May I Have My Cake And Eat It?

[king_wesley]

There's a mind control story I have got floating in my mind right. It is fd and on a purely heat level sits very high in my head of things I have thought up.

The big thing in this story is the induction technique and the trancing so to speak and as such the most important aspect here is the mcer.

Here is my thing, I kind of want to write this as a green story, however I also feel it would work equally well as a red story. So what has struck me is the possiblity of just writing it twice, once with a girl and once with a guy.

I am not talking just a straight, one time it is John and the other it is Jane. But that in general the storyline and method of trance and setting are the same. Basically 70% of the words would be common to both submissions.

It would not be two stories. It would be one story that gets reeditied to appeal to a second audience. There's no problem with this is there? As long as you don't feel that Jane sounds like a guy or John sounds like a girl this shouldn't be a factor in my opinion. I just wanted to see you y'all.

Also with special reference to Literotica, will the moderators have any objections to me submitting two almost identical pieces?

 

[elfin_odalisque]

King

I'd love to comment but I didn't understand a word of what you were saying. Was it in Chinese?

What's red and green and whoi is fd and what the heck is the induction technique?

Give me a clue.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Green - Red pick one and don't confuse the readers. 100% of the low scoring stories on lit have done the switch in the middle. Can you say, "Back Click," Virginia?

 

[TxRad]

Okay, lets see if the redneck can interpret.......

Red Green would be boy or girl male female....

the fd I ain't got a clue... the induction is the hook for the mind control I assume....

Now the way i understand it, he wants to write the story twice, using a female in one version and a male in the other.... no swappy in the middle... two separate stories....


I'd say go for it... the hook can be used over and over from any point of view. Just make the names different and the plot a little different... It might be interesting as two sides of the same coin if done right....

Y'all come back ya hear.....

 

[starrkers]

I'm following TxRad's interpretation of the original message (which is in Swahili, I believe, elfin ).

I don't see why you couldn't write two stories, one male, one female. The only possible problem I could predict would be readers feeling cheated if they read them both expecting totally different plotlines.
You could get around this by making it plain they are connected - similar titles or a brief disclaimer at the top.
Sounds interesting.

 

[king_wesley]

Ah sorry, I posted this very late at night and the post was a copy of one I wrote for another forum. In my idiotic state I forgot that you would all not be aware of what half of the phrases would mean.

There is a story sight where categories are colour coded. Green is Female domination of a male, Red is a female/female sex story. FD stands for female domination.

So I wished to write the same female domination mind control story twice. One where she controls a male and one with a female. Of course they would not be exactly the same as obviously there are anatomical and behavioural differences to consider but in essence it would be the same story twice. One aimed at fans of lesbian stories and one aimed at fans of female domination of a male.

There is no switch half way through and I intend to make it clear that they are the same basic story so that nobody wastes their time reading it twice.

TxRad got it pretty much right, well done that man.

Sorry for the confusion I will endeavor to refrain from committing acts of idiocy in the future.