Meeting long lost daughter

[virginmary5]

I just have this fantasy in my head... wont mind if anyone want to write it...
A man have a loving wife and rebellious daughter... due to some fight when daughter was 15 .... she left house n never contacted her parents...story move five year forward n he lost his wife ( depends to accident or cancer).. n he is lonely .... also sexually frustrated... so he decided to take escort service... he selected a young girl who has similar features as his dead wife.... imagine his surprise when he realised that he is the first client to his daughter... he has already paid money n he is sexually frustrated... also he is very angry on his daughter...
How do you think the story would go?
What will he do to bring her home permanently...
If anyone want to write, plz contact me... but beware I m not a writer

 

[sirhugs]

Personally, I would have her show up at the funeral, offer to stay & take Mom's place. He doesn't realize that she means sexually as well. But then, how did he think she has been supporting herself?
I'd move the ages so she left home @ 18 so working the streets was of age right odd the bat.

 

[LupusDei]

There's a lot of possibilities this can develop from the original point where he finds her by hiring a paid girl, I think it's very spicy. Of course, she's using stage name, and dad has moved places and doesn't reveal true names either, so it's not that strained as it may appear.

Obviously, she's lying to daddy he's her first client, or that's what daddy would automatically assume anyway, even if she is telling truth (no chance in hell she's virgin of course, but she may indeed have taken that particular job only now).

Agree, that her running away at 18 open up more opportunities, including to talk about many things we otherwise could at best imply lightly. And working the streets is the last of those. Actually, her being legal adult may increase chances she didn't have to, until right now. But her being 18 when the conflict develops open opportunities to explore that conflict more. Chances are, the conflict was between the girl and mom, on basis on (mis-)perceived competition over daddy that's gone too far... but he may or not have noticed.

I presume daughter has no idea mom died until dad says her. Now, she may even develop guilt both for her death (especially if dad frame it insensitively) and that she didn't bother to reconcile in time. All that may only increase her desire to jump in that shoes fully, even if either didn't have such latent desires already (and we couldn't even really mention such here without making her 18 before leaving).

Then... there's a battle with her pimp for almost granted, dad will have to buy her out at huge expense, likely. He may try to rescue her best friend who brought her into that trouble, and with that inadvertently start a new career as pimp himself... but that's perhaps sequel seed.

 

[virginmary5]

Personally, I would have her show up at the funeral, offer to stay & take Mom's place. He doesn't realize that she means sexually as well. But then, how did he think she has been supporting herself?
I'd move the ages so she left home @ 18 so working the streets was of age right odd the bat.

Yeah.. I think her running away at the age of 18 open much more option than I earlier thought...

 

[FantasySharer1]

Would keep her a virgin and just an exotic dancer. Dad gets to actually pop the cherry.

 

[FantasySheWrote]

Would keep her a virgin and just an exotic dancer. Dad gets to actually pop the cherry.

Yes, but taking his slutty, well used daughter may appeal to a group of people as well.

 

[sirhugs]

Yes, but taking his slutty, well used daughter may appeal to a group of people as well.

is the past really that important?

 

[LupusDei]

is the past really that important?

It is.

Some see personality as little more than amalgamation of their memories.

Real world wars are fought, including one of two largest and by far the most intense going on right now, for the right to interpret history.

But in this context, beliefs about her past at least modifies attitude, and thus make certain sets of actions more or less probable, or what may be of concern from author's standpoint, believable.

However, the real past is indeed secondary at best against the assumptions and beliefs held about it.

 

[AnonymousOmega]

It is.

Some see personality as little more than amalgamation of their memories.

Real world wars are fought, including one of two largest and by far the most intense going on right now, for the right to interpret history.

But in this context, beliefs about her past at least modifies attitude, and thus make certain sets of actions more or less probable, or what may be of concern from author's standpoint, believable.

However, the real past is indeed secondary at best against the assumptions and beliefs held about it.

100% accurate! For some people that extra bit of backstory can maybe help pull them in a little more. Or some people might even like her being "broken in" beforehand, while others prefer inexperience. Sometimes that alone can literally be the make or break of a story for some people. And if that doesn't chase them off, then poor presentation will.

 

[John_Vandermeer]

Like this idea, and would read it. For the record I just submitted a story for review and publishing that has common elements. A father daughter development where the daughter steps into the sexual void. Same premise that if mother was a babe for the father, the daughter could be as much, potentially more so. Differences in my submission is the encounter was a blunder spining out of control. Though I guess the hiding of identities make it a sort of blunder in this idea too. And the sexual void for the father is not vanilla, but femdom.

 

[jaF0]

Kelly stays in LA doing her massive hit TV show "Vital Social Issues and Stuff'. Al goes back to Chicago and his mundane days at Gary's shoes looking at fat women's feet. A few years later he toddles on down to the Jiggly Room and notices a blonde giving Steve a raunchy lap dance. He sits down in the next chair and the naked blonde moves over and starts rubbing her tits in his face. At some point their eyes lock ....


Kelly when did you get back to Chicago????

 

[sirhugs]

Kelly stays in LA doing her massive hit TV show "Vital Social Issues and Stuff'. Al goes back to Chicago and his mundane days at Gary's shoes looking at fat women's feet. A few years later he toddles on down to the Jiggly Room and notices a blonde giving Steve a raunchy lap dance. He sits down in the next chair and the naked blonde moves over and starts rubbing her tits in his face. At some point their eyes lock ....


Kelly when did you get back to Chicago????

cute, but not really focused on the fetish. Just the opposite.