May I hold you?
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riverwoman
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When we met we can touch
When we touch we will kiss
We will hold each other until the dawn breaks
secure in our love of each other
When we touch we will kiss
We will hold each other until the dawn breaks
secure in our love of each other
SkulkinKittikin
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...
the closest you can get to me
is the closest I come to touching myself;
atoms pressed to atoms,
held together fluidly
by whimsy
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I'm not a poet. Just was struck by your progression -- and the rather slapdash way you use the word 'love'. Oh, and just as I'm not a poet, I don't claim to know what 'love' is, either. 's not really a criticism...just a "noticing way I have -- not a quick way, no! but a noticing way...."
SK
the closest you can get to me
is the closest I come to touching myself;
atoms pressed to atoms,
held together fluidly
by whimsy
****************************************************
I'm not a poet. Just was struck by your progression -- and the rather slapdash way you use the word 'love'. Oh, and just as I'm not a poet, I don't claim to know what 'love' is, either. 's not really a criticism...just a "noticing way I have -- not a quick way, no! but a noticing way...."
SK
LordToranaga
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Re: ...
..... gossamer strands of energy
binding us within each other
melding our souls and passions
together.... impenetrable..... final
SkulkinKittikin said:
..... gossamer strands of energy
binding us within each other
melding our souls and passions
together.... impenetrable..... final
riverwoman
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hmmm...
LT must be a fire sign or an alchemist/tink -- all that talk about gossamer and melding. <shiver> And death.
Me? I honestly don't know what a Libra is...an earth sign, perhaps? I really dig moisture, though....
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If you meld me, won't you change me?
Releasing my kinesis
into the atmosphere,
That loss -- sudden,
irredeemable.
Trial by fire.
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SK
LT must be a fire sign or an alchemist/tink -- all that talk about gossamer and melding. <shiver> And death.
Me? I honestly don't know what a Libra is...an earth sign, perhaps? I really dig moisture, though....
****************************************************
If you meld me, won't you change me?
Releasing my kinesis
into the atmosphere,
That loss -- sudden,
irredeemable.
Trial by fire.
****************************************************
SK
Re: ...
Hello everyone, didn't expect a thread with a poem. I've added my own, hope you all enjoy it as much as i am yours. Talking about using the word "love" skulkinkitten, i thought i might as well do the same
with love k
If i were in love
what that it may be
perchance it would kill me
or maybe it would make me
Yes, is what i say
to most things that come my way
Yet i would like to know
If what i face is friend, or foe
SkulkinKittikin said:
Hello everyone, didn't expect a thread with a poem. I've added my own, hope you all enjoy it as much as i am yours. Talking about using the word "love" skulkinkitten, i thought i might as well do the same
with love k
If i were in love
what that it may be
perchance it would kill me
or maybe it would make me
Yes, is what i say
to most things that come my way
Yet i would like to know
If what i face is friend, or foe
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