Lucky Dip incest

[Wyatt]

how does this sound?

A girl is having a sleepover with her 2 friends when they notice her brother spying on them.One of the girls decides that he should get a chance with one of them.She suggests throwing dice to decide which one he gets.He must have sex with the winning girl in front of the other two.He agrees as he really fancies his sister's friends.

When the dice are rolled the winning girl is,not surprisingly ...his sister.She is reluctant as is he but her two girlfriends insist he can only have them after he has taken his sister's cherry.

any good or too hackneyed?

 

[BlackSnake]

Maybe it's the chill in the air, but I like the idea. I would have saved the sister for last. They girls could pull a sex act out of a hat and then roll the dice to see which one of them would perform it.

This way the story is long enough for build up. The first act could be something like getting nipples sucked. Who else but the girl with the biggest tits has to allow the brother to lick and suck on her tits while the other girls watch. The acts should be simple, such as french kissing, tit licking, finger fucking, hand job, blow job, pussy licking, straight fuck, etc. This is so that all the girls get a chance to engage the brother in one or more of the acts. The sister should do, french kissing, handjob, finger fucking, and then straight fucking. Since her friends are doing things with the brother, she is compelled to do it also.

You can hide the sister's desire to be with her brother.

 

[sirhugs]

you might add scenes of the girls doing to each other.
if you want any hint of realism, sis must be reluctant too, and only pulled into it as the intensity increases.

 

[BlackSnake]

you might add scenes of the girls doing to each other.
if you want any hint of realism, sis must be reluctant too, and only pulled into it as the intensity increases.

I wouldn't give the sister too much credit, but she has to pretend not to want to do it in front of her friends. The setting an account for some of her willingness as well. Sneaking a little "drank" into her room.

I do think that she should be quicker to suck her brother's cock and to try something with her friends.

 

[Wyatt]

How about this.She loses the draw,throwing dice...whatever game of chance and she offers to suck her brothers cock.The two girls lose next so have to put on a show for the siblings...when the sister loses the two girls want to see her cherry popped by her brother.I don't think she should be too willing to go this far but the two girls insist...possible blackmail?

If any of you have ever read anything of mine you will see I do blackmail/nonconsent best.I've tried other stuff but want to try an incest story.I'd like to get a bit of blackmail type stuff into this if possible.

 

[sirhugs]

wyatt:

nothing wrong with your idea, but how about a scene of brother with one of the other girls first, to loosen things up? Then when Betty says " if you chicken out, everyone at school will hear how you sucked his cock- and here's the Piolaroid to prove it1"

 

[Wyatt]

wyatt:

nothing wrong with your idea, but how about a scene of brother with one of the other girls first, to loosen things up? Then when Betty says " if you chicken out, everyone at school will hear how you sucked his cock- and here's the Piolaroid to prove it1"

Yup.That's the one so far.The other ideas are good but I like working with the blackmail angle.a virgin blackmailed into giving it up for her brother by her two best friends.I like it

I've only ever written one incest story and I was swamped with feedback whereas other stories in more mainline categories go without comment.That's why I want to write a good incest story.Wasn't impressed by my other one.I think the blackmail element is essential.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

what about this:

there are the 3 girls. They have some fun together, and somehow, the brother notices that. He tells the girls that he really would love to join. The sister (Sarah) is reluctant, but the other 2 (Sally and Michelle) girls like the idea.

So, at first Sally has some fun with the boy, while Michelle and Sarah have some fun together .....

Sally is doing a blowjob on the guy, while Michelle licks Sarahs pussy. But at some point, Michelle stops to lick Sarah. Instead, her own brother starts to lick her. Then he finger fucks her. You see, at first she is reluctant, but because of the foreplay, she becomes so horny, that she doesn't care if he is her brother or not ....

 

[Wyatt]

I think it is important that the sister is going along with it unwillingly right until he slides his cock into her.She has only allowed this due to being filmed willingly sucking his cock and 69ing her girlfriends. Under duress she allows him to slide into her but only if he agrees not to cum in her.She is also worried that her performance won't be good as she is a virgin and doesn't want to look inexperienced.(Perhaps her friends had rubbished her cock sucking ability as she had to be forced to swallow?)

Perhaps she is really into it until she realises her brother hasn't any protection and is about to cum inside her?

With it being a blackmail story there is always room for a part two as well?

 

[BlackSnake]

wyatt:

nothing wrong with your idea, but how about a scene of brother with one of the other girls first, to loosen things up? Then when Betty says " if you chicken out, everyone at school will hear how you sucked his cock- and here's the Piolaroid to prove it1"

I like the idea of having a picture proof as blackmail. To begin with, before the brother comes the sister is bragging to her best friends how much she likes giving blowjobs, and tells shocking stories (lies) about guys she's been with. The best should have known of this, but didn't (the are suspicious).

One of the sister's friends asks about her brother. She told them that she has seen him jerking off (she lies). Her friends are envious, expressing there desires to what sex. They continue their sex stories among themselves. One of the friends talk about a sex game, which seems interesting to the girls.

One of the friends bump into the brother on the way to the bath room. The friend is very hot to the brother, so he has no problem allowing her to drag him into his sister's room.

Seeing her brother, the sister is worried about the lies she told being discovered. The brother has a hardon due to the sight of the girls in their sexy night clothes. One of the girls remake "It looks as big as you said it was." The brother looks curiously at his sister, who's face is turning red.

The friends insist on playing the game, which the brother agrees only wanting an opportunity with the girls. As part of the rules of the game, the brother would be blind folded. If he guessed which of the girls who he is acting with then he gets to choose a sex act from the bowl to perform on them. Yes, he agrees.

The first two turns were blowjobs done by the friends and he guessed wrong both times. The girls don't give him the right answer, so he doesn't know. On the third turn, the sister also chooses a blowjob. She is a little reluctant, but out of fear of her lies being discovered she goes along. With her brother blind folded, it was much easier for her.

As she begins sucking her brother's cock one of the girls pots the sister's instant camera and takes a picture of the sister sucking on her brother's cock right as he begins to blow his wad into her mouth. The sister doesn't protest out of fear that her brother might can tell who it was sucking on his cock.

The brother guesses, but he is wrong again. To his sister's relief. The next draw is for one of the girls to get their cunt licked. The sister is again chosen by the throw of the dice. She protests silently to her friends, but her friend hold up the picture and indicates her threat.

The sister gives in removing her panties and spreading wide, as the girlfriends position the brother to her virgin pussy. The sister had lied about not being a virgin and about having serveral guys to lick her pussy before. In fact, no guy has every seen her pussy before.

As the blind folded brother unknowingly begins to lick his sister's cunt, he is making remarks of how much he is enjoying it. The sister, inspite of herself, expresses her feelings of having her cunt licked. A few more pictures are taken of the scene.

When the brother guesses, he is wrong again.

Next, one of the friends draw a fuck. The brother fucks the friend blindfolded and after guesses right. He draws a fuck again, so he get's to fuck the same girl again, and he chooses to do it doggie style.

The sex acts are only for two minutes, and brother at this point had only cum once, which was in his sister's mouth. The brother is able to get a good feel of the girls, but time runs out before he is ready to blow his wad.....

 

[Wyatt]

Bloody hell Blacksnake! That is epic stuff! I love the bit with the friend waving the polaroid and the sister having to remain silent or give the game away.

Also the lies the sister has told are a nice twist.

Basically i love it so far...Nice one!

Of course the sister can be blackmailed into doing just about anything.I'm sure the friends would give the brother a snap or two and then they would all have a hold over the young (Ex) virgin

 

[BlackSnake]

Bloody hell Blacksnake! That is epic stuff! I love the bit with the friend waving the polaroid and the sister having to remain silent or give the game away.

Also the lies the sister has told are a nice twist.

Basically i love it so far...Nice one!

Of course the sister can be blackmailed into doing just about anything.I'm sure the friends would give the brother a snap or two and then they would all have a hold over the young (Ex) virgin

I can see a part II, already with one of the friends visiting the sister. The first is curious about being with another girl, which she hasn't tried before. She now has a willing participant, who will keep her mouth shut about. The sister is blackmailed to have sex with her friend. This would be an one-on-one forced lesbian type story.

Furthering a part III the game played again, but this time ending with the brother realizing that he is fucking his sister. I can see her screaming out his name as he is thrusting his cock into her last virgin whole.

I can see the sister getting blackmailed by one person or another for for or five chapters before she is faced with being truly exposed.

She meets the possible exposure with sexual acts that ends the possiblity of further backmail.

 

[pointless]

how about nice, consensual sex, maybe? just a thought.

 

[Wyatt]

how about nice, consensual sex, maybe? just a thought.

I can't write good consensual stuff.Some of my feedback suggests I can't write period.I've just watched Amityville 2 with diane Keaton and her brother having an incestual liason which is what gave me the idea of an incest.I suppose I could always make the brother a demon and spin her head around very fast...but that would be pointless

 

[BlackSnake]

I like this idea so much, I think that I will have a go of it as a story here on Lit, and then see if I can work it out into a script for my movie idea.

Any sugguestion for names of characters?

Sister - (Female):
Brother - (Male):
Friend 1 - (Female):
Friend 2 - (Female):

Setting: Home of the sister and brother late at night. Parents away.

 

[sirhugs]

Sister - (Female): Marlie
Brother - (Male): Mark
Friend 1 - (Female): Samantha
Friend 2 - (Female): Cate

 

[BlackSnake]

Sister - (Female): Marlie
Brother - (Male): Mark
Friend 1 - (Female): Samantha
Friend 2 - (Female): Cate

Marlie and Mark, sound like twins....

 

[Wyatt]

i like your style Blacksnake.Go for it.And I've just remembered it is Diane Franklin in amityville 2.i take it you have no problem with the blackmail angle?

 

[sirhugs]

Marlie and Mark, sound like twins....

could be, or just parents that like "M"

 

[BlackSnake]

i like your style Blacksnake.Go for it.And I've just remembered it is Diane Franklin in amityville 2.i take it you have no problem with the blackmail angle?

I have no problem with blackmail. I doubt if it would work in real-life though. I know I would deal with whatever comes instead of letting someone control me.

 

[BlackSnake]

could be, or just parents that like "M"

It could be, but it would be difficult at best from me to find twin actors. I would go with the parents and the letter "M" thing.

 

[Wyatt]

I have no problem with blackmail. I doubt if it would work in real-life though. I know I would deal with whatever comes instead of letting someone control me.

Yes...but you are not a woman with a bit of "sub" in you.

At least I don't think so judging by your Av.

 

[BlackSnake]

Yes...but you are not a woman with a bit of "sub" in you.

At least I don't think so judging by your Av.

No, I not a woman, but if I was....all of my problems would be over:

I don't need to work hard to provide food and shelter for myself. I a TV and a computer, so that takes care of the social issues. Now, give me my own tits and pussy....and I will be on top of the pyramid with self-actualization.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I am not that happy about "Marlie" (I guess that is because one of my favorite NASCAR drivers is Sterling Marlin - for me, Marlie is just too similar to a surname)

some of my favorite names would be:

Sister - (Female): Melissa
Brother - (Male): Stuart
Friend 1 - (Female): Sabrina
Friend 2 - (Female): Juliet (or Julia)

I have also some personal favorite female names: Rachel, Maria, Heather, Lucy, Heidi ..... oh, and can someone tell me, if this 2 names are also known in the USA ? "Yvonne" or "Dagmar" ?

 

[sirhugs]

I am not that happy about "Marlie" (I guess that is because one of my favorite NASCAR drivers is Sterling Marlin - for me, Marlie is just too similar to a surname)

some of my favorite names would be:

Sister - (Female): Melissa
Brother - (Male): Stuart
Friend 1 - (Female): Sabrina
Friend 2 - (Female): Juliet (or Julia)

I have also some personal favorite female names: Rachel, Maria, Heather, Lucy, Heidi ..... oh, and can someone tell me, if this 2 names are also known in the USA ? "Yvonne" or "Dagmar" ?

I think melisa is too "cheerleadery".
" Stuart" sounds too preppy.