Love Sweet Love

[No Bagles]

there seems to be some problem with the submision pages... they just don't load. i'm sure it is being corrected, but impatient as i am - and only connected a few minutes / day - i thought i might just post it here instead.

it came out of a rush and flush of conflicting funk in my head.

but really for an audience of one.

i declare this the thread of silly (but true) poems of love for those who love, or for those who have loved, or for those who would like to.

spread the

/nob



Written in Haste on Napkin

No,
I will not bend over
and let you shove
your self importance
up to scrape my gums
from behind.

This is it, and you know
how I hate and I hurt
from the suphuric acid
of your aimless sputter
nudging bricks
in an illusionary neat wall
seemless seamless
but askew
from the ground up
until it crumble and fall.

Like you,
getting wound up
petty, unpretty
undignified, untrue
un-you.

Get your babbling babble
baloney brigade god damn out,
once and for all,
put a knot in that snout

and last, mark my motherfucking words:

I love you
dearly
for
ev
er

&

ev
er
and
where
you tread
I kneel to mould
from your imprints
in sand
or in mud
replicas
in gold
of your pure
perfection
more wondrous
than fiction.

And no,
there is no
contradiction.

// Kacper 2004 //

 

[Miss Oatlash]

No Contradiction

No contradiction...I understand exactly how you feel. Submission is voluntary, as is domination. Ask any of my little subbies if they would submit to me again, and I think you will hear a resounding, "Yes, please, Mistress!"

 

[No Bagles]

thank you miss O... but i think you read your own dominatrix into the blend... me, i am too bland for that... the regular rollercoaster is more than enough to split most of us in half

now gimmie some luvah poetry

 

[BlueskyBeauty]

Re: No Contradiction

No contradiction...I understand exactly how you feel. Submission is voluntary, as is domination. Ask any of my little subbies if they would submit to me again, and I think you will hear a resounding, "Yes, please, Mistress!"

yes please Mistress!!

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: No Contradiction

yes please Mistress!!

 

[WickedEve]

thank you miss O... but i think you read your own dominatrix into the blend... me, i am too bland for that... the regular rollercoaster is more than enough to split most of us in half

now gimmie some luvah poetry

Nob, some of see kneel, bend over, and shove, and we immediately think D/s. Surprisingly, I didn't.

And damn, I love this:

mark my motherfucking words:

I love you
dearly
for
ev
er

&

ev
er
and
where
you tread
I kneel to mould
from your imprints
in sand
or in mud
replicas
in gold
of your pure
perfection
more wondrous
than fiction.

 

[The Mutt]

Yes! Please Mistress. Please Mistress every chance I get!

 

[Miss Oatlash]

Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

Ah, would Miss Tristesse wish to join the party of Miss O's little subbies???

And you, Miss Wicked Eve...that ass is so scrumptious I could lick it for hours!

 

[Miss Oatlash]

Yes! Please Mistress. Please Mistress every chance I get!

It seems that my little Mutt has finally learned to beg properly.

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

Ah, would Miss Tristesse wish to join the party of Miss O's little subbies???

And you, Miss Wicked Eve...that ass is so scrumptious I could lick it for hours!

Miss O's little subbies... LOL
I think you need a 5'10 mountain gal to take a switch to your tiny ass.

 

[Miss Oatlash]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

Miss O's little subbies... LOL
I think you need a 5'10 mountain gal to take a switch to your tiny ass.

Is that an offer, a threat, or a challenge?????

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

Is that an offer, a threat, or a challenge?????

I offer to one person, the rest of the world: I make no offers.
I never threaten.
Challenges? I adore those.
Whipping your ass would give me a thrill simply because you're miss oatlash.
Now dear, you must forgive me, but I get all faux domme before my java IV is inserted.

 

[Tathagata]

Re: No Contradiction

No contradiction...I understand exactly how you feel. Submission is voluntary, as is domination. Ask any of my little subbies if they would submit to me again, and I think you will hear a resounding, "Yes, please, Mistress!"

I think submission, like love, has degrees of intensity and understanding.
At some point it becomes " beyond" voluntary and indeed is your " lifestyle"
Following your bliss, as it were.
The trick in THAT stage is to find the right " Dom" as with every other aspect of life the right partner/ teacher/ dom/sub can make a relationship into a religion.

The voluntary part switches from simply giving up the body...to giving up the ego, and trust, and desire all in order to serve the other
This works with the Dom as well.
he/ she cannot place their " wants" about the needs and well being of the sub.
It is, in fact, yin and yang in the flesh.
people who think it's about the costumes and spanking and bootlicking miss the true " spirit" of a D/s relationship.
Just as people who think being able to fuck in 59 different positions miss the real meaning of sex.



" true love"
is much the same...because you do want wants best for the other even if it means You yourself might suffer.
Even if it means...letting them go
Tis a noble thing
but it does purify the heart and mind


There
I had my espresso and I'm jacked up
I'm off to drink some nyquil and calm down


Ta

 

[BlueskyBeauty]

Re: Re: No Contradiction

I think submission, like love, has degrees of intensity and understanding.
At some point it becomes " beyond" voluntary and indeed is your " lifestyle"
Following your bliss, as it were.
The trick in THAT stage is to find the right " Dom" as with every other aspect of life the right partner/ teacher/ dom/sub can make a relationship into a religion.

The voluntary part switches from simply giving up the body...to giving up the ego, and trust, and desire all in order to serve the other
This works with the Dom as well.
he/ she cannot place their " wants" about the needs and well being of the sub.
It is, in fact, yin and yang in the flesh.
people who think it's about the costumes and spanking and bootlicking miss the true " spirit" of a D/s relationship.
Just as people who think being able to fuck in 59 different positions miss the real meaning of sex.



" true love"
is much the same...because you do want wants best for the other even if it means You yourself might suffer.
Even if it means...letting them go
Tis a noble thing
but it does purify the heart and mind


There
I had my espresso and I'm jacked up
I'm off to drink some nyquil and calm down


Ta

indeed..drink your nyquil..this frightened me!

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

indeed..drink your nyquil..this frightened me!

Boo!!!

 

[BlueskyBeauty]

Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

Boo!!!

monkeys don't boo..they eat bananas!

can i watch..hah hah..can i please??


how are tath?

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: No Contradiction

There
I had my espresso and I'm jacked up
I'm off to drink some nyquil and calm down


Ta

espresso! I had 6 cups of tea (sick of coffee) and feel fine!
I like what you said. I know that D/s relationships can be very intense. There is an incredible bond there. I could never have less now.
Have you written a poem about any of this? I can't remember.

 

[BlueskyBeauty]

Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

espresso! I had 6 cups of tea (sick of coffee) and feel fine!
I like what you said. I know that D/s relationships can be very intense. There is an incredible bond there. I could never have less now.
Have you written a poem about any of this? I can't remember.

damnit eve you're not helping!

i opened pandoras sweet box of yums yums, and have thought too many times..i could never go back.

there's prob some truth behind this hah?

either one of you care to chat in pm?

i have some questions you maybe can enlighten me??

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

espresso! I had 6 cups of tea (sick of coffee) and feel fine!
I like what you said. I know that D/s relationships can be very intense. There is an incredible bond there. I could never have less now.
Have you written a poem about any of this? I can't remember.

Not in such a direct way
but a few touch on it

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=146989

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=129741

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=129741


These were written for my Mistress

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

damnit eve you're not helping!

i opened pandoras sweet box of yums yums, and have thought too many times..i could never go back.

there's prob some truth behind this hah?

either one of you care to chat in pm?

i have some questions you maybe can enlighten me??

My PM box is bloated. Email at wicked_poetess@yahoo.com (that's my regular lit email) I love to answer questions!

 

[WickedEve]

Well, girl, you've already PMed me. I have to finish my work and then I'll PM/email/smoke signal you.

 

[BlueskyBeauty]

Well, girl, you've already PMed me. I have to finish my work and then I'll PM/email/smoke signal you.

i'll email you!

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

My PM box is bloated. Email at wicked_poetess@yahoo.com (that's my regular lit email) I love to answer questions!

want me to PM you some midol??

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

want me to PM you some midol??

No thank you.
Did I tell you that I had a dirty dream about you last night? (no, you weren't in a mud puddle) Did you wake in the middle of the night, sweating and groaning?


And DA. Did you ever submit this poem to lit? I haven't even checked out the new poems today.

Now, I need to finish my email to B.B. God, it's going to be a long one. I like long ones.

 

[Tathagata]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: No Contradiction

No thank you.
Did I tell you that I had a dirty dream about you last night? (no, you weren't in a mud puddle) Did you wake in the middle of the night, sweating and groaning?


And DA. Did you ever submit this poem to lit? I haven't even checked out the new poems today.

Now, I need to finish my email to B.B. God, it's going to be a long one. I like long ones.

i did wake up
LOL