Loving Wives (again!) a 1 bomb

[geronimo_appleby]

oh dear... right off the bat... a 1. text trouble

 

[ABSTRUSE]

Congrats!!!! You have achieved catagory fame.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Congrats!!!! You have achieved catagory fame.

let the floodwaters of vitriol sluice into my inbox and cleanse my jaded soul.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Just RCVed on your story. Treasure your bomb...it's the sign you've hit a nerve somewhere

 

[eric shawn listo]

Voted, PC'd.

Good story, interesting predicament. Keep going.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Just RCVed on your story. Treasure your bomb...it's the sign you've hit a nerve somewhere

thank you.

Voted, PC'd.

Good story, interesting predicament. Keep going.

just waiting for readers' suggestions. got a few coming in. maybe i should throw in a scooby doo ending too.

 

[eric shawn listo]

thank you.



just waiting for reader's suggestions. got a few coming in. maybe i should throw in a scooby doo ending too.

As i said in my PC I think the threesome is the way to go. You've set up the interest in all three of the characters. Maybe not until after a bit of soul searching by Jimmy and Abi, but the seed has been planted and I think will soon begin to grow. Especially if they become even closer together. JMHO.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

let the floodwaters of vitriol sluice into my inbox and cleanse my jaded soul.

*snicker* Is there another category where readers get so involved with the stories? I don't think there is. Makes me want to write one just to cause some drama.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

after reading some of the PC's, I have a few ideas for an ending...
i may go 'out there' just to put the 'middle of the road' storyteller out of the picture.
Loving Wives... always good for a reaction.

 

[cloudy]

maybe i should throw in a scooby doo ending too.

Abs used that ending once.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Abs used that ending once.

i have a plan.

 

[LadyJeanne]

*snicker* Is there another category where readers get so involved with the stories? I don't think there is. Makes me want to write one just to cause some drama.

I was thinking this too, so I wrote a Loving Wives story. Sadly, I stirred up nothing - no drama, no creative suggestions on what to do with my characters, barely a ripple of controversy and mostly good votes.

*sigh*

I ended up moving the story to Fetish where it's also not causing any drama. It's a sad day when neither the LW nor the Fetish crowds have anything to say about a story.

Geronimo - vitriol is a badge of honor in LW. Enjoy your infamy!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I was thinking this too, so I wrote a Loving Wives story. Sadly, I stirred up nothing - no drama, no creative suggestions on what to do with my characters, barely a ripple of controversy and mostly good votes.

*sigh*

I ended up moving the story to Fetish where it's also not causing any drama. It's a sad day when neither the LW nor the Fetish crowds have anything to say about a story.

Geronimo - vitriol is a badge of honor in LW. Enjoy your infamy!

23 PC's!!! mixed bag as well. some public, which is good, and some anon. the score? well, it ain't an 'H' but jeez it's getting a response.
the ending is shaping up okay.

 

[kendo1]

Great work GA!

Whatever you do, don't get her pregnant! Anonymous will be furious.

I'm sorely tempted to write a loving wives story.

 

[oggbashan]

I'm sorely tempted to write a loving wives story.

I did. About a loving wife who was faithful in a loving relationship with her faithful loving husband.

I pissed off many people...

I enjoyed doing it.

Just as I did when I wrote tentacle porn; vinyl fetish and hair fetish and tried to make them realistic.

Og

 

[geronimo_appleby]

this comment kinda confused me. the thermometer showed 75, which would indicate some level of enjoyment..?

A tale told by an idiot....
10/18/05 By: EspressoBolus
full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.




so, in retrospect and response... write something yourself, fuckhead...