Lustful Summoning Help, Please

[mjm202036]

Can some you fellow authors help me. I've become a little tripped up in my Lustful Summoning series. I've been trying to figure out how to continue the sixth part of my series, but I'm really stuck. I've thought about just skipping the destruction of the pimp and his partner, just starting up with Jason coming back awake and finding the bodies, the succubi removing the bodies into their realm, and then the police returning...but I'm not sure if that is a good idea. Plus, I don't know how to deal with the two new succubi. I'm trying to give each succubi an animal theme, like the new girl has the abilities of a serpent. I want the other two to be like a spider and an octopus/squid, but without the appearance of those creatures, of course. Any suggestions would really be appreciated. Thanks for all help that comes up and I will mention those that help me, when I finally finish the story and post it.

Your's Greatfully,

Jason Morris

 

[MathGirl]

Good grief!

Originally posted by mjm202036 Your's Greatfully,
Jason Morris

Dear Jason,
Sounds like a simple, straightforward, true to life story. I can't see why you're having trouble with it.
MG

 

[Seattle Zack]

I've found that crustaceans are usually good for really spicing up a demonic otherworldly pimp serpent posession story .....

Seriously, though, Jason, I'm not sure what you are asking. I doubt any of us has read the story (stories? chapters?) you refer to, and an arachnid succubi specialist is pretty hard to come by.

My advice, take a break from the story, let it ferment in your mind a bit. Maybe write something else. You sound more frustrated than anything else.

--Zack

 

[snooper]

... an arachnid succubi specialist is pretty hard to come by. ...

I'd say that sounds pretty average for this board.

 

[MaxSebastian]

I don't know how to deal with the two new succubi

What the towering buttocks are succubi?

 

[mjm202036]

good grief...

Aren't we all getting a little cheeky here. Has anyone even gone to my stories to get an idea of what I'm talking abou, other than just jumping on here and giving ther smart remarks that aren't of any help. I thought that maybe as fellow authors, I would get something more than just these cruel comments. But I guess none of you really want to give any help.

 

[MathGirl]

Re: good grief...

I thought that maybe as fellow authors, I would get something more than just these cruel comments. But I guess none of you really want to give any help.

Dear MJM,
Firstly, this really is not an appropriate place to appeal for help with your stories. Especially those as arcane as yours. Nextly, you did not post a link to your stories, and it is highly unlikely anyone is going to go rummaging around on the site trying to find them. After nextly, you ain't got no idea what "cruel comments" are until you get some of the less understanding persons here on your virgin arse.
Helpfully,
MG
Ps. If anyone was contemplating offering you help, the above comments definitely ruled it out.
Pps. Yes, what are succubi?
Ppps. Another satisfied customer.

 

[CWatson]

...Dude, since when do we HAVE to help you?

 

[Seattle Zack]

Nextly?

In medieval legend, a succubus (plural succubi; from Latin succubare, "to lie under") is a female demon which comes to men, especially monks, in their dreams to seduce them and have sexual intercourse with them.

This legend was an explanation for the phenomena of wet dreams and sleep paralysis.

Lilith and the Lilin (Jewish), Belili (Sumerian) and Rusalka (Slavic) were succubi.

Lastly,
--Zack

 

[AmericanWench]

Re: Re: good grief...

Dear MJM,
Firstly, this really is not an appropriate place to appeal for help with your stories.

Well, in all fairness...where else would he go but to the authors hangout? Although, it is also to be expected to get some ribbing about a story. I am completely out of my realm on the story line given, as I am sure many authors here are.
But, MG is right, that there are many here who would have given you much more of a problem AND you should post a link.
MJM, I would suggest you sift through the responses, for anything useful, and just leave the rest. Wish I could help, but as I said, I have no clue to the subject matter, and the story sounds VERY detailed. You've obviously done a lot of research, and so far planned a very good story, so don't get discouraged, try not to dwell on it if you get stuck.

 

[MaxSebastian]

Re: Re: Re: good grief...

[BWell, in all fairness...where else would he go but to the authors hangout? [/B]

Well why not a good old-fashioned Literotica editor?

Perhaps an editor that doesn't mind figuring out how to continue stories about pimps molesting spider- and octopus/squid-like female demons.

I'm pretty sure I didn't tick that particular box myself when I signed up as an editor, but hey, maybe someone did!


Damn, I'm so closed-minded.

 

[Seattle Zack]

Jason, every would-be author (myself certainly included) has gone through exactly what you're going through right now. I've found that, as I said previously, the best thing you can do is to take a break from it. Trying to force your writing will just result in bad writing.

Put the story down for a week -- go get drunk; go bowling; hang out at the lake and watch pretty girls; poison pigeons in the park; listen to Dark Side of the Moon again. Stimulate yourself a little (insert own joke here). Your story will still be there, percolating in your subconscious. Keep a notebook beside your bed to jot down those elusive thoughts that disappear before the coffee hits.

Your dilemma is not unique, but another author telling you "write about this doing this to this and then write about this ....." is not the answer. It's your story, after all, so make it your own. Just relax and let it come to you.

--Zack