Making of Megan

[Meganreece]

I would welcome comments on this first chapter of the story.

 

[victoria.vixen]

I would welcome comments on this first chapter of the story.

I liked the character's description and thought in general the story was well-written. You might want to warn readers that there's no sex in the story yet.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

If your looking for commentys and feedback, always post a link to your story so people don't have to hunt for it. Here's a link to yours.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=201919

--Zoot

PS. I didn't read the whole thing, but it was very tell-y. In other words, you don't take us into the story, you just tell us what happened. It keeps us distant from the action.