Maddeningly hot

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Honestly I probably should just go ahead and write this one since it should be a short one to write but maybe someone can think up a fun spin on it that could lead to a longer story.

Elevator pitch: parody of eldritch horror where it’s not an unknowable terror that is driving people to madness but rather …there’s a woman or man who is too hot.

Typical set up: strange disappearances around a manor that either has a dark history or was recently purchased by a strange woman who wears concealing clothes and is tended to by a strange servant. Anyone that has gone to the house has not returned or has been found days later, a gibbering wreck.

Our lead goes to investigate and manages to discover the terrible secret: she’s impossibly, paradoxically hot. To look upon even her face is to go mad and when she bares even her legs, most men soon find themselves howling at the moon or find their cocks spilling forth all of their seed. Even the straightest woman would find herself gushing to the point of dehydration as she would try to make a feeble effort to kneel between the gorgeous woman’s legs.

Lead attempts to protect themself and manages to flee but writes in their journal that they feel the need to go back.

Possibly an epilogue could be added where the woman’s servant (actually her ace friend) remarks how maybe they should have tried to go somewhere a bit more liberated as they clean up another puddle of cum and the woman bemoans she’ll be spending another night with only her fingers for company.
 
According to legend, Medusa was once a gorgeous woman who compared her own beauty to that of Aphrodite. Aphrodite cursed her, turning her into a gorgon. Still beautiful, but with a headful of snakes and a petrifying gaze. Allegedly killed by the first hero, Perseus.

Perhaps your maddeningly hot woman is another such woman, cursed by a jealous goddess. Consumed by lust herself, she seduces without trying, but is unable to find even one man who can withstand her orgasmic aura long enough to please her. Perhaps finding such a man will end her curse?
 
The pure beauty of a nymph can kill, per the lore of Dungeons & Dragons. Run with it!

Maybe instead, the medusa only turns a certain part to stone for the guys who meet her? Satyrisis, uncurable. (Part of the magic maintains adequate circulation, keeping off the real-world medical issues as a beneficial effect)

Now, eldritch implies something from beyond reality to me, something that breaks the very rules of reality. Taking that and stretching it to cover lust versus the more-typical sanity and you could start pulling in succubus/incubus (ie, 'bus) mythology. They don't drain your life force, they drain your reality. The more reality you give them - the more you cum - the less real you become, slowly gaining more 'bus traits until you become one yourself. Strongly recommend other oddities happening over time - maybe an early quirk might be only maintaining a single layer of clothing. Any clothing that gets hidden by other pieces just disappears? Or an incubus cock becomes more and more motile, under the conscious control of the incubus? Or the 'bus can ignore gravity (IE, 'fly') by warping reality around them, an effect that happens to look something like bat wings if glimpsed but clearly weirder if you're able to study it.
 
...an early quirk might be only maintaining a single layer of clothing. Any clothing that gets hidden by other pieces just disappears?

Damn, that's so deliciously wicked a curse. I just imagine a shy-ish girl wrapping herself in a towel on the beach, and her strapless one-piece under going poof without her knowing. Or throwing a raincoat over her prom dress...

But I think it's rather belong to a broken, glitchy gamelit worl. Although, if we talk reality breakdowns, revealing our universe as a simulation by baring the bugs could as well be one.
 
Glad ya like the twisty bits fermented twixt my ears!

I find magical worlds & their systems/rules/laws very entertaining. Finding something eldritch in such a situation - or fae, or diabolical, or what-have-you - that breaks those rules to be of additional interest. When a fire-flinging mage gets upset when something ‘breaks the rules’ I tend to get at least a chuckle, if not a maniacal laugh going.
 
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