amazed by her words... A poem that particularly grabbed me was Dismantling Home . The way she spoke of this structure enthralled me as I felt each memory, each ounce of pain shed as the house came down.


A paradelle is an incredibly difficult form. With all the repeated lines and limited word choice, it is nearly impossible to construct a coherent poem. Perks' Paradelle's Contrition handled the complexity of the form with adept precision. This poem is not only coherent, it is timely. Look up the form and then be completely amazed by the poem.


I found BooMerengue's non-erotic poem: emergence 1963 to be an incredibly sensuous reading experience. The sea, sand and her cascading hair. Beautiful, earthy poem.


I am going to cheat here... I read Contrast in Cranberry and then realized it was posted in December of 2002. Such a wonderful poem, but I needed one from 2003. I then had the opportunity to read on. I then found: Citrus Lake a poem so wonderfully sensuous you can almost taste the images.


And last for this portion, but not least... a poet friend, Echoes__s danced away with me in late 2003 with May we dance .


I will post this now and continue with some amazing poets and poems... including neonurotic, Linbido, Lauren Hyde, Liar, smithpeter, steve porter, Alan Hale, and others... I better get this posted (I have already accidentally blown it away once), before I mess up and destroy it some how...


jim : )

PS... poems and poets are listed in no particular order....
 
Oh thank you to all

for mentioning my poems--it's so nice to get new feedback on these. And Jim, thank you extra for your comment on my Ocean Sesto. Yours is the first feedback I ever got on it, and it is the first (and only) sestina I ever wrote. I really like it but, but never knew if anyone else thought it worked. And to give credit, I must also thank Boo Merengue for getting us all thinking about the form, and The_Fool, who harrassed me until I wrote one. I may try another today. :)
 
Thanks to Liar, Maria, Angeline and jthserrs for the mentions of my work.

Tristesse knocked me down with her A House Divided which left me feeling so helples, so sad.


jim, I'm not sure whether I'm a liabilty when my poems have this kind of affect on a person. :D
 
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