Looking for honest feed back for some stories

[Incognito_man]

Hi all I've already written a few stories but I'd like some feed back on them, don't be afraid to be blunt

 

[Incognito_man]

Hi all I've already written a few stories but I'd like some feed back on them, don't be afraid to be blunt

Link to all my work: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6295823&page=submissions