Love in the Carribean

[warmlips]

I just got a poem approved - St Lucian Loving - and was wondering if you would all read it and tell me what you think. I love the way poetry can just happen, even some time after a spark is lit; I got married in St Lucia three months ago, but I only wrote this a few days ago.
So please give me some feedback, comments, improvements (I think poems can be fluid, I am happy to change it) anything at all, or just say you like it, if you do!
kisses from my to all.

 

[Elda Furry]

Congrats on the new marriage and posting your first poem!

Here's the url to warmlips' poem:
St Lucian Loving

 

[JUDO]

A "how to"

Loved the poem, warmlips. And here's a "how to" that I recently learned from Weird Harold (a local who's famous for all he knows):

To get something to post like EF did it:
St Lucian Loving

You have to enclose the URL in stuff that looks like this:

(NOTE: I have substituted the '[]' with '()' so that you can see it here).

(url="http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=41591")St Lucian Loving(/url)

To make it more colorful like this:
St Lucian Loving

You can enclose the title in a color html statement. All of it looks like this:

(NOTE: Don't forget when you write this and try it yourself to substitute '[]' for the '()' you see below).

(url="http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=41591")(color=turquoise)St Lucian Loving(/color)(/url)

Feel free to try it here. Be sure to use the preview function to test what you've done. Have fun!


- Judo

 

[warmlips]

Re: A "how to"

Like this!
Thanks a lot for the tip! It's fun!
St Lucian Loving

 

[JUDO]

Graphic

Yes, although yellow on white is a little too close in value for most people to read well. See? You might try gold or orange as alternatives.

There is an incomplete list of color selections under the Post Reply pages. By the way, the colors listed like "dark-blue" can't be used that way in html format. "darkblue" works much better. So, be careful with those and experiment. I've found more colors by just trying one. Hmmm...I wonder if puce works?


- Judo