looking for noncon-reading

ellynei

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I'm a noncon reader and writer.

As is probably true for all categories on lit, noncon is a broad genre. Browsing for stories that suits my taste can get really frustrating, especially now that I have trouble seeing and have to read with the aid of my computer's "speech".



Here some of my personal likes and dislikes:


1) I like a sense of realism.
I don't mind 20 inch cocks, (as long as the one it is attached to is a demon, or an android, or some other nonhuman entity). Although I generally do prefer if the objects entering orifices doesn't outdo 2L cola bottles in length and girth, although I can read through such things if only there is some sense to the madness.

If the story doesn't take place in some alternate universe with alternate laws of nature, I prefer adherence to the laws of nature. (Such as gravity.)



2) I dislike cartoon sounds. Ungh. Ungh. Ugh. Arrrrrhhh. Oh, oh, oh, ooooooooh. Waaa. GURGLE. Grrrr. It turns me off.

3) I don't like plots along the line: he takes her by force, he makes her cum, she cums so hard she likes it, she cums again and forgives him, she cums yet again and falls in love with him.
It is possible for me to like a noncon story where victim and rapist ends up having a romance, but there has to be some bloody good explanation for how things turned out that way! And with bloody good I do mean bloody good.

4) I like charactherisation. I wanna be able to follow at least one of the characters. His or hers emotions, motives, thrills, or fright. Something to live into.

5) I prefer male assailant(s), female victim stories. But really, if its well written I can enjoy any composition of straight, gay, bi, or group.

6) I prefer physical force and bondage themes (as opposed to blackmail themes)

7) Forced orgasms are a lovely element. (If the story doesn't contain forced orgasm it really has to contain a fascinating powerplay and charactherisation for me to still derive a good experience from reading it.)

8) I don't like reading "present tense" stories. (The writing has to be more than remarkable before I can enjoy it, if it is in present tense.)

9) I'm not looking for comedy and farce.

10) I am looking for fiction. Noncon-fantasies are hot, noncon-realities are not.


So, uhm, its a bit late, so my list was probably messy. But if you know of a noncon story that seems to fit the likings I've listed, please post link here, or send me a pm.

If it is a story you've written yourself and you would like feedback on it, please specify what kind of feedback you want. (Like: "only positive", "constructive criticism", "don't say a word about my grammar!" or "anything you could possibly say about it").


Gosh, it's so past my bedtime. I hope some of what I've said makes sense.


Please help!
 
This is one of mine trhat you might like. Happy reading. The title ain't what you might think. :D

Wet
 
This is one of mine trhat you might like. Happy reading. The title ain't what you might think. :D

Wet


Thanks for the link, I'll read it this evening (my timezone) it's nice to have something to look forward to :)

P. S.

Any preferences in feedback?
 
Thanks for the link, I'll read it this evening (my timezone) it's nice to have something to look forward to :)

P. S.

Any preferences in feedback?

No preferences so fire away if you like.
 
No, I'm sorry. The story "Wet" wasn't to my liking. It was making the muscles at the side of my stomach constrict displeasurably with bad associations.

I only read to the point where she agreed to take off her underwear.


From the very start, the main-character was portrayed as a girl with no sense of independence, every aspect of her thinking was aimed at fitting in.

At the point where i stopped reading, it seemed the girl was emotionally underdeveloped, and not very bright.

This girl's body might have been fully developed but her mind was underaged.

When reading erotica, I want to read about adults. Inside and out.


I should have added that to my list.


P.S
I was only this honest because you said "fire away". I would have only said "This wasn't my kind of story" and refrained from explaining.
 
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I'm not saying it's wrong to write erotica playing on the weaknesses of adolescence, I'm just saying that personally I find no enjoyment in the theme.
 
No, I'm sorry. The story "Wet" wasn't to my liking. It was making the muscles at the side of my stomach constrict displeasurably with bad associations.

I only read to the point where she agreed to take off her underwear.


From the very start, the main-character was portrayed as a girl with no sense of independence, every aspect of her thinking was aimed at fitting in.

At the point where i stopped reading, it seemed the girl was emotionally underdeveloped, and not very bright.

This girl's body might have been fully developed but her mind was underaged.

When reading erotica, I want to read about adults. Inside and out.


I should have added that to my list.


P.S
I was only this honest because you said "fire away". I would have only said "This wasn't my kind of story" and refrained from explaining.

Yes, at the point you stopped read she was exactly as you say. It takes the rest of the story to develop her into a full person with her own mind. That is the aim of the story anyway.
 
I just read Dr. Cockburn's medicine.

It was interesting. Thank you.

The play on her extreme emotional vulnerability was fascinating and promising.

Nice plot.

I'd wish the ending was more drawn out, with more play on all those emotions the long beginning built up to.

As it is in its current form it reminds me a bit of the movie "Dusk till Dawn"

it starts out as a psychological drama suddenly changing genre to erotic horror
 
Does anyone else have any suggestions for me?

Please?

Somebody out there must have read some good noncon stories.

I know i'm not the only noncon-enthusiast on lit.

I promise, if you tell me not to say a single negative word, I'll keep my mouth shut about what I don't like about the story.

I'm not sadistic, just overtly honest.


For heaven's sake. I've got a personality disorder, I'm hard at seeing and I'm sexually frustrated, have a heart!

Help me find good noncon reading, please!
 
here are links to 2 noncon stories that i have written. they were written for another member of the sight
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=421702
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=422578

they both involve the same girl, the top one is the first day although the second one is probably better written.

i would like any feedback you have to offer.

I've actually read the first one, and it wasn't my kind of story.

I thought it was satire.

If it isn't meant to be satiric, you might want to add some more depth to your characters.

Also, the noncon elements in it are of the blackmail type.
 
P.S

If you didn't mean for your story to be satire/comedy, and you would like to know exactly how I came to gain the impression it was, just ask.
 
thats fair enough, please read the second one and let me know if you think it is better, there is a bit more force involved in it.

Just saw your second post, and i would like to know please. i wrote the story according to what the person wanted. it wasnt supposed to be satire anyway
 
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I just read Dr. Cockburn's medicine.

It was interesting. Thank you.

The play on her extreme emotional vulnerability was fascinating and promising.

Nice plot.

I'd wish the ending was more drawn out, with more play on all those emotions the long beginning built up to.

As it is in its current form it reminds me a bit of the movie "Dusk till Dawn"

it starts out as a psychological drama suddenly changing genre to erotic horror

:heart::heart::heart:Thanks, Ellynei:heart::heart::heart:
 
thats fair enough, please read the second one and let me know if you think it is better, there is a bit more force involved in it.

Just saw your second post, and i would like to know please. i wrote the story according to what the person wanted. it wasnt supposed to be satire anyway

The main reason the story seems to be satiric, is that the main character appears to be a caricature of a stupid teenage girl.

She also has some very strange views on propriety. Like her view on her boss. First she doesn't mind him making her prance around in sexy dresses. Then she wants to tell him off for asking her to try out a too sexy dress. Then she doesn't really mind prancing around in her underwear for him. (She doesn't even get angry at his threat to fire her if she didn't.) And lastly, she thinks that giving him a blowjob in return for same too sexy dress is an ok deal.

For heaven's sake, how many braincells does it take for a girl to figure out that if she is good-looking and doesn't mind giving blow-jobs to perverts for payment she doesn't need a minimum wage job!!!

Later on. In the barn.

Her boyfriend has been knocked out by three assailants and chickenbrain is neither worried about his wellbeing nor fearful for her own life. All her brain can muster is, oh no, I have to preserve my virginity!

Seriously, if you didn't mean for this girl to be a caricature of stupid, you are in for some extensive rewriting.
 
Also. Unless the main character has had a braintransplant in between chapters 1 and 2, I'd rather not read chapter 2.
 
Can anyone recommend some noncon stories that fits my listed criteria?

Please?
 
I guess the noncon-enthusiasts around here either doesn't like the story-feedback forum, or doesn't like me :(

And now I have a headache from attempting to browse for a story of my liking with my bad eyes.
 
Do you have an example of a story that you like? Your list is helpful, but an actual story that you think works might make it easier for others to recall similar type stories. Just a thought.
 
This is gonna be hard on my eyes, but if it might help me get some reading it's worth it.


1.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=12942

Xanthopella: The gift, by peterpan is... ah man, I love that story and can't begin to tell how marvellous it is. Sci fi and noncon in one. The internal consistency of the storyline, and the universe, and the characters, it just makes me eat the sexual parts raw.


2.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=170625

Karina the Sorceress chapters 1-3, by Tanuki is... I'm at a loss of words. In particular chapter 1 hits the spot so exactly that it's uncanny. Noncon erotica in the fantasy genre, again the storyline is internally consistent making me eat the sexual parts raw.


3.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=358359

Eirin chapters 1-6 by meg1. Good story, good sex. Very enjoyable. (Since she starts out by saying that the story isn't meant to be historically correct, it is also internally consistent.)


4.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=358831

The future is hell by sexygirl76. This one is a short and simple story, straight to the point. It straight out strokes the themes of forced overstimulation, helplessness, and revenge. And it works.


5. Any of my own erotic stories...


Can't remember anymore just off the top of my head and browsing to refresh my memory is too hard on my eyes just now.
 
oops, just came to remember that "Future is hell" plays on continuous stimulation to the brink torture not continuous overstimulation. (On a side note both are themes I enjoy.)
 
Whatever I did wrong. I'm sorry.

I really am.

I know I appear intelligent, and yes, I am intelligent. In many areas at least.

As a scientist I have a quite well-developed intellect, but my social intelligence is... well... when it comes to social intelligence I am nearly retarded.

I have no social skills. No intuition for social interaction.

So, please just forgive me long enough to help me find some bloody reading.

Please dammit.

PL FUCKING EASE.

My appointment with the eye-doctor isn't until Dec. 3rd.

Have a fucking heart.
 
Can I bribe my way to a link to a good noncon?

How about a preview to my chapter 020 of Majgen? Not publically available.

A private loud-reading of chapter 22, the most gripping chapter in book two?

No?

Right, yes, of course, you wouldn't want non-erotic favours in exchange for noncon ones.

How about the most disturbing noncon story I ever wrote?

It's only been publically available once, on some obscure noncon forum, which by the way was deleted long ago.

If you want, I'll pm or mail it to you, if only you link me a noncon story that I haven't yet read. (If I find it arousing that is.)

What does a retard have to do to get some help around here?
 
Whatever I did wrong. I'm sorry.

I really am.

I know I appear intelligent, and yes, I am intelligent. In many areas at least.

As a scientist I have a quite well-developed intellect, but my social intelligence is... well... when it comes to social intelligence I am nearly retarded.

I have no social skills. No intuition for social interaction.

So, please just forgive me long enough to help me find some bloody reading.

Please dammit.

PL FUCKING EASE.

My appointment with the eye-doctor isn't until Dec. 3rd.

Have a fucking heart.

Yeah, no kidding.

Let's get this straight, you want us to skim through the non-consent stories with an eye for your particular tastes, and forward any stories we think you would like?

If so, you have a hell of a way of asking. And we've seen how you respond to the few who have offered suggestions. Your eyes seem fine enough when you're taking the time to slam them.

Turn on the fucking TV.
 
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