Maggots (Open)

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Randolph Graves was a political dignitary and secretly, an occult scholar. When not giving speeches, signing his name to bills and donating money to certain causes in the area, he submersed himself in his studies. His thirst for knowledge became a mania over time, though he still managed to hide it from the public. His obsessions were whispered of in less than favorable company, but none of the rumors reached the mainstream media.
But then, there came a time when obtaining and harboring such dark secrets and forbidden knowledge wasn't enough for him. He needed to spread it. To gain followers. He needed to take others and make them in his image.
Suddenly, his campaigning took a new turn. Before, Graves had been focused mostly on environmental issues. But then his goals shifted. He began to take great interest in incarceration of troubled youth.

After money changed hands, the Misguided and Angry but Gifted Golden Oppertunity Takers opened it's doors. Outwardly, it boar all the characteristics of a correctional facility. Fences of barbed wire and electrified smooth wire bordered the property on all sides, and armed guards were posted on towers to foil whoever made it that far. The building itself had no windows. The sole ingress was the huge oaken front doors. Little is known about the inside by those who aren't kept there.
The inmates themselves are nothing more than students, free to access internet, television and radio. They are allowed to walk in the grounds under no supervision, save that of the guards on the towers. They are free to mingle and do as they please short of hurting and/or killing each other. Senator Graves absolutely spoils them. Good behavior is rewarded with money, but his cash flow is such that it's no concern of his.
In truth, those boarded at MAGGOT were taken from juvinile prisons, group homes or right off the street are not there to serve a sentence at all. Graves's only interest is to teach them the hidden secrets. As long as the teens and young adults apply themselves, he gave them his solemn word they needn't return to the life they had before.
The senator himself only visits the maggots once a month, having still to make his contribution to the outside world. He instead has combed the back alleys, bars and clubs for the most learned of occult scholars who would pass along their dark wisdom. For the guards, he simply found members of his own staff and paid them a handsome sum of money to make sure no one entered unaccounted for, and no one left who wasn't supposed to.

Name: Eric Malloy
Age: 19
Description: Everything about Eric is atypical of your average miscrientt. At about five-six, his small, lithe body is perfect for running from cops. He wears a blank expression almost all the time, earning him the name "Duh" from the other maggots. At the time when the story begins, he wears stitches in his right cheek, his right eye is blackened and swollen shut, and his lip is swollen and purple. His hair is to his shoulders, and is brown. He dresses in tattered jeans and plain black Ts.
History: Eric was taken from the Spirit Lake correctional facility, where he was serving time for several counts of vandalism and one of rape. He was innocent of all but the rape. Since becoming a maggot, he has deticated himself to his studies, though it's not saying much. Though better spoken than he is given credit for, he is still not too bright.

IC:

Eric sat quietly on a picnic table, his feet on the bench. He munched away on a corndog, looking absentmindedly at the other maggots mixing with and excluding each other. "It's funny," he thought. "Even in here, there's a social problem. It's just like in the real world. People simply refuse to associate with certain other people no matter where they were."
He smiled to himself at that, making his lip hurt. That was an adult thought. He always mentally congratulated himself on having those. He hated being considered stupid, but subcontiously he feared it was true. He hated that he even had to question himself, but some people said things he didn't understand. Sometimes they asked him things, and unable to answer satisfactorily, he would make himself look ridiculous.
He finished his corndog and threw the stick into the trash can at the end of the table. The bell rang, signaling to the maggots that it was time to go inside for the night. Eric complied.
Five minutes later, he sat on a sofa in the large common area, staring blankly at an epesode of Scrubs on the giant screen TV. He didn't react to the creek of the couch springs or the cushion tilting him slightly to the left as someone joined him.

OOC: This is open to whoever wants to join. You can be a maggot, a teacher, a guard, an inquisitive visitor, whatever. You can even play Graves if you want.
All that said, post your character description and go wild. This is an idea I had and I want to see where it goes.
 
Prey

MAGGOTS
Name: Lilly Winston
Age: 18
Hope this is ok....I'll get better...promise!
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IC:
Lilly was all of 5’2, and probably didn’t weigh enough to hinder anyone just picking her up and throwing her across the room. She had quite the figure, but she always hid it beneath baggy clothes and layers regardless the season. Today it was a pair of black sweats with a baggy jersey-knit long sleeved T; a morbidly cheery picture of Happy Bunny giving the one fingered salute plastered across her breast. Her skin was almost alabaster, her rosy little heart-shaped lips always set in a rather morbid line, and if she ever lifted her eyes off her shoes one would see she had a brilliant set of emerald green eyes. Thick locks of raven hair spilled over her shoulders to hang clear to her waist, creating a lovely curtain for her to hide behind, and she had the perturbing habit of playing with it.

She looked every part the troubled little girl who was always lost in her thoughts, unable to express herself to others when confronted with real life situations. Lilly was in every sense, a wall flower, she had reached the MAGGOT compound not a week ago and had somehow managed to go rather undetected. Though in disassociating herself from the other ‘Maggots’ she had also been unable to learn their stories, troubles and just whom to stay away from.

Lilly meandered through the common area and spotted a seat on the end of a couch that faced the tv, but there was someone there. A young man, she typically tried to stay away from men of any age. Her eyes darted quickly over the rather vacant face of the boy that seemed to almost meld with the couch, he didn’t seem like he would give a flying crap if she performed a song and dance right there on the coffee table. Cautiously Lilly moved over to the sofa and sank down into the cushions, pulling her knees up into her chest and hugging them as her eyes flickered blankly to the TV screen. She wasn’t paying any attention to what was on, she simply wanted to get lost in it; today was her 18th birthday, whoopee! It was just like all the others, she still felt as if she had stunted at 16 and she never knew where she was going to be moved next, another one of those foster children who got moved for reasons nobody cared to talk about.

As she sat there, she began rubbing her thighs, not in any obscene way, but in a manner in which one might wonder if she had an itch. In reality her clothes hid a lot more than just her ripe little figure, it was the pain that made her keep rubbing, that delicious stinging sensation that let her know she was alive; the memories of her self-inflicted punishment that nobody else would give her. There didn't seem to be regular physical exams in this place, unlike in the last home she was in, that had been horrible, and yet in a way, the embarrassment of the staff running their eyes over her every inch made her tingle, their strict words and scoldings each time they found a new little cut... Suddenly Lilly blinked, tilting her head forward till her hair shielded her face, she peered between the inky locks to steal a glance at the young man on the opposite end of the couch. Wonder why he's got that blank look on his face...
 
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After staring blankly at the screen for a time, Eric leaned back on the couch and let his gaze slip from the TV to a cockroach skittering back and forth under the entertainment center. He had lost all interest in the show. "I sawed this one a bunch o' times a'ready," he said in an undertone. Used to having no one around, he had developed the habbit of talking to himself (an action that didn't at all sway suspician in his favor when people wondered about his mental compitence). He spoke like an uneducated street punk. His vacant eyes followed the roach back and forth. This, however, made for only about a minute of entertainment, and he cast about for something else to focus upon.
He spied the girl at the other end of the couch. Her position seemed defensive to him. She looked as though she wanted to make herself as small as possible. She had not acknowledged him, therefore he did not feel it his duty to force his conversation on her. He simply looked at her. For several moments, his eyes rested on the veil of hair she hid behind.
When it was clear she was comfortable and had no intentions of doing anything worth watching, he looked away. "I's a girl over there," he muttered to himself, sounding like a toddler just beginning to master the art of speaking. He attempted to watch TV again, but having seen this episode enough times to memorize it, he soon returned his relentless, slightly unnerving stare to his company.
"Who are you, girl?" he asked the concealing cascade of hair that obscured her face. Surprisingly, his speech came out clear and coherent.
 
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Lilly watched the guy, her body going stiff every time his eyes landed on her. She looked away, followed his line of vision for a moment before she saw something skittering beneath the entertainment center that made her eyes widen. She didn't cry out so much as she made a little gagging noise in her throat. Mustn't draw attention to ourselves. Her blood began to thrum in her ears, blocking out the boys ramblings. Cockroaches....God she hated the things...she couldn't stand them in fact. A year back she had been moved into one family's home, they weren't rich, none of them ever were, but it was their cleaning habits that disturbed her the most. All the little things that went bump in the night were because a colony of the wretched bugs were moving in to stay. A shudder ran down her spine as she curled in tighter upon herself.

"Who are you girl?"

It snapped her out of her trance, she lifted her gaze and saw that the boy was staring at her, suddenly she began to fidget. Her heart picked up the pace in her chest, she felt nervous simply for the fact that he had noticed her. She rubbed her thighs a little harder before letting her eyes wander up over his lithe frame to settle onto his own. She couldn't see him as clearly as she would if she would just move that damned hair, but it was her security blanket....one of them anyway. Girl? Her lips parted, then snapped shut. The opened and clamped shut another time. Finally she took a deep breath and for all her efforts, her voice came out a small and quiet as she felt. "..Lilly..." who was he? Why was it that he had suddenly broken out of his stupor to notice her? Move....you should move.....you disturbed him Lilly.... She shook her head a little knowing the voice inside was right. She was always right. After all, the voice belonged to her.

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(OOC: Great job on description of the body language ^_^ )
 
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OOC: I'm still working on that. In English class I am a force to be feared. But on the LIT forms, I feel just as small and scared as your character.

IC:
"Said 'er name's Lilly," Eric muttered, losing interest soon after. He fell to toying with a tattered corner of the sofa cover with one hand, eyes now focused on nothing, though still pointing in the girl's general direction. He set to picking lint balls and pulling stray threads from the frayed cloth. This kept his simple mind occupied for all of five minutes.
Then, he looked at Lilly again. He didn't remember ever coming into contact with her before, and he had a fairly good memory of the people at the compound. There were those who made it a point of tormenting him, and there were the ones that just left him alone. He liked them better, for no matter how often he looked at them, they didn't lash out. They didn't acknowledge him either, but better to have no attention than bad attention.
"Are you a nice person?" he asked, just as articulately as before.
 
This time she heard him, his little mutterings, repeating what she had said sardonically or as if he were speaking to himself. Consider where you are Lilly... She was right, he likely was talking to himself, but everyone had their troubles, right? Lilly watched the boy pick at the couch for a few minutes, easily amused. No matter, so was she. She fidgeted a little in discomfort for the drawn out silence, and when he spoke she jumped a little. Her head turning fully to face him, "A nice person?" She considered the question for a moment, catching herself she bowed her head again and began picking at an imaginary thread on her sweatpants.

She gave a little shrug, What an odd question...what an odd boy. But then again maybe he was as alone as she, maybe he was one of the many kids who bore the brunt of everyone's anger. Peering at him again through her 'veil' she regarded his appearance again, she came to no conclusion either way. For all she knew he was one of the dangerous head-cases. One of many around here it would seem. She gave an uncertain little shrug, then nodded. "I guess so..." She was infact very sweet, simply troubled, bottled up.

(OOC: Keep asking questions, hehe make her feel abit invaded....wonder if Eric is interested in ANYTHING. I started out like you, in fact I'm still quite shy about my talents but they've grown since I started writing on sites like this. My content and quality has expanded due to taking little bits and pieces from other writers knowledge and use of words. Yours will too, dont worry. I"ll likely drag some out of you. You write really well, however I will still nudge you for a wee bit more content. hehe)
 
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"She guesses, man. Sh's not too sure on how nic she is. ... I know, I know." The last was spoken as if replying to the first. His eyes closed and he placed his thumb and forefinger at either corner of his mouth. It made him look as if he was in deep thought. In truth, he was, but only on what to say next. The last time he had a conversation of any length was with Nina, the girl he had raped after she had jokingly told him "I want someone to just grab me and take control."
Suggestions for things to ask or tell about chased each other around in his head, each sounding just as dull as the one before it. Finally he took his hand from his mouth and opened his eyes to look at Lilly. "You guess you're nice? Then you could be bad, right? That's why you're here."

OOC: I guess that's fair. I get to invade your character and you get to drain me of all literary strength with every post. Haha
 
Lilly stared in silence, the boy was odd, very odd. Shouldn't have sat down...shouldn't have answered. His retort was a bit startling, if she was good then why was she here? Could she be bad after all? Was it all really her fault? She didn't want to think about it. Turning her face away her fingertips bit into the thighs of her jeans. She didn't owe him any explanation, she didn't need this. She was getting nervous, she hated confrontation, hated it.

She shook her head softly, her voice coming out as little more than a whisper. "No...no I'm not bad." She stole another fleeting glance at the boy then looked off to the side, in her peripheral she could see the door. She could go to her room, she could make it stop. She could calm down. "Who are you?" The words came out a bit defensively, as if to ask what gave him the right to question her.

(OOC: Push it for length luv where is he going to go with it?)
 
OOC: Sorry? Push it for length?
As for where he's going with it, he doesn't know yet.

IC:
Eric sensed deffensiveness from his new acquaintence. It gave him a perverse feeling of strength he could feel, but not understand. At her question, he surprised himself by extending a hand to her and saying "My apologies. How very rude you must think me. My name is Eric." His eyes widened as he heard the perfectly spoken words issue from his own mouth. It had happened before, but it wasn't often enough to make him feel as intelligent as it made him sound.
"Don't call me Duh," he added as an afterthought, lapsing into the childish manner with which he had addressed himself. It came out sounding a bit like a plea.
 
His eyes widened as he heard the perfectly spoken words issue from his own mouth. It had happened before, but it wasn't often enough to make him feel as intelligent as it made him sound.
"Don't call me Duh," he added as an afterthought, lapsing into the childish manner with which he had addressed himself. It came out sounding a bit like a plea.[/QUOTE]

Lilly watched the boy go through an odd little change, or so she thought, perhaps it was just her imagination. Suddenly the boy's hand moved towards her, Lilly jumped a bit and pressed back into her arm of the couch with an odd look on her face.

"My apologies. How very rude you must think me. My name is Eric." Lilly shook her head and just stared at the outstretched hand as if the boy had just sprouted a sixth finger.

"Don't call me Duh," She shook her head again and slowly pulled herself off the couch. TOO CLOSE! Her shirt sleeves fell over the tips of her fingers as she began to back up. Lilly didn't like to be touched, not boy boys and not by men. Whichever he was he had tread very close to that line. "Eric...I.....I gotta go!" It was all she said before almost runnng out of the room, raven locks fluttering behind her with her haste.

Lilly's heart was pounding as she turned outside the reck-room door. A girl with short cropped, hair gave her a look of disgust and murmured something to her in another language she couldn't quite peg. You've gotta get to your room...no one can get you in your room. Lilly broke out into a run, skidding down the length of the hallway towards the dormitories.

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(OOC: Might I suggest he follow? Figure out her room number? Btw, PM me about what the classes of the occult entail.)
 
Eric had been called primal in his urges and mannerisms. It was times like these when he saw why. It truly wasn't fitting, and if he had known the word's proper definition, he would have understood. As it was, he didn't. But predatory would have been closer to home. In one swift movement, he was on his feet. He dashed for the door through which Lilly had disappeared.
The girl at the door to the Rec Room squealed indignantly as he brushed past her and shot toward the rooms. He arrived before he realized it and collided with a wall. With a groan, he rebounded and swayed on his feet. Then he fell.
"Fuckin' douch rag." he muttered as he got shakily to his feet, rubbing his forehead with one hand. The corridor in which he stood stretched to his left and right and back the way he had come. Before him was the stone wall he had hit.
He knew that the boys' wing was to the right. He slept there himself. But where could the girls be? Where was Lilly? For a good ten minutes, he stood pondering this question, a bump rising in the middle of his forehead like a horn just beginning to sprout.
Finally, it came to him. He spoke aloud, pointing in all directions as he addressed them. "Back there is where I was before. Over there is where boys sleep. So that means ... 'kay, that way."
He set off down the girls' wing, not even stopping to acknowledge the whoops and hollars from down the boys' wing. "All righ, retard! Go get some!." The voice laughed and a few others joined it.
On either side of him, rooms seemed to pass him rather than the other way around, though he knew that not to be true, as he had passed rooms several times before and they had stopped moving when he had.
Almost at the end of the hall, a door caught his eye. While most doors bore nameplates or pictures, this one was bare and nondescript. That is, accept for the number 212 in the place where a peep whole went on most doors. He stopped in front of it and knocked.
 
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