Loving Wives or E-Mail Exchange Idea

sexymom

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I have a story idea, but it might be more interesting as an exchange of E-Mails among two or three people. Here is the setting: Husband and wife have been married for six or seven years. Like most married couples, each of them occasionally fantasizes, but they are both rather shy and conservative, so they never even discuss their fantasies, let alone think about making them real. Husband has been notified that he is going overseas for a year- either a civilian job or a military deployment. He worries about his wife being alone- they don't have a lot of friends. He does know that she is friends with a woman who works in the same medical complex- they work in different doctors' offices, but get together for lunch often, and they have a common interest in photography. He encourages his wife to spend more time with this friend while he is gone. Significantly, he doesn't ask about the friend's husband, and their interests as a couple.

What isn't revealed at first is that her friend is very bisexual, and her husband loves to help her with the seduction of innocent new women. As they slowly, lovingly and gently lead the wife along the path to female/female sex, with husband watching, and later photographing, the wife writes to her husband about these friends, and describes the developing relationship to him. He is taken aback- startled, sort of jealous, but also turned on- and the feeling of helplessness isn't all unpleasant to him, either.
 
A well thought through idea.

If it was written in an email exchange format, then it could work. I would suggest however that it would be very difficult to thoroughly convey the emotions you describe from the husband via email. I mean, realistically, you get an email from your wife back home saying she's turned into a nympho, you call her, not just email back.

It might be well done as a series of letters to the husband. Perhaps set a little in the past when letters were more common. If you wanted to get the man's emotions across, you could write it from the mans angle as he reads the letters maybe.
 
Good point, lol. Actually, what I had in mind wasn't the wife suddenly turning into a nympho- it was a lot more subtle than that, but I forgot that Literotica doesn't often deal in subtle. If you don't use dick, pussy or some equivalent at least by the second paragraph it's a waste of wank time.

In my fantasy, the husband is fascinated by the slow transition in his wife. He has very mixed emotions, so he won't call her. He prefers to see how things develop, since he has little influence on her situation, and as she is drawn in more and more, he is frightened and feels betrayed; yet aroused at her new found sexuality.
 
SEXYMOOM

It's a terrific idea. You can do a lot with it. SCHERAZADE comes to mind. You know, send hubby 1001 radioactive emails once she's into it.

Take the ball and run!
 
Because a lot of men get off with this sort of thing.

When I was a youngster I got picked up by couples to have sex with the wife. I mean, who knows what sort of fantasies people have.
 
This would work as an email exchange between a man and a wife. If he is sent overseas in a military function, he gets a call a week. Unlimited internet access but one call per week.

So if say you set it up for just an email exchange you can have him or her talking about what was said during the phone call. ;)

Alternate, you can have him emailing a friend to get their opinion on what the wife was emailing him about so you get his emotions and what she is doing. Though really I think would work best as they are both trading emails, if you want to you can toss in messenger conversations as well.

See it's really funny, as advanced as the world is in conversation tools, anyone on a military function that involves combat gets sent back to just a little better than WW2 technology. They get internet access that is monitored so they can't talk about what is really happening, they get a phone call a week and all cell phones are turned in before shipping out. It rather leads to alot of actual letters being sent because incoming is not monitored so the wife can get all gushy and erotic on hubby. ;)
 
EMAP

It may be World War II technology, but it's a lot more than we had in Vietnam.

One 5 minute phone call per month was what we got.
 
They set up more phones now. ;)

Allthough honestly, I am surprised they even get to do a phone call, or have constant internet access when they aren't out on the front lines. Especially considering there are no front lines anymore. :rolleyes:
 
I've read negative comments about adultery stories before. We are often compelled to criticize things we don't like, and many people don't have a firm grasp on fantasy vs. reality. Many people don't have a problem with reading about things they wouldn't do, hence the popularity of crime stories, sci-fi, and Stephen King.

While I respect the idea of adultery leads to divorce; no compromise, it does not work for lots of people. In many cases there is a feeling that being married, even when there are problems, is preferable to divorce- and some people just don't see an affair as a deal breaker.

Writers try to entertain people. Some of them also make moral judgments for those other people, but many others don't.
 
ive sometimes wondered what it would be like to just have an open marriage. Where the couple is free to please whomever they like at long as they tell each other about it.
 
It's interesting to me how we can't escape our real lives, even when we try. My husband and I don't phone each other often- because we hate talking on the phone, and also because the written word outweighs the spoken. In many legal systems, no matter what you said orally, the written word is considered true and accurate. When I have an idea of importance to discuss, or a tale to relate that is either very interesting or very controversial, I always put it in writing.
 
SEXYMOM

My situation is a wee bit different.

I like to mix murder and action and sex together in the writing. It's a powerful brew. And I strive to make the writing as graphic as possible. Many people are offended by this. Because it's horrible.

My characters have encounters with snakes, get disembowled by wild hogs, get eaten by panthers, drown in hot-tubs, get beaten and gutted. They get hanged.

But it's no worse than what Thomas Harris writes, or Harold Schechter. Schechter recreates the horrors of America's worst serial killers. Hannibal Lecter eats people for chrissake!

I want my reader to have nightmares and boners and wet panties.
 
Sexymom,
This story idea of yours rings a bit familiar,as I am working on a similiar story whereby the husband is overseas and the wife commits an act of marital transgression during his absence.The transgression violates the law and several trusts,which a rather lifestyle active couple with many contacts and lifestyle interests,becomes aware of and uses their knowledge to blackmail the offending wife into doing things she never would have imagined doing before.The more she tries to cover up and conceal this transgression the more she is drawn into her own tangled web.The blackmailing couple are of course more than glad to assist her in becoming even more entangled ,as the things they require of her only adds more leverage to the couple's control and demands of her.

Both the transgressing wife and the blackmailing couple are of course both fully aware of the fact that her total compliance is required in order to maintain the couple's silence ,as disclosure of her transgression would lead to
total disgrace and ruin for her,her family and the family's financial well being.
 
I like it. Of course, I still like my original idea too- a slow but inexorable seduction.
 
"I like to mix murder and action and sex together in the writing. It's a powerful brew. And I strive to make the writing as graphic as possible. Many people are offended by this. Because it's horrible.

My characters have encounters with snakes, get disembowled by wild hogs, get eaten by panthers, drown in hot-tubs, get beaten and gutted. They get hanged."

Hey, do you ever do crucifixion or dance hanging stories?
 
SEXYMOM

Naah. We stretch and varnish the best Manila rope so it doesnt twist. When the victim drops he doesnt move or dance.

Florida hanged a 14 year old white boy back in 1910, I want to work that into a story. He butchered a 13 year old girl who refused sex.

Another story idea, and this is true because I have the newspaper accounts of it: Before the Civil War white girls eloped with their slave lovers to the North. I can make a good action adventure of it.
 
Looking after her needs

I have a story idea, but it might be more interesting as an exchange of E-Mails among two or three people. Here is the setting: Husband and wife have been married for six or seven years. Like most married couples, each of them occasionally fantasizes, but they are both rather shy and conservative, so they never even discuss their fantasies, let alone think about making them real. Husband has been notified that he is going overseas for a year- either a civilian job or a military deployment. He worries about his wife being alone- they don't have a lot of friends. He does know that she is friends with a woman who works in the same medical complex- they work in different doctors' offices, but get together for lunch often, and they have a common interest in photography. He encourages his wife to spend more time with this friend while he is gone.

This is such a hot idea and probably more real than many might consider. I have set this scenario up with my wife with a single female friend, unfortunately, the seduction failed due to some unfortunate timing. It gave my wife an opportunity to think about it and she has since shyed away, although....maybe in time...
 
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