Means to an End

[CreamyLady]

I seldom ask, but I'd like feedback on this story -- good, bad, indifferent.

Thank you.

 

[Silverlily]

I loved it. I really liked the way you wrote it from the girl's point of view, the way the hurt and the pleasure mingled together.

I also appreciated the man from the restaurant being rough, but not really cruel. All too often, rough sex gets equated with mean sex.

I give it two thumbs up!

 

[CreamyLady]

Thank you for the feedback, Kitten Eyes.

 

[CRaZy]

I really liked this story too. The structure is simple but the subtleties of human behaviour are cleverly explored. I particularly loved the way you described the changes in the girl's demaeanour. Bittersweet humour at the end also works well.
CRaZy

 

[CreamyLady]

Thank you, CRaZy. I was trying to show how she would change, like a chameleon, to match the needs of her client. I'm glad it came through.