Looking for Ideas for a Story in Progress

[writer4hire69]

I started writing a story in which I have the general premise and set-up as well as the characters involved and I'm looking for some ideas to basically help expand on what I've got going.

The idea follows two sisters. The older one is the more attractive but prudish, the younger one is less attractive and more outgoing. Growing up, the older one got all the attention, and the younger one was always jealous of that. Now in college and living together, the older one has started dating but doesn't do anything beyond kissing and maybe some over the clothes petting. The younger sister discovers how much of a prude her sister is and starts giving the guys her sister dates what they want and therefore starts getting more attention than her sister at long last. For example, she'll give her sister's date a blowjob in the bathroom before their date. The older sister is oblivious to all of this.

I'm going back on forth on whether to make the younger sister vindictive or not, and how vindictive to make her. For example, does she jack the boyfriend off and have him cum on her sister's pillow?

What I'm also hoping for is some more scenarios and instances of what the younger sister can do with the boyfriends. I have a few ideas in mind, but would love to hear some more. If she's vindictive, that also opens up a lot of more twisted avenues.

So I guess:

1) Should she be vindictive or not?
2) What sort of things could she do with the boyfriends?

 

[yukonnights]

I started writing a story in which I have the general premise and set-up as well as the characters involved and I'm looking for some ideas to basically help expand on what I've got going.

The idea follows two sisters. The older one is the more attractive but prudish, the younger one is less attractive and more outgoing. Growing up, the older one got all the attention, and the younger one was always jealous of that. Now in college and living together, the older one has started dating but doesn't do anything beyond kissing and maybe some over the clothes petting. The younger sister discovers how much of a prude her sister is and starts giving the guys her sister dates what they want and therefore starts getting more attention than her sister at long last. For example, she'll give her sister's date a blowjob in the bathroom before their date. The older sister is oblivious to all of this.

I'm going back on forth on whether to make the younger sister vindictive or not, and how vindictive to make her. For example, does she jack the boyfriend off and have him cum on her sister's pillow?

What I'm also hoping for is some more scenarios and instances of what the younger sister can do with the boyfriends. I have a few ideas in mind, but would love to hear some more. If she's vindictive, that also opens up a lot of more twisted avenues.

So I guess:

1) Should she be vindictive or not?
2) What sort of things could she do with the boyfriends?

I really think that only you can answer the question about being vindictive. It's all about how you see the sisters. What kind of stories you like, etc.

I'm a 'happy-ever-after writer, some writers are all the way on the other end and might have the little sister pour boiling oil on her older sister's face.

But, to try to offer something that might kick your own ideas back to life;

The little sister slowly co-opts all of big sisters guys. She's a wild one and when it come to sex there aren't many no-go activities. Over time, she's got all the guys working with her to sabotage big sister. They'll arrange a date — then cancel at the last minute … only to be seen out and about with little sister later that night. At some point the gossip gets back to big sister, "I didn't know your sister Betty was dating Ralph, etc.

As her dating life fizzles, older sister falls into a funk — no one wants her anymore. She doesn't know why until the gossip gets back to her. She's not the desired sister — she's too much of a prude, etc.

This is me being happy-ever-after; The two sisters finally have the big talk. Tears are shed, apologies are made and big sister finally breaks through the barrier that was preventing her from enjoying wild sex — she was repressed sexually, too much self imposed restrictions on what "good girls" are supposed to do, or??? In the end, little sister saves her and coaches her on how to be a hot item with the guys —they become a team — the hottest dates on campus!

 

[writer4hire69]

I really think that only you can answer the question about being vindictive. It's all about how you see the sisters. What kind of stories you like, etc.

I'm a 'happy-ever-after writer, some writers are all the way on the other end and might have the little sister pour boiling oil on her older sister's face.

But, to try to offer something that might kick your own ideas back to life;

The little sister slowly co-opts all of big sisters guys. She's a wild one and when it come to sex there aren't many no-go activities. Over time, she's got all the guys working with her to sabotage big sister. They'll arrange a date — then cancel at the last minute … only to be seen out and about with little sister later that night. At some point the gossip gets back to big sister, "I didn't know your sister Betty was dating Ralph, etc.

As her dating life fizzles, older sister falls into a funk — no one wants her anymore. She doesn't know why until the gossip gets back to her. She's not the desired sister — she's too much of a prude, etc.

This is me being happy-ever-after; The two sisters finally have the big talk. Tears are shed, apologies are made and big sister finally breaks through the barrier that was preventing her from enjoying wild sex — she was repressed sexually, too much self imposed restrictions on what "good girls" are supposed to do, or??? In the end, little sister saves her and coaches her on how to be a hot item with the guys —they become a team — the hottest dates on campus!

Thanks for the well-thought-out response! I like a lot of what you've outlined there though I sort of have the story going in a different direction. I'm angling it that the younger sister doesn't date the guys. She just enjoys having them sexually without her sister knowing. It's like she doesn't want to date them, just wants to get the attention away from her sister (who always had it previously) using sex.

That said, I like the concept of the older sister's dating life fizzling. Her noticing guys are more into her younger sister suddenly. I'm also a fan of happy endings. Though my ultimate ending can be rather unusual, generally speaking, I like all parties being happy in the end in some way. So, I wouldnt want this to end with the older sister lonely and depressed.

In terms of vindictiveness, that's a fair point. I like both ways it can go but I am leaning more toward vindictive. Though, I should clarify that I'm not talking about to the point of pouring boiling oil or anything like that. It's more like, jerking a guy off onto her sister's stuff, or spitting cum into her sister's lotion. More things like that. I often find myself drawn to weird things like that. I'm not sure what else along those lines I can do however.

That's sort of where I"m really hoping for suggestions as well. What sort of sexual acts can the younger sister get into with these guys without the older sister knowing? How risky do they get while the sister is home? What other type of "vindictive" stuff does the younger sister do?

 

[Carnevil9]

I'm with yukonnights on this one: I like symmetry and happy endings. I would have the younger sister being more of a "guardian angel" for her older sister than anything else. She doesn't want the dates to go home unsatisfied, so she blows them, jerks them off, and more, to keep them happy. And she is perfectly happy herself getting the sex without having to date at all.

I would have Big Sis eventually find out, and eventually come around to becoming a sexual being, under the tender tutelage of Younger Sis. Maybe they would even become lovers themselves, but of course that's a very different direction for the story to go.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

I see this differently. Prudie does not seem like the kind of girl who dates, rather is selective. Dude gets blown, then enjoys the date, ala "something about mary". Why would he want to end this? As time goes on, Pudie expands her boundaries, comes to little sister for advice.