Make your protagonists more "real"

[Dingo_Triplesix]

A well hung man and a beautiful woman fuck like hell, several times. They have plenty of orgasms, each one more intense than the last. Litres of sperm and fluids.

At one point they are fed up with all the ecstatics and notice, that this can´t be normal. They deduct that they are not real but just imaginations of an author, used for a cheap sex story.

They plea for more reality in their existence. The author grants them their wish and gives them a real, human life. First they are stunned, how complex and rich reality is, compared to a onedimensional existence in a porn story. But then they encounter normal human problems like erectile dysfunktion, loss of sex drive, apathy, bad body smells and the like.

Now the question is: Do they want to go back into their story, where sex is always perfect...?

 

[yukonnights]

I think it's solely up to you, the 'Creator' of these 'people', to know what's best.

I suppose it depends a lot on the comparative level of pleasure & enjoyment they get in each of the places. You said it already about the one-dimensional nature of living in the "story". Do you want them to be happy in all of life — or just happy to have great sex again?

Interesting and unique idea Obviously, it can go either way and there's no one clear answer. If I had to say; It seems to me that you use the "stuck in a story" part to show that sex isn't everything in any relationship — then write their story in the real world as two people doing their best to be happy. It seems there's more risk and drama for them to remain in the real world — and that should lead to a more developed story. (but that's just me.)

 

[anopheles_leet]

In a twist, they go off and find a different author and go into a new story with a different blend of fantasy and reality!

 

[Dingo_Triplesix]

In a twist, they go off and find a different author and go into a new story with a different blend of fantasy and reality!

Hey, I LIKE it! We could do this realiter also: Another (real) author takes over and gives the protagonists a new environment. This could lead to a series, always the same people, treated by different writers.

 

[sirhugs]

I prefer my protagonists lightly roasted, with a sprinkle of cinnamon.

 

[gunhilltrain]

A well hung man and a beautiful woman fuck like hell, several times. They have plenty of orgasms, each one more intense than the last. Litres of sperm and fluids.

At one point they are fed up with all the ecstatics and notice, that this can´t be normal. They deduct that they are not real but just imaginations of an author, used for a cheap sex story.

They plea for more reality in their existence. The author grants them their wish and gives them a real, human life. First they are stunned, how complex and rich reality is, compared to a onedimensional existence in a porn story. But then they encounter normal human problems like erectile dysfunktion, loss of sex drive, apathy, bad body smells and the like.

Now the question is: Do they want to go back into their story, where sex is always perfect...?

This reminds me of an old Twilight Zone episode in which a writer (played by Keenan Wynn; he's actually a playwright) can turn his characters into real flesh and blood people who interact with him. I believe he can "delete" them by burning the paper he was writing on. It's called "A World of His Own," and it has a couple of neat twists in it.

As to how porn characters would react to becoming "more real;" offhand I don't know, but it would make for an interesting story.

 

[Carnevil9]

This reminds me of an old Twilight Zone episode in which a writer (played by Keenan Wynn; he's actually a playwright) can turn his characters into real flesh and blood people who interact with him. I believe he can "delete" them by burning the paper he was writing on. It's called "A World of His Own," and it has a couple of neat twists in it.

As to how porn characters would react to becoming "more real;" offhand I don't know, but it would make for an interesting story.

As I recall, the Keenan Wynn character is the only one who ever got the last word on Rod Serling!