Love poem feedback

[Luvmancsf]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=99480:)

 

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

Very nice poem and how brilliant of you to see you mistakes. However, it would be best to ask for feedback on the poetry feedback forum, you'll get more response there I'm sure.


Wicked

 

[Luvmancsf]

Love Apology

I never write about myself, Wicked. I'm writing about what men Generally do. For my other works check out:
www.eroticpoet.biz
www.allpoetry.com/Lovespoon

Thanks. I'll try to find poetry feed back forum.

Luvmancsf (literotica nick)