I have a story that I posted to Literotica, but some of the feedback suggests that it needs better editing.
It is about 30K words. Here is the blurb that describes the book:
Thinking of swinging? There’s and app for that! In the new sharing economy, Club MiXXXer will safely hook you up with like minded couples at a luxury mansion. But, how do you get past your natural inhibitions, who’s going to make the first move? You are about to meet Sal, your host for the weekend. Think of Hal, the devious computer in “2001: A Space Odyssey,” and let your imagination run wild.
I would appreciate getting some help from a VE. I can submit in .doc or .rtf format.
Thanks.
It is about 30K words. Here is the blurb that describes the book:
Thinking of swinging? There’s and app for that! In the new sharing economy, Club MiXXXer will safely hook you up with like minded couples at a luxury mansion. But, how do you get past your natural inhibitions, who’s going to make the first move? You are about to meet Sal, your host for the weekend. Think of Hal, the devious computer in “2001: A Space Odyssey,” and let your imagination run wild.
I would appreciate getting some help from a VE. I can submit in .doc or .rtf format.
Thanks.
