Looong story... where too now?

[golfadikt2]

I've posted the story in several chapters, often breaking up a chapter into part A and part B. As I was re-editing chapter 5, I felt it had gotten too long, but I decided to keep the beginning without much sex, because I felt it built up the romance part of the story.

I seem to have picked up 20 to 25 faithful readers/voters, but a lot of them don't leave feedback, they just vote and leave. As I'm a feeback pimp, I love the votes, but I need feedback as to where to continue the story.

I've included a bit of everything except bestiality in the story. I'm just confused as to where to take Tom on his next adventure. I enjoy writing the stories and I love seeing the voting increase... but what's next? Do I reintroduce the incestuous part or the M/M storyline?

The only part of the storyline I haven't really explored is a MFF threesome and that's because I don't have a lot of experience with FF, as a guy. Is there a woman willing to co-author the next chapter of my novel/novella with me?

 

[snooper]

... The only part of the storyline I haven't really explored is a MFF threesome and that's because I don't have a lot of experience with FF, as a guy. Is there a woman willing to co-author the next chapter of my novel/novella with me?

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