Loving wives. Not a cuckold story idea

[KiwifanDan]

Long time reader first time poster.

I've yet to find a story like this. If it's out there please link it.

I wish I could write. But I can't.

Story idea.

Loving long term couple at the adventurous stage of their relationship.
Wife admits her fantasy is to cuckold an degrade her husband. But realises he's not that type and loves him as he is. After the revelation of her fantasy husband says he's needs to think about it. An comes up with a plan. Gets a pseudo husband to fill in for him. Take her on dates. Be the "submissive" type for her. Brings up wanting to watch the wife taking a lover. Enter real husband. Together the act out her fantasy.

How it plays out I leave in the hands of any author who wants to try this plot line.

Cheers!

 

[Hypoxia]

As usual, WHY? WHY does she want to humiliate hubby? Her toxic GFs convince her it's fun? She reads about it in COSMO or on LIT and it stokes her coals? Her family's or clan's ancient tradition of degrading spouses? She's formalizing hookups with her secret lover?

Next: WHY does hubby go along? To cover his own secret lover(s)? To record divorce or blackmail material? He's a psycho-impaired wimp? He's gathering ideas for a LIT story or maybe a reality TV show? He's Rick Santorum and he can't help himself?

 

[KiwifanDan]

As usual, WHY? WHY does she want to humiliate hubby? Her toxic GFs convince her it's fun? She reads about it in COSMO or on LIT and it stokes her coals? Her family's or clan's ancient tradition of degrading spouses? She's formalizing hookups with her secret lover?

Next: WHY does hubby go along? To cover his own secret lover(s)? To record divorce or blackmail material? He's a psycho-impaired wimp? He's gathering ideas for a LIT story or maybe a reality TV show? He's Rick Santorum and he can't help himself?

How ever you want it to roll out.

If you feel like she needs to unleash her inner cunt then write it that way.

He brings in the other guy. Maybe he's already a master of a submissive couple and sees it as a way to bring his wife in. Maybe he just wants to explore his relationship with his wife without a massive power shift giving her free reign to dominate him.

Maybe he's a mad scientist and hypnotist and is controlling his wife the whole time.


I just had an idea and was looking for an author or maybe a few authors to ale it and spin it how they like to write. I don't have the imagination and skills to flesh out a full story. I leave that to experts.

 

[Hypoxia]

I just had an idea and was looking for an author or maybe a few authors to ale it and spin it how they like to write. I don't have the imagination and skills to flesh out a full story. I leave that to experts.

Are maybe a few commercial storytellers and editors here and more than a few self-styled experts. We amateurs merely muddle through.

As for writing stories: Have you ever kept a blog or diary or journal? Visualize the story in your mind as a video you're watching. Now blog it. Write down all you see, hear, feel, think. That may be a complete story, or the skeleton, like a sculpture's armature, which you can pad-out till it's what you like.

A string of diary entries can work just fine. Chronicle the wife's fantasies, the wittol's progress, the slow degradation, the tricks and surprises, the O.Henry turnaround. For fun, everybody keeps a journal so we get hubby's, wife's, and bull's POVs, not always in accord, not always remembering the same things. Throw in some newspaper clippings for outside views of events. (Assuming they'll make a public spectacle.) You could have fun with this.

 

[KiwifanDan]

So feeding egos and ass kissing won't get a story written? Should I just insult authors under the guise of anonymous and get it done that way?

I've never kept a journal or blog. And can't write dialog and stuff to save myself. Hmmmm maybe I should just be an author like everyone else here...

 

[Hypoxia]

So feeding egos and ass kissing won't get a story written? Should I just insult authors under the guise of anonymous and get it done that way?

Well, I could PM you my PayPal account.

I've never kept a journal or blog. And can't write dialog and stuff to save myself. Hmmmm maybe I should just be an author like everyone else here...

I can't write dialogue either but I do it anyway. Rather, I setup the players and let them do all the work. But really, I've written pieces with zero dialogue, only exposition. Not the *best* pieces, but hey...

Everybody starts as a novice. Shakespeare had to learn. Hemingway had to learn. Even *I* had to learn, and it's an ongoing process. Write something. Hate it. Throw it away. Repeat 5 zillion times. SF superstar Larry Niven wrote for a decade before anybody published him. Of course, he was the scion of an oil fortune so he could afford year after year of rejection slips. But he started off illiterate and worked his way up. You can too. Even without wealth.

 

[Sean Renaud]

There are no sure fire ways to get a story written. Sometimes even when you manage to capture the attention of one or more authors it still doesn't pull together quite how you'd like so I don't know what to tell you on that front.

I do have to double down on self friend Hypoxia's question however because the why here is kind of important both for you and the characters. For the moment I'm not judging, I leave that to others who know who they are. I don't care if you want to read/write racist mysognist crap. You want a story the Antebellum South buying slaves and. . .using the females for his pleasure. Go for it. Want a revolve where the wife and daughters are punished for Daddy. So fucking be it. It doesn't hurt my feelings one bit.

However first most cuckold stories start at least in general with the wife kinda accidentally getting into the situation for whatever reason. Very rarely do they in fiction head out with the intent to cheat, certainly not out of the blue. (So I'm not talking revenge fics.) So I am curious how this gets into her head. Though the easiest answer (which is generally what I advise) is that she saw a movie/read a story and it got her hot. That solves most of your problems. She likes the idea but not of hurting her hubby.

 

[Hypoxia]

There are no sure fire ways to get a story written.

Sure there are. Most involve money. Offer me enough money and I'll write anything, anywhere, anywho. Did Dr Johnson say that nothing focuses the attention like the prospect of imminent execution? Starvation and impoverishment are in the same category. He *did* say that only a fool writes, if not for money. Thus are many fools here. But paypal me US$5k and I'll whip out a hot 10k word story by dawn, guaranteed. All I need is fiscal motivation.

For an extra 20% I'll add literary quality. Y'know, adjectives, adverbs, etc...

 

[Sean Renaud]

Fair enough. And he's right and I work cheaper than that. Hell I have a friend who went to college for screen writing. It gives me immense joy to hold up checks that I get for writing. It doesn't have to be much it just has to. . . you know. Exist.

 

[KiwifanDan]

I'd rather finally buy myself a computer than pay someone that kind of money.

Would you do it for $5?

and all I had initially thought was.

"Wife has convo with husband admitting a cukold type fantasy. Wants to explore it. Husband can't see himself in that situation and finds a guy to act as husband while true husband becomes the bull"

That's all I had. I haven't written anything down except for what's in this thread. I'll give it some more thought while pretending to work...

 

[NOIRTRASH]

So feeding egos and ass kissing won't get a story written? Should I just insult authors under the guise of anonymous and get it done that way?

I've never kept a journal or blog. And can't write dialog and stuff to save myself. Hmmmm maybe I should just be an author like everyone else here...

I write noir because few write it.