Love across time

[mythtrav16]

Here's an idea I've had for a while, but will probably never write about thanks to a plethora of other ideas I'm yet to finish with.

A single woman wakes up in the middle of the night, feeling somebody licking her pussy. After enjoying the sensation for a little while, she realises that she should be alone in bed and nervously throws the covers off the bed, only to find that she IS alone. Several more incidents like this occur - perhaps in one she decides to remain calm and goes all the way.

Meanwhile, she meets and begins dating a charming young man, and really hits it off with him, but because of previous relationship woes, she wants to take her time making the relationship sexual. Her suitor is very understanding.

When she does feel ready to sleep with him, she takes him hope and they climb in to her bed. He disappears under the covers, licking and kissing his way down towards her privates and then he suddenly stops. When she looks under the covers to see what's wrong, he has disappeared in to thin air. Ten minutes later, he suddenly re-appears under the covers wanting to know why she was freaking out.

It turns out that her bed quilt, a souveneir her mother bought her in Romania, while touring europe, was made by gypsies and inscribed with an ancient mystical symbol relating to the flow of time (something they perhaps use in thier fortune telling rituals). It is this man, whom the woman has come to love, who has been pleasuring her orally for all these months. Thanks to the quilt, he has been travelling back and forth through time, making love to her after they fell in love, by his perspective, but before they fell in love by hers.

It's just a rough idea, but hopefully someone will want to do something with it... I probably never will.

 

[Totzman]

I think thats a great idea! Very cool. I hope you can take the story somewhere though. Like have the quilt be stolen or something and then another woman starts using it.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Yes - unlike most "new" ideas on here, I have never seen a story like that. What you have here is a basis for a series of stories as each person who sleeps under the quilt has their own different experiences.

Perhaps a friend borrows the apartment for a few days and is warned, "use what you like EXCEPT, please DON'T use my quilt." Who could resist that temptation?

 

[emap]

Hey you left out part of that first sentence about the idea's in here, unless emap comes up with it it's been done before.

Before this one of course.

 

[mythtrav16]

Hey you left out part of that first sentence about the idea's in here, unless emap comes up with it it's been done before.

Before this one of course.

Uh, okay... if you say so

 

[mythtrav16]

Yes - unlike most "new" ideas on here, I have never seen a story like that. What you have here is a basis for a series of stories as each person who sleeps under the quilt has their own different experiences.

Perhaps the quilt might wind up at a B&B or a rental property, like a ski cabin. Resulting in crossover sexual experiences between multiple unrelated tenants. You could go a long way with that concept, making a long story, based solely around the quilt itself, rather than the characters, with numerous sex scenes. You might need to be careful not to make it too confusing with the jumbled timeline, though, as I'd imagine such a story would necessitate a lot of flashbacks and flash-forwards.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Hey you left out part of that first sentence about the idea's in here, unless emap comes up with it it's been done before.

Before this one of course.

Uh, okay... if you say so

I apologise for emap; you can take her anywhere, but you always have to go back and apologise afterwards.

 

[mythtrav16]

I apologise for emap; you can take her anywhere, but you always have to go back and apologise afterwards.

That's okay. I'm easilly confused, so I probably had it coming, anyway...

 

[emap]

Hey, you do not always have to go back and apologize, sometimes you gotta beat em off with a stick to get away.

 

[mythtrav16]

Hey, you do not always have to go back and apologize, sometimes you gotta beat em off with a stick to get away.

Remind me never to give you a time-travelling quilt, emap. Otherwise some poor fellow who owns it in the future may wake up in bed some night to find you beating him off with a stick. I can think of less jarring wake-ups.

 

[emap]

Nah, I don't beat men off with a stick, I use my mouth.

In the case your mentioning I'd so be getting him up with a blowjob then riding him. If he wakes up or not is his prerogative.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... some poor fellow ... may wake up in bed ... to find you beating him off with a stick. ...

... I don't beat men off with a stick ...

Now there's a story idea for a masochist - being beaten off with a stick instead of hands or mouth.


(Or doesn't the phrase beating off mean the same in the USA as it does in the UK?)

 

[mythtrav16]

Now there's a story idea for a masochist - being beaten off with a stick instead of hands or mouth.


(Or doesn't the phrase beating off mean the same in the USA as it does in the UK?)

That might be an idea for an erotic story set in a Harry Potter-esque universe, having a witch use her magic stick/wand to padfoot some guy's prong.

But to answer your question, I think that we are interpreting the word 'beat' in two very different ways.

 

[mia_erotica]

It would work well as a chain story. Each person takes turns writing. The next person starts with where the quilt ends up. Perhaps the quilt is found in a storage room in a museum?