Lustonbury Festival - A multipart story

[emily_hughs]

Hello everybody.

Second story just gone online. Its the first of a multipart story. Probably be about four or five parts. Let me know what you think, and if you would like to see the other parts.

All my stories are available via my author page at http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=582667&page=submissions

I have an account on Yahoo! Messenger, emily_hughs_21. If anyone would like to see stories that I haven't posted here, contact me through there and I will send them to you.

Feedback on all stories would be greatly appreciated.

Many thanks,

Emily Hughs

 

[emily_hughs]

Lustonbury Festival

Not many responses to this one. Does this mean it wasn't as good as the first one? Let me know please, so I can decide whether to continue with the other three parts.

 

[kbate]

You have minor grammar problems in places, few but they are there. A proofreader (second set of eyes) could help.

The primary reason for less comment is the sudden close. Just as 200 people are about to have it on, it ends. WTF! *grin*

 

[spyro1123]

yes it seems like an interesting premise, that never got going.

We could use a little more detail about whats going on too.