I have a idea for a story and have tryed to put it to paper without any sucsess. Im a mecahnic and my story starts when one of my lady costomers ring and ask me to attend her car that wont start. She is in her fiftys but very attractive. When I arive she is with a frend of simerlar age and both dressesd very sexerly in short skirts and skippy tops. Both are drinking wine and are be flirty. I look at the car in the garage and while looking under the bonnet I get the lady to sit in the car and wind it over. I can see her panties and her frend tease her and me for flashing her self. We flirt and I find and fix the proble which is wire disconected (on purpose).We go in for a drink and the we go from there.. I have ideas about threesomes,truth and dear and strip poker,tthat sort of thing. Even sometimes some mild watersport mybe.. I just cant seam to put this in story form.
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No your in the right place, though you rather need to improve your spelling.
It's not a bad idea, though going by what you have listed it needs alot of work in developing the story. Very not one of those three sentence and get into the sex stories.
It's not a bad idea, though going by what you have listed it needs alot of work in developing the story. Very not one of those three sentence and get into the sex stories.
Other than those few corrections, I agree with you.emap said:No your you're in the right place, though you rather need to improve your spelling.
It's not a bad idea, though going by what you have listed it needs alot a lot of work in developing the story. Very not one ????? of those three sentence three sentences and get into the sex stories.
Who snitched?emap said:
And we really must stop this hijack.
If you go to http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/story_search.php and enter garage mechanic as the Search Text you may find something similar to your idea. That might lead you to a suitable author.mike28 said:
