Looking for Gay Fiction Editor

[niniku18]

I have posted a few stories now, but I believe I have some ongoing issues with grammar and clarity.

Would anyone be able to help proofread a few select stories (which have already been published here), and help me to polish them up?


Thanks!

 

[alohadave]

I'm not gay, but I'll look them over if you want to let me know which ones you want checked.

 

[KeithD]

I read your most recent story, "Coffee Shop Mix-Up." A few mistakes but I didn't see any grammar issues to worry about and the syntax was clear enough (your specific questions). I don't know what the "mix-up" is in the story and the ending is lame--the one character has already graphically declared he's going to do what the other character asks for in the close-out line. So, the story ending could be stronger. That's not a problem of grammar or clarity, though.

 

[niniku18]

GoldenCompulsion has helped me. Thank you everyone.