Looking for some feedback....

[mstrnsvnt]

I have just finished the 3rd story in my "Jessica" series (See signature). I am looking for a few 3rd party females to read the draft and comment on it. I'm writing this series not so much looking for literature but to capture a moment and a feeling in each chapter. I've let my usual few people pre read this third one but something doesn't feel right about it yet. The first two came very easily, this one is a bit harder.

The theme is mild domination and submission this time.

If you are interested in reading my draft and commenting on it please PM me. Females only please as I don't want a male perspective (I have it in me already).

Thanks.

 

[Guest]

Hi mstrnsvnt,

I'd love to read it, PM on its way.

(I haven't read the first two in the series yet, but I just began the first one - definitely a theme that interests and excites me. I'll make sure to read them both before I read the third.)

Lou

 

[Dar~]

I'll bite. PM on its way.

 

[sophia jane]

Ooh. Me too. Me too. Pming you.

SJ

 

[mstrnsvnt]

Thank you everyone for PM'ing me.

I think the issue with this 3rd story is that I have expectations now. The first two were written back to back without the intention of posting here. I've gotten alot of feedback from people. People emailing me out of the blue saying how much they loved my stories. How much they wish they were Jessica. How they want more...etc etc. It shocked me actually, that so many people liked them and took the effort to tell me.

So with this 3rd one I have all these expectations from my readers. So now i want to make it just right...

Still looking for more feedback if anyone else is willing. I suggest you read the first two stories and if you want to see what else happens to Jess and I to PM me.....