Married wife and younger stud story idea

[KathyJ]

A few months ago, I played out an idea online with a guy who wanted to go to his senior prom with an older married woman who was a friend of his family. We played out this scene for several days until I eventaully lost track of him. I have tried to write a story about it for sometime now, but I can't seem to get the story to come together right. I was wondering if anyone would be interested in trying to help me out with this? I would really love to read a story based on it sometime. A brief description of the story invovles the 2 of us going to his prom. He lives in a town several hours away so after prom, we end up staying at a hotel. He then slowly seduces me and convinces me to sleep with him. This is just the beginning of our summer long affair. There are many more details that I can explain to anyone sincerely interrested in helping me with this story.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

This sounds like a story that could take place over several chapters, if you really want to work up the seduction angle. My first suggestion would be to write a first chapter that describes the events leading up to the prom, the prom and the night of the prom. In it you could talk about the heavy sexual overtones and fliriting and temptation. If you wanted you could make it a non-sex story and then the next chapter or chapters would build on the seduction and eventual succumbing to temptation.

J.Q.

 

[KathyJ]

That does sound like a good way to proceed. When I played this out online, we mainly dealt with the night at the hotel and a few times after that. The events at the hotel involved him slowly seducing and undressing me while telling me about how long he has wanted to be with me and some of his fantasies and so forth. We then end up having sex several times until we are interrupted by the hotel manager due to complaints that they have received about the noise or something to that extent. I tell the manager I don't know what he is talking about as I am alone. My young stud is hiding in the bathroom or a closet type area at this time. The manager sees some sign telling him that I was either having sex or had just finished. He then proceeds to seduce me as well and due to my overexcited state at the time of being something I never knew I could be, I give in as the stud watches. Once the manager is done, the stud and I go again and then shower together.

During the course of the night, the stud learns that I am worried about getting pregnant from this night. He is careful not to have any accidents, but the manager wasn't as careful. So for the next few weeks after the encounter, the stud and I have a tense relationship hoping my family doesn't have to learn about this. As luck would have it nothing happens, but the stud starts to get turned on by the thought of getting me pregnant. He then plans out how he will accomplish his task and waits until the time is right. Unfortunately, this is as far as I got in playing online. If anyone would want anymore details or has any ideas or even wants to write this out in full, please let me know.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

These are all really good ideas you have here, but they seem to be too many all at one time. I think it would be difficult to weave everything into one story line and make it seem coherent. I would suggest you focus just on the relationship with the young stud. Already that encompasses a ton of things to work through. For example him wanting to go to the prom with an older woman and then his seduction of you (leave out the hotel manager) the developing relationship, any conflicted feelings the wife has. A possible pregnancy scare could definitely be worked into the story.

It seems there enough there for several chapters if you leave out the hotel manager and pregnancy by him. Doing that would make the story stronger and more believable and could set this up to be a good character study of both the wife and the young stud.

J.Q.

 

[Reshbod]

Great idea. Love the slow progression and build up. I agree that there are too many ideas to start with. First, you should just concentrate on the woman and young stud. Then when that story is resolved, then move on to other aspects.

 

[KathyJ]

Thanks for the suggestions. I guess I was so wrapped up in trying to recreate every detail from the original online play, that I blinded myself to the fact that the storyline was way too busy. I will give this one another try without the manager. Hopefully, I will have something completed in the next week or so. Thanks again for the suggestions. And as I have previously stated, anyone who wants to run with this story, is more than welcome.

 

[jeninflorida]

A few months ago, I played out an idea online with a guy who wanted to go to his senior prom with an older married woman who was a friend of his family. We played out this scene for several days until I eventaully lost track of him. I have tried to write a story about it for sometime now, but I can't seem to get the story to come together right. I was wondering if anyone would be interested in trying to help me out with this? I would really love to read a story based on it sometime. A brief description of the story invovles the 2 of us going to his prom. He lives in a town several hours away so after prom, we end up staying at a hotel. He then slowly seduces me and convinces me to sleep with him. This is just the beginning of our summer long affair. There are many more details that I can explain to anyone sincerely interrested in helping me with this story.

would she be allowed to attend the prom? kind of sexy, and if she never went to a prom.....maybe her husband is all for this, and offers pay for the limo. so its a loving situation. what women would not enjoy some young hottie asking her out?

do the other girls, want to learn....or will there be a cat fight?

 

[KathyJ]

Probably not....or atleast not around where I live as they don't allow anyone over 21, but this is just a fantasy after all and a few rules can be broke. I never thought of the limo part, but that could be an interest part to include in the story. However, my original plan for the story doesn't involve my hubby thinking anything sexual was going to happen between me and my stud.

 

[jeninflorida]

Probably not....or atleast not around where I live as they don't allow anyone over 21, but this is just a fantasy after all and a few rules can be broke. I never thought of the limo part, but that could be an interest part to include in the story. However, my original plan for the story doesn't involve my hubby thinking anything sexual was going to happen between me and my stud.

well....can keep that part out. but should your husband notice how happy you are....that this young man is interested in you? thinking about your dress, then going to the prom....so if your husband is not thinking about the sex...then that will add some conflict...as when your dancing with your young stud, a couple of slow dances and you will feel his desire for you. now, what will you do? you want him, and since he's young he can take your for hours! yet, your husband is at home in your bed

 

[KathyJ]

The conflict is the reason the stud has to do a long drawn out seduction. I really like the idea of him undressing me with his eyes and making some "accidental" touches while dancing. Maybe trying to rub against me to see how I act. I am flattered, but also a little in denial that he wants me so I play off the touches and rubs as accidents.

Later, in the hotel, the thoughts of my hubby at home with the kids is what makes me reluctant at first, but then sort of being a naughty mom and wife that is completely unlike the real me turns me on and I eventually give in. He is obviously thrilled as he has just told me I am the object of his fantasies and I have been for a while now and he hopes to do everything he has always wanted. Then all of the naughty things start to happen.

 

[wordmaster]

some thoughts

Whose story is this, his or hers?

If it's her story, then it's her point of view. I would think the telephone call would come out of the blue. You're young enough to get by at the prom without causing any embarrassment but still an older woman. This is a favor because the young stud's date broke a hip or something. You've known him and the family for some time. Can you grab a dress and drive 100 miles by tomorrow night?

It's absurd, but you're the only one who can make it...and you're the only young enough. Your husband says to go for it. They're friends of yoru hubby's boss, and this will seal their connection.

So, you go. And dress at their house...and your stud might just walk in while you're in your underwear...no harm done but was it....

In any case...you go to the prom, have a great time. Everyone thinks it's sooo cool that you bailed out the stud like this. YOu do some slow dances, some bumps and grinds and you think it's all cool. He has starry eyes, but then what do you expect.

I don't think you want to go to a motel room. It was always your intention to spend the night at the house. And besides, the stud is going to spend the night playing poker with his friends. YOu're not ready to sleep, so you ask if you can delay him a little bit...chat a moment. Sure, he doesn't have to run off.

In the rec room of his parents' house you have a drink and talk about the prom. God, it's been sooooo long for you. He asks if you lost your virginity that night. Well....you hate to admit it, but yes, you did.

And he admits he's a virgin.

And it's his prom night...

And you've had a drink...

You run with it from there....but it's sex...and then you have to leave the next day.

But he follows....

After all, his family is connected to your husband's boss, and he has a summer job in your city. And, your hubby offered to keep him in the spare room!!!!!

What a summer of fun.

Take it from there..

 

[KathyJ]

Thanks for the suggestion....I might end up using that for another idea I have. Or maybe that could be a sequel....perhaps that next year. Keep the ideas and suggestions coming. I love reading everything you guys have to say.

 

[WestVaCouple]

How is the story coming?

How is the story coming? I hope that you have not abandon it. It sounds like there is a lot of potential for a very erotic story. If you would like any assistance please feel free to send off a private message or respond back here.

 

[gartner83]

I can see this being a trilogy as you can do almost a novel out of it

 

[jeninflorida]

How is the story coming? I hope that you have not abandon it. It sounds like there is a lot of potential for a very erotic story. If you would like any assistance please feel free to send off a private message or respond back here.

its a freaking long story....and have a couple of flow/grammer issues still. think its going to be 4 parts!

 

[WestVaCouple]

How long is it already?

So how long is it? Let me know if you would like some grammatical/flow assistance. Look forward to eventually reading it.

 

[KathyJ]

Hey guys. Sorry I haven't posted for awhile. I've been busy with vacation and work this summer. How's the story coming along? Let me know if you need any further input or ideas. I really can't wait to read the final product.