Primate_House
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- Nov 30, 2017
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I've written the first draft of a story that I will publish on here soon enough, but I want to develop it a little bit first. The scenario is a pretty common straight male fantasy - hot goth chick has crush on male lead and wants anal sex - but I want this to be a story with a wider appeal.
So I'm asking if anyone - specifically, women who like men - would help me workshop this story a bit to make sure that the female lead is believable and the male lead is appealing enough that someone might reasonably want to have sex with him.
Also be warned that this story contains POLITICS of a non-specifically leftwing, anti-Trump variety. The last time I published a story with a few lines of political commentary, people got mad in the comments so I thought I should be up-front this time.
So I'm asking if anyone - specifically, women who like men - would help me workshop this story a bit to make sure that the female lead is believable and the male lead is appealing enough that someone might reasonably want to have sex with him.
Also be warned that this story contains POLITICS of a non-specifically leftwing, anti-Trump variety. The last time I published a story with a few lines of political commentary, people got mad in the comments so I thought I should be up-front this time.