looking for someone to edit/advise me on my first story

[solfood]

I'm looking for someone with a little experience to edit my first story and offer me some advise on how to make it better. I'd prefer a female to offer feedback for this first story. My first story is a biography of my sexual experiences with 3 sisters and 2 of their close friends, growing up in Virginia and my early years of college, all of it revolving around my relationship with the 5 women.

thanks!

 

[kbate]

What part of Virginia? That seems a good part of the story to expound upon.