lovetoread, I didn't know you knew howtowrite!

[Guest]

I was gonna post this on the Story Feedback Board, but I'll look like a freak doing that, so here it goes.

lovetoread's new story was quite good. I could hear, ''Luke, feel the force. Luke, you gotta take your kit off before going BDSM.'' LOL

Well done, LTR.

I gotta say, critically, I give 4. I got bored in the middle of page 2.

Here is the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=60884

 

[Rick DeVille]

I'm guessing you like it - maybe?

 

[Guest]

You, maybe, like to define it?

 

[alvoigt]

G'day guys,

What are you two talking about?

 

[alvoigt]

I must admit to being quite confused?

Anyway, not to matter. Time to find a different thread. Bye all!

 

[Guest]

Okay, I re-read the story. Nop, Dom/Sub thing doesn't do for me. I'll be happy just to have a shag. I'm a good student, though. I'll take notes and everything.

 

[NemoAlia]

Lovetoread, thank you for a lovely story. What a refreshing change from reading about a Dom/me who 'sees' the sub in someone who doesn't yet realize it him/herself (a common Dom/me fantasy, I think)! Your playfully supernatural approach to a Dom's self-realization is both creative and erotic, without the heavy-handed authorial presence that one often finds in stories that involve non-human entities.

I look forward to reading more of your work!

 

[Guest]

Lovetoread, thank you for a lovely story. What a refreshing change from reading about a Dom/me who 'sees' the sub in someone who doesn't yet realize it him/herself (a common Dom/me fantasy, I think)! Your playfully supernatural approach to a Dom's self-realization is both creative and erotic, without the heavy-handed authorial presence that one often finds in stories that involve non-human entities.

I look forward to reading more of your work!

What Nemo said.

 

[Lancecastor]

There's nothing worse....

...than a non-human entity with a heavy handed presence...you know?

I mean, if those frickin' aliens are going to be aiming "the laser" at the moon, at least they could stay in their idiom!

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[A Desert Rose]

Re: There's nothing worse....

...than a non-human entity with a heavy handed presence...you know?

I mean, if those frickin' aliens are going to be aiming "the laser" at the moon, at least they could stay in their idiom!

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Lance

ahhhhhh shit. now i have to clean the diet dr. pepper off my screen.
Rose

 

[lovetoread]

I didnt even see this.

Thank you very much.

I am giddy now.

 

[NemoAlia]

You're welcome, and good that you're giddy!