Hello,
I am HCallahan and am getting ready to finish the second installment of my FIRST STORY.
I did not use an editor this time, because I wanted to hack through the issues myself on this one.
I would love to hear what you think of the first part.
It is here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/off-the-rocks-pt-01
Yes, it is in the LW's category. I didn't know where else to put it, as it is a story about a man and wife. There is cheating which bends towards a cuckold relationship, and I got hammered by the commenters. I now know about the trolls in that category and deleted troll comments. I left the rest. I have already done an edit and re-posted it.
I would LOVE any feedback you can give before I post the second installment in the series.
Thank you so much in advance,
-H
I am HCallahan and am getting ready to finish the second installment of my FIRST STORY.
I did not use an editor this time, because I wanted to hack through the issues myself on this one.
I would love to hear what you think of the first part.
It is here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/off-the-rocks-pt-01
Yes, it is in the LW's category. I didn't know where else to put it, as it is a story about a man and wife. There is cheating which bends towards a cuckold relationship, and I got hammered by the commenters. I now know about the trolls in that category and deleted troll comments. I left the rest. I have already done an edit and re-posted it.
I would LOVE any feedback you can give before I post the second installment in the series.
Thank you so much in advance,
-H