Loving Wives

[photoxtreme]

Even though the hotel room was dark, except for the light coming from underneath the hallway door, I could make out the shapes on the bed. Just an hour before we had met Sam in the hotel bar. One thing led to another and after a few drinks we invited him up to our room. It had always been our fantasy to have my wife take pleasure in the arms of another man knowing that it would just be a one night stand. I sat in a chair off to the side enjoying the subtle moans of pleasure that involuntarily escaped my wife's lips. I was completely wrapped up in the moment when a man I didn't know the name of entered through the side door. He sat beside me and told me his name was Anonymous. He quickly let me know that I was a lousy writer and that that was no "loving wife" on that bed with that man. I tried to explain to him it was just fantasy.

"You are a sick pervert he continued."

I tried to inform him again that this was my fantasy and he could stay and watch if he wanted but if it disgusted him so much, he was free to leave.

Again he insisted that that was no loving wife on that bed.

"Don't you understand it's all fantasy?" I exclaimed.

"We both love each other and this turns us both on. Why should you condemn two adults who are enjoying themselves?"

I could tell with the disgusted look on his face I was going no where with this mental midget. Again I suggested he leave if he found no pleasure in what he was seeing. He stomped out angrily but not before he rated my wife's performance as a 1. Oh well.....

Soon the door opened again and in walked another individual. He introduced himself by name and told me how hot this was. I invited him to stay and enjoy the view. We both found it quite hot, not to mention my wife, who continued to enjoy this new found passion.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Even though the hotel room was dark, except for the light coming from underneath the hallway door, I could make out the shapes on the bed. Just an hour before we had met Sam in the hotel bar. One thing led to another and after a few drinks we invited him up to our room. It had always been our fantasy to have my wife take pleasure in the arms of another man knowing that it would just be a one night stand. I sat in a chair off to the side enjoying the subtle moans of pleasure that involuntarily escaped my wife's lips. I was completely wrapped up in the moment when a man I didn't know the name of entered through the side door. He sat beside me and told me his name was Anonymous. He quickly let me know that I was a lousy writer and that that was no "loving wife" on that bed with that man. I tried to explain to him it was just fantasy.

"You are a sick pervert he continued."

I tried to inform him again that this was my fantasy and he could stay and watch if he wanted but if it disgusted him so much, he was free to leave.

Again he insisted that that was no loving wife on that bed.

"Don't you understand it's all fantasy?" I exclaimed.

"We both love each other and this turns us both on. Why should you condemn two adults who are enjoying themselves?"

I could tell with the disgusted look on his face I was going no where with this mental midget. Again I suggested he leave if he found no pleasure in what he was seeing. He stomped out angrily but not before he rated my wife's performance as a 1. Oh well.....

Soon the door opened again and in walked another individual. He introduced himself by name and told me how hot this was. I invited him to stay and enjoy the view. We both found it quite hot, not to mention my wife, who continued to enjoy this new found passion.

Is there anything in particular you are looking for?

 

[photoxtreme]

Just writing a little bit of satire. Obviously not well I take it.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Just writing a little bit of satire. Obviously not well I take it.

No, I thought you did a good job of it. You wouldn't happen to be another disillusioned LW story writer?

 

[photoxtreme]

I wouldn't say disallusioned. My self esteem isn't determined by the Anonymous feedback bandit. I'd say more awestruck by the stupidity of the vocal minority. Just thought I'd write about them.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

I wouldn't say disallusioned. My self esteem isn't determined by the Anonymous feedback bandit. I'd say more awestruck by the stupidity of the vocal minority. Just thought I'd write about them.

Well, you're not the first, nor will you be the last to complain about the anon morons that seem to frequent that category. That's why I will never waste my time writing for that category.

 

[LEATBT]

We have all had a moan about 'Anon' wandering into the wrong category and not having the gumption to turn around and leave again, but this was a refreshing slant on the situation. Thanks

 

[the_scribbler]

Wonderful satire, photo! Very eloquently put. It's unfortunate that drkside completely missed the point. Yes, we all know that drkside doesn't understand or approve of the whole LW thing because they've committed it to print ad nauseum.

Anyway, keep up the great writing!!

 

[kellyhockey]

Even though the hotel room was dark, except for the light coming from underneath the hallway door, I could make out the shapes on the bed. Just an hour before we had met Sam in the hotel bar. One thing led to another and after a few drinks we invited him up to our room. It had always been our fantasy to have my wife take pleasure in the arms of another man knowing that it would just be a one night stand. I sat in a chair off to the side enjoying the subtle moans of pleasure that involuntarily escaped my wife's lips. I was completely wrapped up in the moment when a man I didn't know the name of entered through the side door. He sat beside me and told me his name was Anonymous. He quickly let me know that I was a lousy writer and that that was no "loving wife" on that bed with that man. I tried to explain to him it was just fantasy.

"You are a sick pervert he continued."

I tried to inform him again that this was my fantasy and he could stay and watch if he wanted but if it disgusted him so much, he was free to leave.

Again he insisted that that was no loving wife on that bed.

"Don't you understand it's all fantasy?" I exclaimed.

"We both love each other and this turns us both on. Why should you condemn two adults who are enjoying themselves?"

I could tell with the disgusted look on his face I was going no where with this mental midget. Again I suggested he leave if he found no pleasure in what he was seeing. He stomped out angrily but not before he rated my wife's performance as a 1. Oh well.....

Soon the door opened again and in walked another individual. He introduced himself by name and told me how hot this was. I invited him to stay and enjoy the view. We both found it quite hot, not to mention my wife, who continued to enjoy this new found passion.

Very cute..smart and sarcastic..the problem is that it would go over the heads of too many people.

 

[vixenblack]

have you ever thought of penthouse mag? LOL

 

[NaughtyHubby]

*applauds*

Awesome.