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[Nicksaw]

Hey everyone. I recently found this story: http://www.literotica.com/s/a-letter-to-my-husband-mark

And I was wondering if there were any more in the same vein with the same type of narrative, either a phone conversation or letter, or anything really. Same kind of feel, etc. Something about it's just hot, you know?

Thanks, and enjoy the story.

 

[nakdsub]

Wow!

I can't believe someone likes this story? I've read some extremely poor stories here, hell I've even written some myself, but this the worst thing I've ever read.

 

[Nicksaw]

To each his own, I guess?

 

[nakdsub]

What's there to like?

First we have the biggest wimp God ever put on earth, then we have the biggest bitch ever to rub his nose in it. You have no one to feel sorry for, there is no one to like, there is nothing here except two people who have absolutely no redeeming value as a human being, either one of them!
I would be interested to see what you think of my short story, "It's the thought that counts."

 

[Nicksaw]

Obviously you feel very strongly about this so I'm going to make the effort to give a care, so please forgive me if I'm not entirely successful; it's late.

I don't like that story because I can put myself in any of the three characters or because it's particularly well-written. In fact, I don't even like that story because it's something I'm usually into. I like it because I stumbled upon it, read it, and found myself enjoying it for one reason or another; being neither submissive nor particularly dominant (at least, never to the level some authors like to exaggerate it to), some might find it strange—but I don't, and I'm not ashamed of it. I like it because it's kinky as hell.

If you want to begrudge me that, then I'm quite sure you and I have nothing else to say to each other. As for your story, provide a link and I may give it a read.

 

[nakdsub]

That was not my intention, I'm sorry

I understand I came off a little strong here. It was not my intention to begrudge you, I'm sorry. Obviously we all have our likes and dislikes. I guess I missed any kink value in the story. All I saw I an incredibly cruel woman and I unbelievably wimp husband. The word, "rival" appeared several times which seemed out of place for me. The word implies competition, for that a person needs to have some self respect and some back bone. This guy had neither so I doubt he would ever have had a rival.
You were, obviously, not the only person to like this. Much to my surprise, it got very high marks.
I mentioned my story because it is the opposit of this one. I don't know that you would enjoy it though, I don't believe it really has any kink valvue, but then we all see things differently so I maybe wrong.
Please, give it a read and let me know what you think. And again, I'm sorry if my original comments seemed like an attack on you, that was not the case.
http://www.literotica.com/s/its-the-thought-that-counts-1

 

[nakdsub]

I was hoping

Nicksaw,
I was hoping you'd see this. I really wanted to apologize.