Male Photoshoot

[evilbill]

This is something I've been thinking about for a while and want to gauge opinion on before I write it up properly:

It opens on a man entering a photo studio. He's fit and healthy, he's here to do the photo shoot. It turns out there is just a photographer there who happens to be an attractive woman aged 45-50 in a white vest and jeans.
The two chat for a while about the "business" then she asks him to take off his clothes as she is here for nude shots. He does as he's told and stands naked in front of her. She comments on his large endowment. "that's what I get paid for, I think" he says. They start the shoot. He wears some silly outfits like fireman, police officer etc and they laugh about how silly it is. Then the photographer asks out of the blue "we need some shots of a hardon". So he has to stroke himself to hardness for more shots.
At the end of the shoot the two come face to face again, her an older woman but still incredibly attractive, him a young man with a big hardon. "well you can just get dressed now" she says. She has done this a hundred times before and is just business. He says "give me five minutes to let it go down". Lady says "you know....I've heard it can be damaging for a cock to get hard and not be used......" Before the guy knows it the woman has knelt down and taken his beef in her mouth. ....... ..... ...... ... After that would just be description of their fucking - a younger guy and beautiful older woman.

What do you reckon? Good idea for story? obviously I'd flesh it out a lot but I'd like to do it.

 

[sirhugs]

not my thing, but likely a niche audience would like it.

 

[xoWildDaisyxo]

Not really the type of story I'm into or that grabs my attention.

Not that it's uncommon or hasn't been done before --but -- it is refreshing to see a reverse in roles where a woman takes the place of man behind the camera. I'm not sure what type of women you find sexy but is that truly how you see a sexy female photographer? In a vest and jeans? If so, hopefully you'll supply us with descriptive physical attributes that would make even the reader lust after her.

My only other suggestion would be to lose "you know....I've heard it can be damaging for a cock to get hard and not be used......" That line is so overplayed and found in hundreds of stories. Maybe you can transition in a different way. Heavy teasing, the aroused response of watching him stroke in front of the camera. Anything. Without using that line.

I'm new here and am in the throes of finishing my own story. (The comments and criticisms are sure to scare me to death!) I'm not sure I have the right to such opinions. Yet. Just food for thought....

 

[jeninflorida]

Yesterday, I was on Facebook doing some research. I'm shocked about the strong reaction when it comes to what other women want to read. Sure, I assumed that we think about MFM like you men think about FMF but with in minutes some two hundred women had given me feedback about what they want to read.

Why am I sharing that?

Well, to spin the story in that the photographer is taking shots for book covers and either her husband is watching or she has a female and male model joining in the photo shoot.

The author wanted pictures for her blog and web site as well as the book covers. So, not only is the first male model posing and removing clothes but the other two models are as well. The photographer doesn't need to ask for a hard-on as the male models rise to the occasion on their own!

Now the question is, who is more turned on? photographer, female model.... or her husband quietly watching in the background

 

[Carnevil9]

How about it's a very tricky lighting situation. The photographer wants the erection to be exposed (heh!) juuuust right. So she gets down on her knees and holds her light meter right in front of it to get a reading.

Of course, this just makes the model all the more turned on, watching those sexy hands and fingers centimeters from his crank, and imagining them sliding up and down his shaft.....

When the photographer gets back to her camera and peers through the viewfinder, she finds that he's even bigger than before! So she has to rearrange the lighting again, and take another meter reading.....

And we get a vicious cycle which only ends when she finally decides she needs to relieve some "pressure" at the source......

 

[LadyVer]

I like the story idea. How old is the younger guy? I would like to see him at least 30, maybe 35. (I'm tired of the younger guy being in his 20s. It's like robbing the cradle...).

 

[jeninflorida]

The more I think about this the more i likie!

Great way for a woman to be explosed to the pleasures of two hot studs....naked!

 

[evilbill]

sorry for the delay. Well we could incorporate all those changes. The guy could be in his thirties and I could sure add another guy or two if that made it more interesting....

If I had to add more dudes then it could either be more models or perhaps the husband of the photographer getting jealous and eventually pulling everyone into a scene. hmm. thoughts?

btw sorry for the extreme delay - meh