Looking for opinions

[187MDK]

OK, I know it sounds like fishing for compliments, but I just submitted my first story, and I am wondering what people think of it. It is titled "Another Blind Date", and it is my first attempt at writing erotic lit.

I am hoping that I can pick up some pointers on what i did well, and not so well, and where i can improve in general.

Thanks everyone in advance.

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[187MDK]

Anyone?

 

[Whispersecret]

Welcome to the world of Lit.

First, you might want to ask for feedback in the feedback section. Also, providing a link for people makes it just that much easier for them to read your story.

 

[187MDK]

OK, thank you for your thoughts... i will take care of those things shortly

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[Debbie]

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