Maids

[wishfulthinking]

I'm wanting to write a maid story, but can't seem to get the mental juices flowing.

Does anyone have any suggestions for a maid / master fantasy that they want to share to help the creative process? I'm not looking to write an overly bdsm piece, more a non-consent story. Cheers, WT

 

[angela146]

From the maid's perspective, I presume?

... I'm afraid. Mrs. T and the children are leaving for the weekend to be with her family. That leaves me with Mr. T.

He's been finding little ways of touching me for the past few weeks. He can't do too much when Mrs. T is arround. If I cry out, she'll hear... but now... We're alone in this big empty house.

I'm in the living room, dusting. He's in the library. Here he comes...

"Hello, Marie, you look so nice today..."

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How's that?

 

[sirhugs]

you can build slowly
as she works, she fills eyes on her
then gentle brushes against her
then fingers touching
etc

or do a switch and have the wife, not master, as the aggressor

or the daughter, just 20, back from school oversees, is watching bondage videos in the family room when maid enters to clean, notices the video, conversation follows etc

or son has his rowdy friends over to watch football, harasses her by buzzing repeatedly on the intercomm for more snacks, more beer, etc. each time, his frends are rowdier, drunker, more harassing, verbally at first then touchy feely....

or there is a large staff. it is the other staffers ( cook, gardener etc) that show her its HER turn...initiation etc


or " Maid's Night Out"...she returns from her night off smelling drunk n spunky...her tarty non uniform in dissarray...too drunk not to triggerthe security alarm. Master ( or both of couple ) awake. she then learns a lesson.

Or start by trhinking setting and character. Is it in US or abroad? Is she young , old? New maid or experienced? virgin or slut? ethnicity? is there a work visa/immigration motivation to submit to keep the job? Or is she working 'below her station' for $ reasons, and therefore more sophisticated, but still motivated? country house or city?


good luck have fun

 

[A7inchPhildo]

She's a maid she cleans thing right?

Will she clean the masters draws /private space?
Will she pick up after a wild night of sex and used condoms?
Will she clean the hot tub or stick mess off the bathroom floor?
Will she dress like a maid or in common clothes?
Will she clean the masters rooms while he is in them? What about catching him naked in the line of duty?

Maybe she is dusting a rather expensive item and it breaks. She really only has one way to pay. If she wants to keep her job.

Maybe she thinks the master is away so the kitty plays and gets caught. Naked, snooping, stealing, having a party!

 

[handlebars69]

the maid in the kitchen with the candlestick, or the pipe.... but seriously, i think it would be better her in a french maid outfit, little things catch his attention, like the way she bends over to make his bed, or the way she got on her hands and knees to retrieve the fork he dropped on the floor from under the table.... maybe its non consentual, or maybe she wants it just as much after cleaning up after his escapades.... anyway you go it would be a very interesting story.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this:

there is a very sticky spot on the floor. Someone spilled something like honey, or glue, or something like that (maybe the maid itself).

She knees down on the floor and bends forward to rub the spot off. She has to rub very hard ...

When her master comes in, he can look down her blouse, on her shaking boobs.

Then he gets behind her and watches her hot butt. She wears a short skirt ... and he can see her pants .... maybe even a wet spot in her crotch ?


Another idea could be: The family is out of the house, only the maid is left. I guess she lives in the house, and maybe they left her with some duties, like cleaning the laundry and stuff like that.

Well, she always admired the wife of her boss, because of the clothings. Now that the whole family is gone, she wants to feel how it is to wear all this expensive clothes.

She takes her maiden dress of and gets into some of the expensive evening gowns. And maybe she tries some of the lingerie.
But totally unexpected, the master comes home and sees her in the evening gown.
At first he is surprised and also a little bit angry. But then, he thinks that the maid looks much better in this evening gown, then his wife. Of course, you have to mention that the maid is much younger then his wife.

Maybe he tells her to take the evening gown off. Or maybe he tells her to keep it on, because she looks very hot in it.

She could do some kind of a fashion show for him. At first with normal clothings, then with lingerie ....

 

[handlebars69]

will someone shut up and write the damn story?

 

[handlebars69]

ok im sorry, i just cant wait for it to be written... but i just wouldnt do it justice if i tried....

 

[wishfulthinking]

Thanks for that! I'm getting there.

I'm thinking maybe there is a power struggle between the husband (bully) and wife (bitch), and the maid is caught in between. Something like she is originally employed to assist the wife, but the husband is very interested.

Definitely incorporate the ideas of touching and stroking her while she works, and getting punished for doing the wrong thing. The uniform has to be minimal, for the benefit of both the wife and the husband.