"Loving Wife" theme of my own...

[MyDarkFantasies]

Not sure if this idea has been done (here), or if it really is unique... I will do some searches in the stories to see if something comes up that is similar!

I don't want to give too much away just yet, though! lol

Basically, my idea is about this engaged couple who were either high school or college sweethearts. (Current ages mid twenties.) She's a virgin and that ticks him off. They've "fooled around", but she wanted to wait for marriage to...yada yada.

The guy sets something up to have his fiancee "taken" right before their wedding. (Partially because he is curious to see if she would tell him, etc., and partially because he feels her waiting is simply to piss him off sometimes... lol)

More to come soon. Like I said, I didn't want to give it all away yet! Just wanted to give a teaser!

 

[sirhugs]

I like it so far.

 

[kdymbrowski]

Sounds like a neat story

Sounds like a story witha lot of tension. Might be exciting too if the woman were a fair-dainty blonde, and the rendezvous were with an enormous Black man.....perhaps the fiance's roommate/boxing coach or something like that.

 

[MyDarkFantasies]

How ironic that it'll be interracial... And, my ideas are running that it could be a series if I want!

 

[vargas111]

I love the idea of the prissy gf who makes her nice bf wait but is unable to resist a big ugly crude (does not have to be irr) guy. As a result, she is repentant and never refuses her bf/husband anything again.

 

[MyDarkFantasies]

Well, I did not envision the other man as "ugly", but did envision him as black. And, though it's not quite a rape story, she is taken by the other man. She would have been a virgin on her wedding night... lol

 

[Daisy May]

This could get really interesting. I would love to be in your head right now. There are so many things that come to mind with that word you quoted "taken"

 

[BlackSnake]

How about the groom has a sister, who is not quite fond of the bride, because of the pain she has put her brother through.

The groom's sister throughs a bachelorette party for the bride. The sister conspires with the groom to have her deflowered the night before the wedding.

The party is tame with goofy gifts, but the punch has a special kick just for the bride. The punch kicks in and enter the chip-and-dale type Nubian Kings. They take her, well.

The punch should only make her horny.

 

[MyDarkFantasies]

How about the groom has a sister, who is not quite fond of the bride, because of the pain she has put her brother through.

The groom's sister throughs a bachelorette party for the bride. The sister conspires with the groom to have her deflowered the night before the wedding.

The party is tame with goofy gifts, but the punch has a special kick just for the bride. The punch kicks in and enter the chip-and-dale type Nubian Kings. They take her, well.

The punch should only make her horny.

Well, I already have my story laid out, but someone else may like that?

 

[intriguess]

heck the bitter sister should take her.....

 

[BlackSnake]

heck the bitter sister should take her.....

Now, there's a thought. The sister pops the cherry with a strap-on. One of the gifts from the party.

 

[intriguess]

it would be an interesting twist, does the bride dare tell? what if husband finds the strap on later and comments that it looks as if it was used....

 

[sirhugs]

it would be an interesting twist, does the bride dare tell? what if husband finds the strap on later and comments that it looks as if it was used....

then wife would have to use it on him?

 

[vargas111]

The important thing is that the GF be "punished" for frustrating the BF but there is a happy ending in which the experinece turns her into a slut for her new husband.

 

[MyDarkFantasies]

Hi all. Just popping in to let ya'll know my story is near completion. Yes, I know it's been a while since I first posted this thread, but as most of you know "the Christmas season" is hell for anyone in retail!

 

[daggett]

Hi Folks. I wrote two stories over the past few years that I've posted on Lit. I'm a klutz at adding links so I won't trouble you by leading to to dead ends, but they are under the name "daggett". I'm looking for some ideas for a story I've had on my hard drive for a long time.

In discussion of their sex lives before marriage a black woman tells her black husband about fucking a white guy in college just to see what it was like. Husband gets the wife watching bug and wants to see wife with white guy. Any ideas on how to bring it to literary life?
Thanks