Loving Wife?

[BedtimeStories77]

Okay, this idea came to me while replying to a post in Story Feedback about some "confusion" a member had with the Loving Wives category and what it "means".

So... Would this be a "loving wife", in the world of Lit's erotica, or a "fetish", etc., if a woman allowed her husband to make love to a surrogate for the purpose of conception instead of involving the clinic and "bookoo bucks"?

In the tale, I am seeing the conception taking more than one attempt. Perhaps it's in a threesome setting, or the wife is watching at least. I'm also seeing a "threesome relationship" developing from this unique intimacy.

So, what'cha all think? Interesting tale? Boring? Is it a "loving wife", etc?

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I would consider it rather "loving", but that's just me. I would love to read it. Then again, those who only want the woman to get some on the side, and not the man, will probably complain about it being in that category. My understanding is that the category is about "adventurous married women AND their mates". I believe this to fit that description, since a threesome is also an adventure, as is a surrogate mother going the "old-fashioned way".

Just my two cents.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I've gotten the impression that the LW fans actually don't care much for a cheating wife tale. When Lit placed my cuckold story in that category I was flamed a lot and my story was voted down into the 2's quickly (as I was warned would happen from the Story Feedback crowd!)

It seems the most popular "loving wife" is where she grants her hubby's wish... (And the recurring theme seems to be engaging in a threesome regardless of the third party's gender.)

So, all of that said, I'm glad to see someone has an interest in this idea. I think I may work on it after the Earth Day contest is over.

 

[sirhugs]

It might fit better under Group sex, but only if wife joins in at some stage. I like the idea a lot.

 

[BlackSnake]

I like the story as a "Loving Wives" story. The story can do a bit deeper to show that the wife is doing this and set it up for her husband's sake. The husband could be uneasy about having sex with another women, so the wife is there to get things going.

You can make the story more about the action between the husband and wife instead of the other woman. Like the wife guiding his cock into the other woman.

The wife could be really hands on during the action, which makes it even more exciting for the husband and the wife.

I invision the husband taking the other women on the bed doggie-style. The wife is standying on the bed straddling the woman facing her husband. The husband is massaging his wife's butt-checks and licking her cunt, while he is pounding the other woman.

Show the husband totally into his wife while he is fucking the other woman. After he cums in the other woman, the wife gets him ready to go again.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Well, maybe the tide has turned away from earlier trend, though both factions seem very strong on LW. I like BlackSnake's ideas, as they suggest that with the other woman, it's just sex, whereas the husband and wife clearly love each other and want to do things, unselfishly, for each other. It should show how much she cares about him and how much he appreciates her sweet, sharing nature. It should also show him really enjoying the sex and also ensure that the wife gets at least some pleasure from it too. She doesn't even have to be bi, though that wouldn't hurt. After all, you don't have to bi to enjoy receiving oral sex.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

I've gotten the impression that the LW fans actually don't care much for a cheating wife tale. When Lit placed my cuckold story in that category I was flamed a lot and my story was voted down into the 2's quickly (as I was warned would happen from the Story Feedback crowd!)

It seems the most popular "loving wife" is where she grants her hubby's wish... (And the recurring theme seems to be engaging in a threesome regardless of the third party's gender.)

So, all of that said, I'm glad to see someone has an interest in this idea. I think I may work on it after the Earth Day contest is over.

Actually, because YOU wrote it, and I thus figured that it might be different, as well as out of courtesy to you, I went ahead, against my usual rule about cuckold stories, and read it anyway. As I thought, it was different in a good way. To make the man impotent was a simple stroke of genius, since it took the question of him being denied sex out of the wife's court and blamed it on his illness. In such a case, when his own sex life is not possible, many a man might feel obligated to ensure that his woman still got sexual pleasure. It thus became about his love for her and concern for her, even in the midst of an illness and the consequent ED (when he might have felt sorry for himself), to guarantee that she was taken care of sexually, instead of her cruelly and maliciously denying him sex. What a refreshing idea.

One question, though: is this set in a time before Viagra, Levitra, and Cialis? Or perhaps he just can't afford them? Or does he just fear for his cardiovascular health to the point that such pills are not an option (they can have side effects)? I'm guessing it's the first of these, unless I'm mistaken.

All in all, though, Eve, it was pure genius.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

It might fit better under Group sex, but only if wife joins in at some stage. I like the idea a lot.

The way my mind's been working, every tale (even ones I started a while ago and have on disk) is now a "series". Before I even have a tale finished I can invision how the second "chapter" would begin, etc.

So, that said, I'm thinking of having the wife only watch (maybe laying on the bed next to the two, kissing her husband some?) in this first part of the tale. Certainly no "kinky" bi twist to it. As I said in a previous post, I'm thinking of having them have to try more than once for pregnancy to take.

Now, in a NON sexual realm, a great bond can be established between a surrogate (or birth mother) and the couple who wants to raise a child. (I know this very well...) So, it's easy to say within my tale that the surrogate could become close with both parties of the couple.

Perhaps in a future "chapter" there will be a sexual threesome. That chapter could then be placed in Group. If the first part is written as I've described, would it do best in Loving Wives or even the Voyeur one?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

I like the story as a "Loving Wives" story. The story can do a bit deeper to show that the wife is doing this and set it up for her husband's sake. The husband could be uneasy about having sex with another women, so the wife is there to get things going.

You can make the story more about the action between the husband and wife instead of the other woman. Like the wife guiding his cock into the other woman.

The wife could be really hands on during the action, which makes it even more exciting for the husband and the wife.

I invision the husband taking the other women on the bed doggie-style. The wife is standying on the bed straddling the woman facing her husband. The husband is massaging his wife's butt-checks and licking her cunt, while he is pounding the other woman.

Show the husband totally into his wife while he is fucking the other woman. After he cums in the other woman, the wife gets him ready to go again.

Interesting concept, BlackSnake. I like the idea of the wife guiding her husband into the other woman. And as I suggested myself, maybe having her kiss him during sex, etc. But I'm leaning against a "full" sexual threesome within this first installment of the tale.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

The way my mind's been working, every tale (even ones I started a while ago and have on disk) is now a "series". Before I even have a tale finished I can invision how the second "chapter" would begin, etc.

So, that said, I'm thinking of having the wife only watch (maybe laying on the bed next to the two, kissing her husband some?) in this first part of the tale. Certainly no "kinky" bi twist to it. As I said in a previous post, I'm thinking of having them have to try more than once for pregnancy to take.

Now, in a NON sexual realm, a great bond can be established between a surrogate (or birth mother) and the couple who wants to raise a child. (I know this very well...) So, it's easy to say within my tale that the surrogate could become close with both parties of the couple.

Perhaps in a future "chapter" there will be a sexual threesome. That chapter could then be placed in Group. If the first part is written as I've described, would it do best in Loving Wives or even the Voyeur one?

I guess I was thinking too far ahead. But, yeah, "Voyeur" or "Fetish" make sense too. You might get fewer attacks that way. Like someone else once said, for some reason, LW is the kiss of death for many a story. Not that a rare LW story that I actually like suffers that fate. Then again, I read very few LW stories these days, since I strongly suspect that I won't like most of them. But once in a blue moon, I will read one whose description makes me wonder if the story might be different.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Actually, because YOU wrote it, and I thus figured that it might be different, as well as out of courtesy to you, I went ahead, against my usual rule about cuckold stories, and read it anyway. As I thought, it was different in a good way. To make the man impotent was a simple stroke of genius, since it took the question of him being denied sex out of the wife's court and blamed it on his illness. In such a case, when his own sex life is not possible, many a man might feel obligated to ensure that his woman still got sexual pleasure. It thus became about his love for her and concern for her, even in the midst of an illness and the consequent ED (when he might have felt sorry for himself), to guarantee that she was taken care of sexually, instead of her cruelly and maliciously denying him sex. What a refreshing idea.

One question, though: is this set in a time before Viagra, Levitra, and Cialis? Or perhaps he just can't afford them? Or does he just fear for his cardiovascular health to the point that such pills are not an option (they can have side effects)? I'm guessing it's the first of these, unless I'm mistaken.

All in all, though, Eve, it was pure genius.

First of all, I am truly honored that you read my story since you do not like that genre. I'm touched. (Yeah, yeah...I know... "Awwwww"...puke. Shaddup! lol)

In this tale, I wrote the male lead in a wheelchair as a "tribute" to a very dear friend of mine who is wheelchair bound, cannot get erect anymore ever, and who enjoys this kind of fantasy/fetish.

As I've stated before, I left some details out to see if 1.) this tale could hold its own as is, 2.) to leave the readers wondering about some things, and 3.) to set up the possibility of "chapters" if there was a current interest in the tale. I had a feeling that some of my readers were confused about the husband in the wheelchair, etc., so in the next installment I'd go back into more of the couple's history and explain that it was his encouragement that started this lifestyle for the two. He didn't want her to "suffer" needlessly since he could not have sex with her anymore, and he wanted her happy. Not to mention, being a true voyeur he is happy hearing of escapades .

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

First of all, I am truly honored that you read my story since you do not like that genre. I'm touched. (Yeah, yeah...I know... "Awwwww"...puke. Shaddup! lol)

In this tale, I wrote the male lead in a wheelchair as a "tribute" to a very dear friend of mine who is wheelchair bound, cannot get erect anymore ever, and who enjoys this kind of fantasy/fetish.

As I've stated before, I left some details out to see if 1.) this tale could hold its own as is, 2.) to leave the readers wondering about some things, and 3.) to set up the possibility of "chapters" if there was a current interest in the tale. I had a feeling that some of my readers were confused about the husband in the wheelchair, etc., so in the next installment I'd go back into more of the couple's history and explain that it was his encouragement that started this lifestyle for the two. He didn't want her to "suffer" needlessly since he could not have sex with her anymore, and he wanted her happy. Not to mention, being a true voyeur he is happy hearing of escapades .

Well, if he is a paraplegic, then no pills would help him. I can't believe that I overlooked that. And if he is a voyeur, well then he can still get some vicarious pleasure from her sex life. Like I said, a nice twist. And I'm sorry to hear that about your friend being paralyzed like that. It was nice of you to write that with him in mind.

And, you're welcum. If I know and like an author, I tend to give them some extra credibility and go out of my way for them like that.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Well, if he is a paraplegic, then no pills would help him. I can't believe that I overlooked that. And if he is a voyeur, well then he can still get some vicarious pleasure from her sex life. Like I said, a nice twist.

Thank you.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Thank you.

You're welcum.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Okay, now back to the original purpose of this thread. (In case others want to offer up their opinions, thoughts, and so on!)

Okay, this idea came to me while replying to a post in Story Feedback about some "confusion" a member had with the Loving Wives category and what it "means".

So... Would this be a "loving wife", in the world of Lit's erotica, or a "fetish", etc., if a woman allowed her husband to make love to a surrogate for the purpose of conception instead of involving the clinic and "bookoo bucks"?

In the tale, I am seeing the conception taking more than one attempt. Perhaps it's in a threesome setting, or the wife is watching at least. I'm also seeing a "threesome relationship" developing from this unique intimacy.

So, what'cha all think? Interesting tale? Boring? Is it a "loving wife", etc?

 

[silverwhisper]

unless the wife is part of the action in some fashion (present, participant, etc) i'd call it erotic couplings. :>

ed

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Didn't I hear once that the site owners actually tried to get authors to use "any other" category than Erotic Couplings since that becomes the catch-all otherwise?

 

[sirhugs]

Didn't I hear once that the site owners actually tried to get authors to use "any other" category than Erotic Couplings since that becomes the catch-all otherwise?

that's in the submission guidelines...EC is like "misc"...if you submit EC, the moderators may label you how they see it...best to suggest a category of your own..esp if you like LW (* as I do) despite its flaws, or want to avoid LW.

"Group sex" might be an option or "e &v", but the latter gets fewer reads.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

"Group sex" might be an option or "e &v", but the latter gets fewer reads.

That's okay. I'm in the Survivor contest. (Though one is already over 100 points. I can only hope that person burns out. lol) So, I need to get stories in as many categories as possible!